Great chapter dude, apart from some spelling errors I found it a bit...well fast, maybe its just the way I read it but it dosn't detract from the quality of the story so don't worry.
Oddly enough the characters I feel the most sympathy for are Twilight because she found out that she wasn't Spike's best friend and the castle maids because one screw up involving a lack of fresh towels in Spike's guest room will equal death.
As for Blueblood, you kind of know he's dead, if this fic has a body count, he'll be one of the first to go.
That is an interesting idea for Spike's parents and it makes a lot of sense when you think about it. They probably are friends of Celestia and gave her Spike's egg before they went to sleep for a hundred years and Celestia gave them a safe place to do so. And the date on Celestia's calendar is the day they should wake up if my guess is right. I'm getting quite intrigued by this side of the story and can't wait to see what you come up with.
3022399 thanks man, this chapter seemed fast to me also; I had to write on my phone in the hospital. also, your jack black profile pic always makes me laugh.
I'm really enjoying this story. Some minnor mistakes but nothing too important. Celestia's creepiness is an amazing show to watch. I really thought she was going to trow Blueblood into the dungeons (at least) or something. What seems to be out of place, or at least to me is Discord behavior. You said he's been reformed. Cool. But why does he care so much to "Understand" or "Make sense out of Celestia"? I don't lnow. The fact that he now uses his powers for good shouldn't necessarily mean that he also now actually cares to know how and why things happen as they do.
But like I said, maybe that's just me. Everything else I love. And I can't wait to read more. Except for Twilight aparently being also gay...
So that circled date on the calander does that mean that spikes parents will wake up and celestia will tell them that she loves spike and have him for a king?
Still laughing, I think you need an editor or proof reader, grammar mistakes here and there in the story.
wow celestia is kinda scarying the heck outa of me
pls give continue
Great chapter dude, apart from some spelling errors I found it a bit...well fast, maybe its just the way I read it but it dosn't detract from the quality of the story so don't worry.
Just saying but don't make spike's mother bigger than his father.
This is Spike's rage right here.
Oddly enough the characters I feel the most sympathy for are Twilight because she found out that she wasn't Spike's best friend and the castle maids because one screw up involving a lack of fresh towels in Spike's guest room will equal death.
As for Blueblood, you kind of know he's dead, if this fic has a body count, he'll be one of the first to go.
Also this.
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Replace with a demi-goddess and a ton of Spike paraphernalia.
Yay new chapter
That is an interesting idea for Spike's parents and it makes a lot of sense when you think about it. They probably are friends of Celestia and gave her Spike's egg before they went to sleep for a hundred years and Celestia gave them a safe place to do so. And the date on Celestia's calendar is the day they should wake up if my guess is right. I'm getting quite intrigued by this side of the story and can't wait to see what you come up with.
3022412
A fourth of it
3022410 don't worry, I wont.
3022545 I know right? I don't see why most spike parents fic writers never used that idea before.
3022399 thanks man, this chapter seemed fast to me also; I had to write on my phone in the hospital. also, your jack black profile pic always makes me laugh.
3022412 you're 100% correct.
this looks promising
3022690 Cool!
What do I win?
3022562 How about now?
3023320 you win... 300 bits!
3023476 HELL YEAH!
3023320
About a three quarters
3025024 3 quarters?
Promise me you'll finish this... please?
3025205
Hello
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3025205 i'm already working on the third chapter. and I will complete this.
3025048
Don't worry. His rage is only matched by Faust-Hulk.
3025048 How about three pennies?
3025238 True.
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3025259
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3025263
Indeed
3025276 dat face is priceless!
3025364 I'm glad you like it.
3025355
3025364
I know
3025400
So, ever got scared that you laughed at yourself?
3025428 Maybe.
3025468
I can proudly say that I have done that
3025428 that has happened too me to.
3025520
Indeed
3025526>>3025520 Likewise.
Maybe you caught me in the perfect mood, but this is one of the creepiest things I've read.
And all I did was finish the description. That picture doesn't help.
I must read this!
3025878 you must!
I'm really enjoying this story. Some minnor mistakes but nothing too important.
Celestia's creepiness is an amazing show to watch. I really thought she was going to trow Blueblood into the dungeons (at least) or something. What seems to be out of place, or at least to me is Discord behavior. You said he's been reformed. Cool. But why does he care so much to "Understand" or "Make sense out of Celestia"? I don't lnow. The fact that he now uses his powers for good shouldn't necessarily mean that he also now actually cares to know how and why things happen as they do.
But like I said, maybe that's just me. Everything else I love. And I can't wait to read more.
Except for Twilight aparently being also gay...
Prince bluprick? Thats funny as hell! And so is this story! Im looking forward to more updates.
DARKPHANTOM13
So that circled date on the calander does that mean that spikes parents will wake up and celestia will tell them that she loves spike and have him for a king?
That would be scary.
I repeat.
3032217 that song fits this perfectly.
hope theres moar soon
moooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrr