• Member Since 12th Jun, 2013
  • offline last seen May 18th, 2016

NightShader


Suggest who you want to see next in the Heartwarming moment series in my Blog.

T
Source

You are anonymous the Lone human in equestria. After a short trip to the market some awkward stuff happens and you end up taking care of Fluttershy. Lets see how this turns out.

My third story in the Hearwarming moment stories.
Who's Next?

Chapters (1)
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!
Comments ( 34 )

pretty cute, if there was more chapters like a series..that would be good too. but so far i like it. :twilightsmile:

I probably not mention the human's you name it really isn't a name anyway. Anon is more a universal reference to a human in Equestria where the name is not important, typically in a2nd person perspective.

The assumption often being that Anon is the reader

Otherwise, cute story. Always enjoy some Shy romancing someone else.

Now can you please borrow me a cook book
Now can you please let's me borrow a cook book
i think that sounds better
oh and well done

2907525 I agree on

Let me borrow a cook book

But which of these 5 stories was your favourite?

Sweet story. I wouldn´t mind a sequel or more chapters. :yay:

2907536
what is your favourite story of the 5 I have written atm?

2907538
You're specificaly searching for more fluttershy action?
maybe an epilogue orso...

2907533 I can never choose which one I really love, you done very well that is true, let's go with :twilightsmile: next to be done whit the mane6

2907544 well, I´m quite new to this site. I found some really sweet stories (not especially fluttershy related) but yeah, I wouldn´t mind something like that. :twilightsmile:

2907550 if you liked :fluttershysad: and are left hungering for more you should read the rest of the series to.

JBL
JBL #12 · Jul 21st, 2013 · · 7 ·

It was okay, typos drove me insane.

I found it to be good, usually I'm not a Fluttershy fan, but this was well done. :moustache:

Gah, why did they just forget Elizabeak? She's all alone somewhere in this horrible storm. How can Fluttershy just get over it and feel nice? :fluttershyouch: Unrealistic! But still sweet :pinkiehappy:

3016969
:rainbowlaugh: Now that you mention it.

I´m sure elizabeaks fine. Last time she ran away she was only nearly killed...

:twilightoops:

3016978 I was actually kinda sad about Elizabeak. The way Fluttershy says "I couldn't find Elizabeak" makes it sound like she thinks Elizabeak's gone already and gives up. :fluttercry: If I were you I'd totally edit in a little snippet about how they find Elizabeak at the cottage. :fluttershysad:

3017021
Maybe in an epilogue...:trixieshiftleft:

3017060 The story of Elizabeak needs to be resolved! :raritydespair:

If your like me. Wait a minute I'M INZANE.

Poor Applejack. I know Anon was embarrassed but that seemed a little harsh. But enjoyed the story and how flutteryshy kept asking anon to kiss her.

so awesome.. too dam awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

sequel plox!

also nerf irelia

So, these stories are basically here to emulate our sexual fantasies?
... I am completely okay with that.

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY
GOOOOOOOOOOOD YOB MAN
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

Aww. Can I just say that the level of adorableness in this story is impossible to measure by any human means? There is soo much that I love about this story. First off, I've been a huge Fluttershy fan since episode 1 so I'm happy to read anything where she's one of the main characters. Secondly, the humor regarding the misunderstanding between Anon and Applejack was hilarious. :rainbowlaugh: I was laughing my ass off as I read that portion. Speaking of Anon, thirdly, choosing not to give the main character a real name was a wise move as it gives the reader a vicarious sense of experiencing the story being told making it feel not only relatable but believable also. And finally the emotion in the story was perfect. I could literally feel every emotion the more I read of the story. I'm a writer myself and understand the importance of developing characters that you feel you can relate to on an emotional level. This whole thing was very expertly handled. Well done. /) :yay:

this level of cuteness has got to be illegal, heh heh

Wait... What about Elizabeak?!
If that storm could throw Fluttershy around like that then imagine what it'll do to the chicken.
Oh god. :pinkiegasp:

The scene with Anon and AJ...that was so good! :rainbowlaugh:

But the cuteness towards the end was very endearing. :yay:

"No no of course not, you have the strongest backside I’ve ever seen." You say not even slightly noticing how awkward that sounded.

Then you notice she starts blushing. Wait a minute...Ah crap.
akward...
"I-I mean the strongest legs I've ever seen. I wasn't saying you have a tight flank."

Offensive language detected. Processing...Processing... Complete.
getting worse....
"Well you do, but that’s not what I meant by it..."

Dafuq brain!! Why are you doing this to me!
aaaand.. total embarrassment

Login or register to comment
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!