Yay
Heartwarming moment with Fluttershy.
At top speed you were running through the streets of Ponyville. There was a huge storm scheduled for tonight so you had to do some last minute shopping. On your way there you see Fluttershy looking around with a worried look on her face.
"Hey flutters." you say as quiet as possible, still making her flinch in the process.
"Oh, um hi Anonymous." she responds.
"Is there something wrong?"
"Elizabeak ran away again, I’m worried she might hurt herself." she says with a very downed look on her face.
"Don’t worry, Elizabeak isn't an average chicken. She knows how to care for herself." You say hoping to cheer her up, you actually had no idea if what you just said was true.
"I guess you’re right, but I'm still going to try and find her." she says with a quiet voice.
"Okay, guess I’ll see you later then." You wave your hand and start walking towards the market again.
Upon arrival at the market you realize you have completely forgotten what you wanted to buy. That and it seems everypony has already started packing away their stuff. You decide to just buy donuts at Sugarcube corner instead, and maybe borrow a cook book at the library too. You start wandering of to the Sugarcube Corner.
You arrive at your destination. And swing the door open, at which you could hear the bell ringing. After a few moments Mr. Cake walks over behind the counter.
"Hello Anon what can I do for ya."?
"Hi Mr. Cake I'll have 4 donuts please."
"Sure thing, what flavor are you looking for?" He responds while turning around towards the donuts.
"2 natural and 2 chocolate donuts please,"
"That will be 4 bits please."
You give him the bits and you both say goodbye after you start walking towards the door. Exiting the Sugarcube corner you resume your walk towards the library, only to see applejack struggling with a cart that is obviously way to full with apples, you also notice that her brother isn't with her.
"Hey applejack, why isn't Big Macintosh helping you with the cart?" You ask curiously.
"He's been awfully sick the past couple a days so I’ve been buckin 'n carryin these apples all by ma self."
"You sure you don’t need any help with that?"
"Are you implyin that I’m too weak?" She responds notably irritated at your statement..
"No no of course not, you have the strongest backside I’ve ever seen." You say not even slightly noticing how awkward that sounded.
Then you notice she starts blushing. Wait a minute...Ah crap.
"I-I mean the strongest legs I've ever seen. I wasn't saying you have a tight flank."
Offensive language detected. Processing...Processing... Complete.
"Well you do, but that’s not what I meant by it..."
Dafuq brain!! Why are you doing this to me!
"I still have things to do, bye AJ!" You run away as fast as you can. You've never felt so embarrassed in your whole life. After a while you notice that you’ve been running away in the wrong direction, away from the library. You turn around and start walking back hoping she wouldn't think too much of it. The cart is still there when you arrive but without Applejack. Strange…
You knock on the library door and patiently wait for it to magically open as it usually does. When it does open however you are confronted with twilight standing next to Applejack. Fuck.
"Hi Anon, you came here for Applejack?" She asks while giving you a wink.
"What? No why would you-... Applejack told you?!"
"Yes she told me everything." twilight says patting, a now blushing Applejack on the back.
"Well I just came for a good cook book." You say trying to change the subject.
"Applejack is a very good baker y'know. Want her to help you?" She says with a big grin.
"Okay enough is enough. I never meant to say that stuff in the first place. I’m not interested in Applejack. She's just a friend." You say hoping that the waves of embarrassment would stop flooding you.
"Now can you please let me borrow me a cook book so I can take my leave before the storm comes?" you ask. Suddenly Applejack storms out of the library screaming she totally forgot about the storm. Heh, turns out you did something right after all.
"Of course just follow me." twilight says while waving you over with a hoof.
After you finally got the book you were looking for the storm has already started.
"Ah DAMNIT!" Even though you're screaming you could barely hear your own voice through the hard winds, the rain and the thunder. You were about to turn around but suddenly notice something yellow being carried by the wind. Wait was that? Was that Fluttershy!?! The moment that thought flowed through your mind, the object smacks into a nearby tree. You quickly run over to see that it was indeed Fluttershy who flew against the tree. She is still conscious and was standing up again. Suddenly you were temporarily blinded by bright light and loud thunder that roared through the skies. She curls herself up under the tree in fear and is slightly shivering.
Quickly you ran over to her, taking of your jacket in the process and wrapping it around her.
"Are you ok Fluttershy?" You ask fearing she might have injured herself.
"I'm fine... But I couldn't find Elizabeak…" She says looking up to you with fearful eyes.
You pick her up by carefully wrapping your arms around her. She obviously was very scared as she wrapped her hooves so tight around you, that you could barely breathe. You start to run to her cottage. Once you arrived there you put her down, but in the process of doing so you notice she winces a bit when she put her hind hoof down. You pick her up again and put her down on the couch this time.
"Is there something wrong with your hoof?"
"I think I might have sprained it. But don’t worry I’m sure it will be fine." She says trying to assure you it’s all good.
"Can I take a look at anyway?" You ask persistent.
She nods and turns around for you to look at her hoof. Luckily it isn't all that bad. It’s just a bit bruised. You remember your mother used to kiss the bruised spots you had, and it would relieve some of the pain. Now that you mention it...It’s worth a try... you move closer and give the bruised spot a small kiss.
"Eep." she quickly turns around with a fierce blush on her face.
"I'm sorry, did I hurt you?"
"N-no but w-why did y-you do that?" She asks now calming down a bit.
"Back on earth, light injuries are often kissed by parents because they believe it relieves some of the pain." you explain.
"Oh w-well I-in that case. My front hoof... C-could you .I mean if you don't mind."
You know exactly what she wanted but you just stood there, with a mind blown look on your face. Does it actually relieves some of the pain?
"W-well you don’t have to of course." she whispers with a sad frown on her face. You can't reject that, and you know it.
"No it's fine Fluttershy I'd love to." You say leaning closer and placing another small kiss on her hoof.
"T-thank you." she whispers while looking deep in your eyes. You don't even seem to notice the trance she's in and just go on.
"Would you like some soup?" You ask.
"I don't want to be of any trouble, you helped me enough already." She says.
"You're not trouble at all, I just want to make you feel better. I can't stand seeing you sad, so soup it is?" It’s quiet for a moment but then she slowly nods her head.
Moments later you arrive with the soup in your hands. You sit down next to her, and set the soup on the table. When you wanted to sit again you notice she is still wet from all the rain.
"Oh my, you're still wet. I'll grab a towel hold on."
Before she could respond you were already searching for it. After a few minutes you finally find one and return to the couch. All the soup was gone! You smile at your cooking skills and sit down next to her again.
"Thanks Anonymous." she says.
"You can call me Anon you know, and by the way I'm not done yet." You say while smiling at her.
You slowly stroke the towel through her mane a few times. Then proceed to rub her tummy with it, alighting a few giggles every once and a while, you couldn't help but slowly break down on the inside, you've never seen something that cute before. Next up you carefully pass it through her wings, figuring they might be really sensitive. You end by removing the last drops of her hooves and tail.
She looked all fuzzy and adorable now. Suddenly she carefully rests her head on your chest, nuzzling into it and slightly shivering a bit. CUTENESS OVERLOAD! You quickly put your arm around her. After a while you notice she starts slowly closing her eyes. And after a few minutes she's fast asleep. You decide its best if you take her to bed and carefully lift her up, moving her towards and up the stairs in to her room. There you slowly lay her on the bed and tuck her in. She opens her eyes half way when you release her and whispers "I think my head bumped the tree as well."
You know that wasn't true, but you did know what she wanted.
"You could have just asked for a goodnight kiss you know." You say grinning. She turns bright red but smiles as well.
You lean in close and plant a kiss on her forehead.
“Goodnight Fluttershy.” You were about to turn around but you were stopped by her.
"Y-you don't have to go. I-I mean it’s fine if you stay here with m-me." She says with begging eyes. Argh. How can she?! CONTROL YOURSELF.
"Don’t worry, I'll be downstairs on the couch if you need me." You say while once again trying turning around.
"Please?" She says slowly.
"I-I'd love to but I shouldn't, please don't make this too hard for me..." You could see her sadden the moment you said that. You move in closer for a comfort hug, clearly she misunderstood your intentions as she quickly wraps her wings around you and tosses the blanket around both of you as she swiftly pulls you into her bed.
"Promise me you won't go." she says hugging you again, and looking deep into your eyes. Her full body was pressed against yours as she held you very tightly. Movement was impossible as she was surprisingly strong.
"I promise." you say, knowing she won't take no for an answer.
"Goodnight Anon."
She starts leaning closer and closer to you. Until it really starts getting awkward.
"Fluttershy what are you doing?" You ask now a bit uncomfortable as to how close she was to your face.
"I never got my goodnight kiss." She whispers in your ear.
Wait that means she was going to-. You are interrupted by the warm sensation on of her lips pressing against yours, as you can almost feel jolts of electricity bolting from there through your whole body.
The moment ends and she turns around pressing her body against yours. You take the hint and wrap your arms around her.
"Goodnight Fluttershy."
You had no idea what to think of what just happened. It seems your mind could only scream one thing.
Yay.
The End?!?
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I probably not mention the human's you name it really isn't a name anyway. Anon is more a universal reference to a human in Equestria where the name is not important, typically in a2nd person perspective.
The assumption often being that Anon is the reader
Otherwise, cute story. Always enjoy some Shy romancing someone else.
Now can you please borrow me a cook book
Now can you please let's me borrow a cook book
i think that sounds better
oh and well done
2907525 I agree on
But which of these 5 stories was your favourite?
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oh yes have this
Sweet story. I wouldn´t mind a sequel or more chapters.
2907536
what is your favourite story of the 5 I have written atm?
2907538
You're specificaly searching for more fluttershy action?
maybe an epilogue orso...
2907533 I can never choose which one I really love, you done very well that is true, let's go with
next to be done whit the mane6
2907544 well, I´m quite new to this site. I found some really sweet stories (not especially fluttershy related) but yeah, I wouldn´t mind something like that.
2907550 if you liked
and are left hungering for more you should read the rest of the series to.
It was okay, typos drove me insane.
Yay!
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I found it to be good, usually I'm not a Fluttershy fan, but this was well done.
Gah, why did they just forget Elizabeak? She's all alone somewhere in this horrible storm. How can Fluttershy just get over it and feel nice?
Unrealistic! But still sweet 
3016969
Now that you mention it.
I´m sure elizabeaks fine. Last time she ran away she was only nearly killed...
3016978 I was actually kinda sad about Elizabeak. The way Fluttershy says "I couldn't find Elizabeak" makes it sound like she thinks Elizabeak's gone already and gives up.
If I were you I'd totally edit in a little snippet about how they find Elizabeak at the cottage. 
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Maybe in an epilogue...
3017060 The story of Elizabeak needs to be resolved!
If your like me. Wait a minute I'M INZANE.
Poor Applejack. I know Anon was embarrassed but that seemed a little harsh. But enjoyed the story and how flutteryshy kept asking anon to kiss her.
so awesome.. too dam awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sequel plox!
also nerf irelia
So, these stories are basically here to emulate our sexual fantasies?
... I am completely okay with that.
cool
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY
GOOOOOOOOOOOD YOB MAN
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Cute
Aww. Can I just say that the level of adorableness in this story is impossible to measure by any human means? There is soo much that I love about this story. First off, I've been a huge Fluttershy fan since episode 1 so I'm happy to read anything where she's one of the main characters. Secondly, the humor regarding the misunderstanding between Anon and Applejack was hilarious.
I was laughing my ass off as I read that portion. Speaking of Anon, thirdly, choosing not to give the main character a real name was a wise move as it gives the reader a vicarious sense of experiencing the story being told making it feel not only relatable but believable also. And finally the emotion in the story was perfect. I could literally feel every emotion the more I read of the story. I'm a writer myself and understand the importance of developing characters that you feel you can relate to on an emotional level. This whole thing was very expertly handled. Well done. /) 
this level of cuteness has got to be illegal, heh heh
Wait... What about Elizabeak?!
If that storm could throw Fluttershy around like that then imagine what it'll do to the chicken.
Oh god.
The scene with Anon and AJ...that was so good!
But the cuteness towards the end was very endearing.
YAY!!!
"No no of course not, you have the strongest backside I’ve ever seen." You say not even slightly noticing how awkward that sounded.
Then you notice she starts blushing. Wait a minute...Ah crap.
akward...
"I-I mean the strongest legs I've ever seen. I wasn't saying you have a tight flank."
Offensive language detected. Processing...Processing... Complete.
getting worse....
"Well you do, but that’s not what I meant by it..."
Dafuq brain!! Why are you doing this to me!
aaaand.. total embarrassment
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a family feast!!
That was a cute fanfic and really liked the cuteness in it
DAMN FLUTTERHEATED!