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WARNING Anon in Equestria [HiE] You X Lyra Heartstrings.


You are Anonymous the lone human in equestria. BonBon and Lyra are the closest friends you have, although Lyra might want to be more than just friends...


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Story number eleven in the heartwarming moment series.

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Comments ( 32 )

Another good Heartwarming moment in the books.

In all honesty, I think your getting better! :pinkiehappy:

i think you need a proofreader or editor or something. i'll help if you need it.

Nothin' like a bowl o' cereal and an shit-ton o' mindless fluffiness to kick-start the day

YES!, finally!, thank you!

Been waiting for another one of these. Really glad to see an update from you.:heart:

Heartwarming.
Seriously.
These are good.
Don't stop.
I like these.
Bit of errors.
Otherwise, fine.
Don't stop.
Or the next time you see me, it will be your last.:pinkiecrazy:

I don't like the look on Lyra's face here...

Aww loved the story. :ajsmug:

Lyra's on of my fav ponies so this was just icing on the cake.:raritywink: You told the story really well too, not to mushy, but still touching. I think that's because your character is actually aware of how Lyra may feel. :twilightsmile:

I always love your stories

5107328 Deffinatly. I can't really find any fault in his latest work other than a few grammar problems. Personally, I think relationships of the romantic type should be drawn out and developed, and so I normally hate one-shot romance tags, there so fake. But with the foreknowledge that they already know each other, this work successfully surpasses that roadblock. I nice little read. Still, I would like to see more work done on you chapter based stuff.

welp that's it i'm your new follower


stay classy:moustache:

The ending went way too quickly. Good story, by the way.

I wish I was actually there and hold her in my arms and She asked how you liked it I'd say......she's a fucking PROFESSIONAL!!!

amazing, great fic man :pinkiehappy:

It's hard to write in first person female perspective)

So true..:applejackunsure:

Awesome story dude. Looking forward to more of your fics :pinkiehappy:

Did you never wake up?

Edit this beast!!

That aside, liked it, very cute!

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Nop I never woke up after that day :rainbowlaugh:

I wrote it all in a few hours that night and just left it like that. I really hope it isn't too bad, I've actually never read this through after the night I wrote it... A little late now:twilightsheepish:...

6649758 it's got Heart and that's what counts the most. Lyra is my fav background pony so it's hard to go wrong with her for me

I really like these stories.
Can you do one with Derpy?

I think my favorite part of this story is the fact that anon isnt the classic trope of being a dim witted idiot who cant get a clue. Good job, it was a enjoyable read.

Could you give links to the rest of the stories? I don't want to read this is it's number eleven and haven't I read the ones before it, obviously, since I'm asking for links.

Dan

Moondancer, please?

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