Diary of the Night

by CalebH

Reunion - Chapter 2

C
That was unfair. I… I know you have changed; how could you not? It has been a thousand years, everything is changed. Where there was once a capitol there is a forest. A thousand years; and I was a rock floating through the void all that time. Everything is changed but me.

I am still hurting. All that pain and jealousy and anger were mere moments ago to me even if it was a thousand years for everypony else. I will not return to that nightmare, but I went there for a reason and that reason is still here. I drove you away and I locked you out in my pride. I will not do that again.

It has been a thousand years and I have at least learned this one lesson.
-L

Author's Note:

Okay so you need at least 1000 words to publish so a good portion of what i have will go up immediately but I should be able to get it updated pretty often.

Comments

[Silver_Cloud123]

MAKE BIGGER CHAPTERS........plz

[demanji]

un-capitalized I in there

[defunct321]

I drove you away and i locked you out in my pride.

I drove you away and I locked you out in my pride.

[CalebH]

4817823 got it, thanks

[an1979]

Small nitpick:

Where there was once a capitol there is a forest.

Capitol is a building (from The Capitol(ium) ) you probably want to use one meaning "city" (capital) here.

[Concave_Prism]

4948594 but shouldn't capitol fit seeing as there is only the old castle there, which is probably what luna's refering to.