Should we I put my diary on public display so that all of Equestria may view it? Perhaps Twilight will keep it in her library for all to see. Even with Pinkie Pie’s “Pinkie Promise” that she did not read a word(even the ones she wrote)we I am still frustrated with how often our my diary finds itself in another’s hoofs. It does not help that they see fit to add their own thoughts and this is compounded by the permanence spell Discord has placed over it. Nothing that is written may be erased and to destroy the book would cause untold collateral damage.
We I am not sure that we may BAH! Perhaps if a certain sister of mine or a castle full of servants, guards, and staff had informed me that Discord’s work had reverted my linguistic habits so that they were as old as Canterlot itself(The old unicorn capitol, mind you, I am several times older than the current capitol.) I may have been able to remedy the situation long before I made a foal of myself in front of my subjects.
Even now in all my frustration the presence of these ponies soothes us me. It is a balm that seems to cure every wound. It was these ponies who freed me. They are but children still, yet it was these who took up The Elements. They freed me from our my madness where Sister could only imprison me.
Pinkie Pie offers her friendship without reserve, in her own way she was the first to offer it to me. Is such constant exuberance truly in her nature or is it merely a façade hiding a much darker truth? I do not know which truth I fear more.
The darkness such a mask would hide would destroy this mare in the end, but for to truly be so full of life and innocence… I fear for her, for all of them. I have seen so much evil; I have been the cause of most of it.
Ironic that I should want to protect the fillies that defeated me so easily. They defeated two of the greatest evils Equestria has ever known; their friendship has cleansed me of a madness that brought Equestria to the brink of self-destruction. Yet I cannot help but fear what a dark turn of events may do to them.
Celestia will be happy to know that Twilight remained loyal to her despite my best offer, it is a shame that such a prodigy will be wasted on a teacher who only sees fit to give lessons by proxy.
-L
whew... Sorry this chapter took so long Life is really catching up to me right now and school is not really helping me find more free time. I really don't know when I'll be able to write the next chapter. hopefully it will be worth the wait.
*Now with edit's thanks for the catches guys and sorry it took so long for me to get around to fixing them.
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(And, as usual, Luna shows absolutely no respect for Celestia in this... ... Celestia's the one that created a utopia in Luna's absence. She's the one who mounted a failed rebellion against the ponies she swore to protect, and wanted to bring about eternal night, which would have killed most ponies through starvation, with the possible exception of her precious night ponies... ... Hypocrisy is something that I have trouble standing. She and Celey need to sit down with a freaking counselor and talk things out or something, because Luna's got the same kind of attitude it seems that led her to becoming Nightmare in the first place.)
Wait, what? I don't recall Luna ever tempting Twilight.
The word is PRODIGY. PROGENY, is a term for offspring, PRODIGY is a term meaning a gifted student.
I would give another like for this chapter if I could. Other ponies writing in your diary? There might be something deep there.
Hi! I'm Pinkie Pie, and I wrote this diary entry just for you!!
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Or does he mean Progeny? Think about it.
That?
Very good chapter as always by the way, keep it up!
3414850 Luna can charitably be described as adversarial and her methods for dealing with problems usually involve lethal force. Celestia is the other extreme she has refined being nonconfrontational to an art form. Instead of confronting a problem head on she will manipulate events around the problem so that it solves itself. Having a sitdown with a therapist would be the best way to resolve the issues between them but it is not their way. Where they are at neither of these characters would consider sitting down and talking it out with a counselor an option.
3415037 It didn't happen on camera but it would make sense that my version of Luna, who had no respect for Celestia's hooves off approach to teaching, would offer Twilight a position as her apprentice.
3415107 3418915 3421267 Thanks for the catches guys, I did mean prodigy not progeny, that is a premise for someone else's fanfic.
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That was very eloquently put. And makes me want to shake them both, lock them in a room, and tell them to talk until they work things out. Not that that'd work either, but it'd make me feel better. Ultimately that I get angry at either of them is a sign that you're doing your job and tugging on my hear strings, so well done. What kills me most is the complete lack of respect for the other's methods though... We hear this from Luna's mouth, but it seems Celestia has never approved of Luna's head-on collision tactics. Celestia's methods are, evidence taken, perfect for creating a harmonious stable Kingdom. And Luna's are perfect for waging war against an enemy... I just wish they could respect the other's roles in things...
What offer did Luna make, I wonder?
Yes, I'm so glad to see her go back to normal English. I like the royal we a little bit, but it does get old quickly.
Luna actually tried to offer Twilight an apprenticeship? I'm startled she even thought Twilight would accept, but I suppose when you're not wholly in the know...
I can't help but think Celestia wouldn't approve of the move.