Twilight and Fluttershy realize they each love their Princesses much more than platonically...
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wow. that is all
this will turn... 'interesting' no doubt...
Yay! Looks like Fluttershy is going to be a very happy pony soon!
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Ahahaha of all the poni I expected to stun speechless, you were not one of them.
MISSION.
ACCOMPLISHED.
246441
Odds are high.
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Odds are REALLY high.
246444 I have to admit, I did not see Luna courting Fluttershy harder than Fluttershy was courting Luna. Maybe I read Progress too much but I had always pictured her as being more shy and reserved... but the way you write her just resonates. I not only buy it, its part of my headcanon now.
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I am honored. Seriously, there have been a couple real standout points in my (short) experience putting writing on the internet, and shaping another writer's headcanon? Easily in the top three.
((One of the others involves an anonymous Fandom Secret confessing that they learned more from one of my fics than from all their Sex Ed classes, so you are in good company .))
Smooth, Luna, smooth.
Nice, the chapters just keep getting better.
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Passionate, for sure. A smoother operator? Well, let's just say her skills have atrophied a bit...
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I aim to please! :D
Okay- Now I'm scared.
Tell me Luna doesn't buy the 'Banana Split' or something - that would be some weird, creepy symbolism right there.
Although, now you have me wondering - who will be the dominatrix in this relationship? It really could go either way.
- Midnight Specter
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Lemme figure out how to phrase this to the most exacting rules-lawyer standards...
"I do not believe that either of the ponies in this relationship would identify as dominant or submissive in sexual terms."
Yeah, that seems suitably airtight from here.
246576 Perhaps, but she is using them on Fluttershy, after all ...
I'm liking where this is going.
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Won't be the last thing she uses on Fluttershy, either.
...frig there isn't a Luna emote. I guess I'll fall back on vaguely-sultry AJ, as such--
Luna on a sex shop?
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Luna and Fluttershy in a sexshop. I have seen Everything.
Was a Twilight "Yes" moment on Luna?
Regardless, still loving the story (Also largely enjoyed your explanation on the "Dat plot" line from the bonus part), so, as usual, looking forward to whatever crazy shenanigans will happen next. =3
"Doom. There was nothing left but doom.
Horrible, blushing, stammering doom."
Uuh, yeah I'd like to order some of this horrible, blushing stammering doom. . to go please.
OMG I almost had to stop reading when Luna saw where Fluttershy was. SO Awkward!
I bet all my bits that Luna's purchase will make Fluttershy squeak in fear! ... or passion.
I sense the emotions and in the future.
Along with serious
Wow, I did NOT expect Luna to be the one to frequent those 'adult stores'. I figured Celestia would'v been the one to do that, but with a disguise.
But I am somehow not surprised that she kept her cool.
And she didn't even seem to CARE about being seen entering the adult shop while there were other ponies around. Hopefully the rich snobs of Canterlot don't try to ruin her and ridicule her and the two holders of the Elements of Harmony.
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Them doing so would require showing that they know what the place is-- It's unmarked, no sign, no name. So if they knew what it was, they would be admitting to precisely as much as what she has done-- Enter the shop.
When it comes to shutting down political bullshit slander attempts, it is very hard to beat somepony who marks your lifespan as a percentile of their own.
((And when it comes to Celestia frequenting this kind of shop... Well, sisters share plenty of hobbies.))
248253
Why not both?
247272
Would you like that in a bag or a box, sir/madam?
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Where we're going...
So true, Ariamaki, so true.
Boxes, Ariamaki. ..cause boxes are cool to hide in and snoop around
oh l-l-l-l-luna what are you doing i-in h-hhere, w-w-w-w-why are y-you l-l-ooking at me t-that w-way *eye's shrink to pinprics* this is gonna be interesting and luna's just getting started lol. fluttershy's in for a world of pleasure and joy. i wonder how twilights gonna get it on with celestia tho.
anyway no stars to give so i'll just give what i can outa five
D'awww, even in a sex shop, about as explicit a location as a location can get (though the chapter does handle it very tastefully), Luna and Fluttershy are absolutely adorable .
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I'm glad it's being handled well-- Because those are some recurring ponies, and this is most definitely a recurring location.
And if you think Fluttershy and Luna handled the place well, wait until the other couples start showing up...
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Well, you seem to have indicated the Celestia doesn't quite approve of Luna's affections towards Fluttershy, so I have to admit, just how she'll end up shopping there with Twilight alongside her should prove to be quite the interesting read. I look forward to it .
somehow i havn't read this yet...a mistake i just rectified!
and pervy, courting, akward luna shipped with shy,socially akward, scaredy cat Fluttershy? Coming out will be rather interesting for theese two!
Can't wait to see how you handle big pervert Molestia and Twi tho, because i serously doubt even a princess has the guts to outright get it on with her student without preface and or spoken consent, (not that Twilight would mind in all likelyhood) but likely years upon years or royal etiquette has her mind set to the equivilent of.
-meet mare
-get to know mare
-get consent
-oooooh yeeeeeah~
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Celestia Herself will explain that one when the time comes, in between bouts of berating the author for his chosen techniques. :3
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Expect your shipment in 4-8 meeks*.
*--Yes meeks. Shyness is now a measure of time.
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*Squees* Yay, as I said before, I can't wait to read it .
For now, however, I think I'll stop spamming your comment section (heh, sorry ), wish you a good night, and go make some dinner .
bwahahhahhahahahaha that was awesome luna is awesome .......ending hahaha was hilarious fantastic hahahahahhaha
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Nah, Luna has had more than her full of bananas, after spending all that time ON THE MOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN.
I love this story. You really write everyone so well. This was a great chapter, too.
for some reason it's fun to reread these and go because you know what's going to end up happening and you just get a grin like as you read it
I hate to necrocomment, but why do I imagine Matte as looking like Ariamaki's avatar...?
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I have absolutely no issue with necrocommentary, and will mention that (although I forget where) Matte has been art'd in one of the comment sections of a chapter he appeared in. Ariamaki looks like Ariamaki's avatar, however. :3
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she and nervous Luna doesn't really fit with Luna Eclipsed. Based on that one episode she seems forward, brash, confident and awkward. She is incredibly charismatic when she doesn't take the time to think about it(when she relaxes at the end of the episode she gets along well with the other ponies, whenever she makes an actual effort she screws it up horribly). I imagine her as having a silver tongue, but being, at present, in the habit of second guessing and falling back on formality due to her unfamiliarity with the present times. I also imagine that, if she could simply stop focusing on the differences, she would be better able to adapt to the present.
... of course, I read far too much into little details. For example, I see Fluttershy as actually being outgoing,but even more self-doubting than twilight, hence why she'll make a suggestion or ask a question and then immediately apologize or play it down.
729016 Shy can be incredibly outgoing, given the right impetus. Threaten her friends and she will stare down a dragon. Threaten little fillies and that cockatrice better not blink... She's even shown she is willing, given the right training, to look out for herself. She went a little overboard at first but hey, give a girl some credit, she had years of repression, that's a lot of built up aggression. And during the dragon migration... I was so proud of her, not backing down and insisting she did not want to go. I firmly believe that girl has a solid adamantium core of will she calls on when situations demand it.
Hmm, I'm not particularly well versed in some of the OC characters out there (I've known none of the ones brought up in this fic) but these shop owners... I see them as something different than they are.
Their discipline was admirable, even if they were... less versed in certain traditions than she would have liked. I think I can make a good guess as to what these traditions are
"Doom. There was nothing left but doom.
Horrible, blushing, stammering doom."
Doom Doom Doomie Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doomie Doomie Doom Doomie Doom~
-Grr's Doom Song
Have a mustache or five my dear friend:
so much good buildup i hope the clop is terrifying good.
until now:
adorkable Luna is adorkable. That is all.
246442 I realize this is a year old, but your picture is rather appropriate for a fic such as this.
"So what wares did you have in mind?"
"EVERYTHING!"
"oh Luuunna!! where have you been?"
fucking luna