Twilight and Fluttershy realize they each love their Princesses much more than platonically...
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606274
AWWW YEAHHHHHH
Found the missing words, I think. After flutter and sparkle are left with rarity.
Nervously, Twilight realized that she hadn’t seen Spike since he took away everypony’s dishes, and that she and Fluttershy were now alone with Rarity. "Trapped"
"such" an important meeting tonight... Why don’t the three of us go to the spa early this week, get ourselves tended to, and you two can tell me "everything"?”
Note: on my phone, being brief
606316
THANK YOU!
Actual intended text:
Nervously, Twilight realized that she hadn’t seen Spike since he took away everypony’s dishes, and that she and Fluttershy were now alone with Rarity. Trapped with Rarity. Trapped in a small room with Ponyville’s fifth-most notorious gossip hound, whose eyes now burned with a very particular hunger.
“Speaking of tending, given that there is apparently such an important meeting tonight... Why don’t the three of us go to the spa early this week, get ourselves tended to, and you two can tell me everything?”
PM me and we can discuss rewards.
To your request, second to last paragraph. About Twi and 'Shy being trapped, I'm pretty sure something got cut there. Especially since Rarity finishes talking (as noted by a ") when there wasn't an opening quote.
Anyway, awesome chapter as usual. Love the little things you do with Pinkie. XD
[Edit] Bah, late to finding that. That's what happens when I decide to finish that area in Diablo 3 instead of reading the moment I get the email saying you updated...
Found your missing words. Somehow, it looks like half of one sentence and maybe one whole one prior disappeared here:
and that she and Fluttershy were now alone with Rarity. Trapped
such an important meeting tonight... Why don’t the three of us go to the spa early this week, get ourselves tended to, and you two can tell me everything?”
I've got a reasonable idea of what Rarity would be saying in the missing section, but you might as well fill it in correctly for us.
Other than that, you've got another quality bit of story going. I especially loved Spike's reactions as he eavesdropped during his culinary operations. (And on that note, it's nice to see that he does branch out for some alternate cuisines. Twilight needs someone to encourage her to eat, and a broad variety of options can only help that. Who knows, dragons don't earn cutie marks, but I think that Chez Spike might very well be an interesting diversion for her number one assistant in years to come.
Nice touch with the hidden section of the library. I take it that's the adult-access only portion of the lending resources? After all, in what amounts to little over a one or two room operation, there has to be a way to keep foals from getting into books they aren't ready for undernding yet. (Although, I'm sure that there are allowances for the precocious talents and such. But definitely not something that you'd want the CMC to get their hooves on.)
Looking forward to the next installment, and likely the big announcement at the party.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
606333
Yup, got caught just before you commented. And thank you. :3
Awww yeah, dishing gossip at the spa.
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606338 the emperor demands moar of this win
217402 Wow, Ariamaki, you must write really fast.
Really, really fast.
'Cus this is on, like, chapter 30 and it's incomplete.
Fuck.
606387
Been writing it since November, uploading it since February, and still writing it as we speak.
606365
Gladly! Foals for the foal god! PLOT FOR THE PLOT THRONE!
Trapped in a small room with Ponyville’s fifth-most notorious gossip hound... If Rarity is 5th, who are the top 4?
this story....
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Shipping! Shipping Everywhere!
and I couldn't be happier!
*YOU GOT FEATURED!!! CONGRATS!!!!!*
god knows this story deserves it
Pinkie made the chapter perfect. Also the story got featured! Can't wait for the next chapter!
606411
Some (or all) of the Flower Sisters, Mrs. Cake, and I haven't decided the rest.
606430
Damn straight! :3
606433
Why thank you. :D And yeah, I am super-glad for the new "refeature" box, because when I first posted, it got featured... for all of six hours. :s
Rarity, you know what what you do.
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Wow, seems like you've still got loads to go. And the teasing...my god, the teasing.
I believe you have described what you are doing now in the perfect phrase earlier in your story. What was it again?
...ah, yes. Chapter 19.
"Endless, delicious torture."
606574
I would say something more coherent, but... shall suffice.
Incoming shenanigans.
So I woke up today to found your story updated Ariamaki and I must say after reading this latest installment you have made my day. I do not have the words it would seem to explain just how much I enjoy your story.
Also “Conga Lines and How I Think Like Them” Oh man that whole paragraph got a good few laughs from me.
when i saw this story update...my face could not have been happier
ahhh delicious torture, the best kind of torture.
606409 wait what?
HERITIC!
make moar or il kill you where you stand heritic
holy shit, this is the second story i know off that gets featured twice. also firstish... sort of.
dispite this im not going to read it till its completed, like i do with all my stories
209077 I'm new here, so how do i track?
wish ida got this good a reception with MY story, but NO...i got trolled :P
Saw this was updated and stopped drawing to read it, dam glad I did cos it was a right hoot.
Being stuck in a room alone with Rarity and having such gossip. 'Shy, Twi, RUN!!!Run! Or you'll be well-done!
Seriously Ariamaki, this is not going to end well, is it? Just please give me some excuse to bring back Mr. Troll's Predictions. Please?
Bahahahahaha! Great chapter, and loving Pinkies thought process. I imagine that's exactly how it would be... Well, not entirely true. My headcannon has it that she has innate access to the multiverse, and so is every stories Pinkie at once.
Something tells me that wasn't pink MANE caught in Dash's teeth.
Certainly not from her head anyway.
Also something tells me that Spike's fire breath would make him excellent at cooking Creme Brulee...
And if he accidently blew too hard the Princess would just get a free sample...
Actually I think THAT would come in handy for a different reason.
"Dear Princess Celestia
Here's your dinner
I heard Twilight giggling a little too loudly so I thought there is no way in Tartarus I'm going in there myself
Now if anybody needs me I'll be hanging out with the CMC
Spike
P.S Twilight your soundproofing spell is getting better, but still needs work.
606832
You will be waiting a WHILE then. Like, at this rate, upwards of a year. I'd suggest reading up to Chapter 28 or so, since I write it in discrete 'acts' so that you can stop there and feel content to wait for the next big chunk to be finished.
607045
There's a big star at the top of the fic page-- You hit that, then when it turns gold, mouse-over it and click "Email Updates".
607231
You should split the difference and draw things ABOUT it! :D
607781
Oooh, interesting. Although I wonder if any of the sugar granules would get burned off and sent to Celly by accident?
I would comment, but i have no words left.
Oh, and to further expand on my 'Sexy Party Cannon' idea, I thought of a bedroom nickname for Pinkie Pie(given by Rainbow of course): "Kinkie Pie"
(And thus I have proved that I belong in the Terrible Ponies club... Cause I thought of that randomly. In church... Something must be wrong with my head.)
607940
There actually is a very well-known high-quality Pinkie blog by that very name, and it fits her quite well.
Sweet Molestia! How could I have missed that?! Still, now I know. Well, now I have something to do while waiting for the next chapter...
You always leave me wanting more (shame on you ). I really like how described Pinkie's internal thought process - I can totally imagine a conga line in her head made up of ideas, perhaps in that felt style from her adventures with CDD. I can't wait for this big announcement on the horizon. Have to say as well, I didn't expect the return to Canterlot. Also, fear the Rarity - details will be extracted if need be.
SHUT UP AND TAKE MY EMOTICONS!
I was out walking and went to change song on my ipod. Saw there was a new mail and checked it.
Sprinted home for 5 solid minutes.
Was pleased.
608088
Some days, I wish it was possible to favorite comments.
608084
Return to Canterlot? Do you mean the impending flashbacks, or did I miss something (in my own fic)?
608146
Kind of wrote that comment a few hours after I read it this chapter - I intended to just refer the departure of the Princesses, but I kind of inserted where they were going in my head between when I read this and when I got around to commenting on it. Still, I look forward to see what they come up with while away from the gang.
608185
Aaah. They'll still be in Ponyville... And you're right to be interested in what they're going to do. :3
608146
I love you.
And as the great Yami would say, 'ALL OF THE HOMO!'
You keep switching from present tense to past tense when Spike is eavesdropping, making the ordeal confusing rather than humorous. There are a couple other issues on top of that, but overall it's good to see an update.
And if I remember correctly, you said semi-recently that the story isn't even close to finished? There's an [Adventure] tag that hasn't seen the light of day yet? Kind'a hoping this supposed adventure has something to do with the mysterious announcement, because so far it's just the adventure of spontaneous, passionate romance, and I don't know if that counts. xD
608211
Thank ya. :3
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609152
I'm afraid I don't see what you mean-- As far as I can tell, there are no changes in that section.
609165
Correct on most / all counts! :D
609215 Bugger all, neither do I. I guess that's what happens when I try to read multiple stories at once--my apologies for the confusion.
609271
No problem! I've had that happen to me before. :)
And that's the story done. Good lord this is funny, and I can see Celestia being precisely this... naughty. Which is awesome
609616
Welcome to the crowd, it's good to have you on-board.
Ariamaki my good pony, yet again you delivered with quality and a good pile of humor. I wish users could put more thumbs ups for stories like this. But it would be creepy if that were to actually happen, because you might have to deal with a lot of disembodied thumbs
...Wh- WHAT? I already caught on on the publications ?!
Did...Did I just read a 90 000 words clopfic in six hours ?! (Which makes it 250 words/minute...dang, wish I was that fast with school books -_-)
Anyway, this is an AMAZING story, both hilarious, cute and surprisingly arousing (Totally surprised. Wasn't looking for a clopfic. At all.)
You're an incredible writer, and I'm looking forward for future chapters.
As we says in my country, Chapeau bas, Mister.
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Absolute adoration and an amazing application of approval for all of the above. Also, alliteration.
((And this is why I rarely comment at 10:00 am after staying up in a commission Livestream where cover art is being made for one of my next fics... Oops, did I spoil something? :3 ))