Twilight and Fluttershy realize they each love their Princesses much more than platonically...
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...No sex? Y U NO HAVE SEX?
I'm kidding - it's good to see a mature fic that isn't just outright clop or gore for once
I really liked your characterisation of Twilight and Fluttershy - the Rarijack is a nice touch, too.
More?
...MOAR!!!!
- Midnight Specter
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Oh don't you worry-- MOAR is incoming, as we speak. And I'd say EVEN MOAR is prepared for after that.
Thank you for the comment, of course.
"Why didn't you mention Applejack"
I couldn't stop grinning when I saw this line
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MISSION ACCOMPLISHED.
There will be plenty of that sorta thing coming in the future- Including a few good ones from AJ herself.
Interesting. Well I'm definitely tracking this.
Twilestia? TRACK WITH A VENGEANCE!!
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My first instinct is to thank you, my second is to make a "defiantly tracking" joke. Soooo why not both?
Thank you very much for being my first rebellious tracker!
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Oh man, now I even have VENGEFUL trackers? This is turning out to be an awesome Saturday!
Thanks man-- And hoo boy, if you're in it for Twilestia, you are in for a TREAT.
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YAY , knew i found the holy grail
Twilestia AND Fluttermoon?
Oh my... Wait a minute...
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Okay, I'm ready. And I'm tracking.
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I would ask if your body was ready, but you have beaten me to the punch.
None the less, PREPARE...
Because the first 3 days of this fic are going to be back-to-back-to-back updates! :D
For the love of all that is holy: NEXT CHAPTER NAO!!!
...that is, if it's okay with you...
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Hmmm... Well, I do suppose I can roll it out earlier than planned. Maybe not NAO, because I have to sleep eventually... But certainly SOON.
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Oh yes... Or should I say Aww yeah?
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I'm bad and I shall feel bad. *Leaves*
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That's a weird way to spell "I'm awesome and I will continue to be awesome."
All forms of punnery, memetics, and terrible jokes are welcome here.
Alright im tracking and going to read it later... the description bought me
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Now THAT is a phrase to warm any author's heart. Thanks. :)
And hey, who knows... Maybe by the time you come to read it, Chapter 2 will be up already...
Several newbie flaws with this story, including incorrect dialogue association. Will get back to this when I get access to a normal computer.
3/5
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I've... *sniff* Just... *sniff* Found my new home...
Ah, damn, I love it.
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/looks at name
I know this feeling...
Tracking and most definitely in need of MOAR!
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Well, I certainly plan to answer the call! Might revise my release schedule when I wake up- Chapter 2 will be en route within 24 hours at the LATEST.
Tracking like a Hunter awaiting my quarry... the coveted Fluttermoon. The clopping shall be glorious that night!
Ariamaki this story I shall track I shall hunt you down should you cancel this story I love twilestia stories and need more just like I need more twialicorn stories.
just because I have over 200 stories on my track list doesn't mean I have a problem ICANQUITWHENIWANT-TO
Love and Peace! *tacklediveghug* (the most awesome kind of hug, ask dashie! )
I can't wait to see how receptive the princesses are, as wither way will be interesting.
Innocent twilight is so adorkable
overall? Great for a first chapter, not a weak opening.
5 Hearts! (and star votes)
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Ehehehe, oh are you in for some joy. In fact, maybe even sooner than expected...
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I will definitely take threats of being hunted down seriously when they come from Mandalore himself (or at least the current one).
In unrelated news, your avatar nearly caused a spit-take of laughter. Thanks. :3
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Thank you in ALL regards. Here's hoping you enjoy what's to come... In the next few hours.
I mean, great story and all, but Rarity didn't even consider that Twilight might have a crush on a colt
Are you one of those authors that's point of view is "Every mare that's majorly involved in my story must be a lesbian"
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"But sitting in the steamy baths, her friends listing off a wide variety of mares and colts from all over Ponyville"
...So, yes, she did.
Author: The tense changes need sprucing up. A few times, it jumped from past to present tense... very jarring. Still, I'm intrigued, so I'll head on to chapter 2 now.
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"Oh, that's quite alright! We'll just guess!"
She had thought she'd gone through some embarrassing things before. The Parasprite aftermath. The incident with, ah... the other word for "late". But sitting in the steamy baths, her friends listing off a wide variety of mares and colts from all over Ponyville, she realized that was nothing by comparison. And of course, even that got topped a minute later when they exhausted their other options...
Sorry, I'm just completely disregarding your opinion.
- Midnight Specter
BUCK YEAH.
Weh-Hey!
Brilliant first chapter, Mah Boi!
Concept of Twilestia is not unknown to me, but I don't dislike it...I actually like it a lot
Fluttermoon huh? Sounds promising and funny at the same time...also approved
And a joke at the end on Rarity's lack of sense for a moment and letting slip she's with Applejack?!
Sir you have hooked me with three different baits that are all very pretty. I will track this until its completion for I am interested by all!!
I am NeonEclipse and I support these shippings and this story
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312069 I am iloveportalz0r and I approve of your comment
My responces t the crushs were, in order:
It's official. Chuck approves, this story is absolutely amazing.
Well, I think I'm a bit late on the draw, but I want to read this story, so ill try my hardest
Confound this story, it drives me to read it over and over in anticipation of the next chapter....
This is really enjoyable! The light-hearted adorableness is certainly high, and I can really feel Twilight's nervous jittery-ness. I don't think I've ever ready anything that's Fluttershy/Luna, though. Not really a couple I'd ever have come up with. That's like Twilight/Rarity, I've just never seen the chemistry there. Ah well. Luna's only been in like three episodes, so I guess we Fan-Ficcers can do whatever we want with her personality and preferences. Fluttershy, though... uhhhh, not sure how this is gonna work, but I shall read ahead and find out. The concussive-voiced alicorn and the frail as dandilions pegasus... its gonna be interesting. You've certainly got the talent to make it happen. :)
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Aaaw, thank you. :3
I'll be eager to see your commentary on further chapters.
This has been sitting in my "to read later" file for a while. I must say that the first chapter is making me happy that I put it there and didn't just skip on by it. In to chapter 2 for me! Oh and Rarijack?
Looks promising. Now, on to the next chapter.
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Glad to have you both here! I hope to see you commenting in the future. :)
I KNEW IT! The Rarity part, at least. I was first like, 'Wait, no Applejack? I wonder...' And I was right! I'm usually never good at pointing out foreshadowing, (which is why I always guess wrong at Mystery novels ;^; ) But for once I spotted it! I'm so happy~
But besides that, I must say that I love your style of writing. Despite it being third person, it so perfectly captures Twilight's feelings, how she is reacting, in how you write. I especially liked the whole thing with tar- I mean, late.
But over all, wonderful chapter, and I look forward to reading more.
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And I will be looking forward to more of your comments on chapters as you go along! :D
Well when I read chapter 31 I said I would go back that day and start rereading the story and I guess that was a bit of a lie Ariamaki, personal issues keeping me back and crap like that. Though now I am going to follow through on my promise start my rereading of your whole story I must say I am glad I am and leaving comments as I go.
This chapter was a good start to the story and I like how it already sets setting things up for the future but it is not rushed either. There was a share of funny and light hearted lines that had me laughing and smiling along the way.
Your story is what got me into Twilestia stories.
-Takis
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No worries about the delay man-- Personal stuff is what it is. But comment away! I am ALL ears. :D