Twilight and Fluttershy realize they each love their Princesses much more than platonically...
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LOL - What kind of shop did Rarity take them to??
I really liked Rarity's philosophy on going up in the world. It totally suits her.
But srsly... STILL NO SEKS?
- Midnight Specter
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/cough wait-three-chapters /cough
And thank you. :)
As for what sort of shop Rarity took them too... Well, I'm sure a little Google searching in re: Velvet and "The Crop" could answer that.
I demand you update chapter 3 now!! I need to read what happens now!!!!!!
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Ehehehe, thanks for the enthusiasm-- I guarantee you that Chapter 3 will be out by Monday night, maybe sooner depending on how these next few bits slice up. You will see the results, and, with any luck, they will be awesome.
Welp, you got me doublesold now.
Damn, I was hoping to avoid tracking 'Mature' stories, 'cept for MPPT3K.
Hm. Not bad, so far. But then I love RariJack, and Twilestia. :D
Monday Night for more?... I can live with this.
I hope Fluttershy succeeds if not Twilight...
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Ehehehe. It is my calling in life to make people break avoidances like that one. :3
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Why thank you! Here's hoping what is still to come pleases you.
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Maybe earlier, if things go well on my end. I'm starting to notice some weird glitches introduced to the text when I use that experimental new GDocs Uploader, so I'll be slowing my pace to do an additional check-up before each posting. Not -much- slower mind you. Just a touch.
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Hey, me from an hour or so ago! You can reply to multiple comments at once on this site! Maybe stop clogging everypony's windows with your reply spam, hmmm?
A Wild Pinkie Pie has appeared. On a Trampoline. I dont even want to consider how high she was bouncing + magic trampoline power...
I like the idea of rarity having hundereds of favors on call, kinda reminds me of Kim Possible though.
Dashie and Pinkie have has very little screentime, hope they don't get lonely... or bored. That would be bad for everyponies sanity. But who needs something so useless as that!
Big Mac is a good brother here, I like that alot... but what was he doin dragging pinkies trampoline? Could they be...?! Actually... that would be a good pairing, as unshakable as he is, he could deal with her brand of fun. And all he would need is to get one word in edgewise (a considerable feat, i know). Eeeyup.
The shop... oh my... I suppose a fashonista such as her would get many orders... and one shouldn't restrict themselves from trying new things I suppose.
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Ehehehe-- The trampoline bit was born after I remembered a platforming game where, even if a platform moved, your character in mid-air stayed moving relative to it. It seemed very Pinkie.
Huh, yeah, I suppose Dash and Pinkie -did- get very minimal appearance-time so far. It's almost like they get a Intermission chapter of their own sometime this week.
And as for the shop... Wait until you see the OTHER store in Canterlot that gets showcased soon.
Freaking awesome of you to reference Velvet in this story. Love that tumblr. Things are moving pretty quickly I see.
It's not like Twilight could get them in the castle in roughly... 14 words?
"Hello, I am Twilight Sparkle, personal protégé of princess Celestia. May I come in?"
cat out of the bag?
NOW COMES THE MONKEY OUT OF THE SLEEVE
i believe you wont get it when youre not dutch
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Ah HA! I knew I recognized that name! Good thing Velvet didn't take them into the dungeon, Fluttershy may have had a heart attack!
Awesome of you Put velvet in there.... I like that tumblr... And i'm sure you know of carni's clop corner too.....
People are mentioning about the lack of screentime for Pinkie and Dash...maybe there;s something else going on we don't know about...hm?
To be honest I don't really care what the reason is but if it turns out there is going to be PinkieDash shipping I'm completely ok with that.
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Ehhehe-- It's always great to see someone commenting as they go through things-- I'll be interested to see what you say when you hit the first Intermission.
There is always reason to worry
You really do need more views, Mah friend.
Hmm... at this point, I'm going wherever this story takes me.
Twilight Sparkle: Magical, Scholarly
Fluttershy: Kind, Sensitive, Moral,
Rarity: Blackmailing, Espionage-ing, Generous.
Wat.
"There was no reason to worry." Ya right, i don't believe that for a second.
I love the little story you wrote for Applejack and Rarity getting together, I am surprised I forgot that the first time around with how much I enjoyed it this time.
I am also really enjoying the dialogue between character's. I am also enjoying how Rarity is working to make sure they both get what they want, including cashing in favors to get a meeting with the Princess.
Also, loved the little section with them in Velvet's shop.
OMG! I follow Velvet on Tumblr! I love her stuff! You are my hero for mentioning her!
with their extreme element of harmony and princes celestia's student "powers" couldn't they just walk inand ask for a private audience?
Velvet! Great chapter by the way.
I gotta agree with everypony else on how much I loved the Velvet reference. It seems a little odd Twilight missed the name, but I guess she is nervous.
macdonalds quote "im lovin it"
im confused why are they wondering about how to get in to the palace.........its freaking twilight sparkle the princesses student she can pretty much just walk through the front door and the others are bearers of the elements no like there just common ponies walking up to the front gate
Nothing to worry about unless Celestia tags along.
I ALWAYS WONDERED ABOUT THIS STORY CANT TWILIGHT JUST WALK IN TO THE CASTLE SHE USED TO LIVE THERE
5744196 thats my thinking as well im pretty sure that twilight has free access to pretty much the entire castle
why do i get batman vibes from Rarity?