Twilight and Fluttershy realize they each love their Princesses much more than platonically...
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I just finish reading the first three chapters and then this comes around.
Loving it so far. =3
This is pretty fantastic writing, absolute pleasure to read
LMO
happy me
i like so far
keep it coming
that is all
kthanxbai
Celestial Mare Crushees dating co-ordinators, yaaaayyy!
*grumbles about good clopfics*
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"Wait....what?"
I swear... me and shipping... why can't I quit it... Oh well. I will admit this is certainly a step above 78% of the drivel people try to pass off as writing. Though I suppose using that phrase means it's still drivel by 22%... Not what I intended, but this is not a polished piece of writing so I'm leaving it as is and retconning it with this comment:
not drivel.
Keep it up.
"But Twilight! Sex doesn't automatically equal love!"
Take her to the movies then go get drinks or something, then see where it goes. Yeesh, Twi.
I have a name... The Secret Sister Shippers!!! Banished to the moon?
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Ahahaha oh frig-- If I have to make the CMC catch wind of this, I just might use that. Priceless.
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My sentiments exactly. This section is old and never got what it deserved... until now.
Starting at the end of this week, (after Chapter 5 or 6, give or take) a special Intermission chapter is going up, and then regular updates resume next week. During that time, I'm completely revising the first four or five chapters from scratch, and posting updated versions on off days.
Here's hoping you enjoy that, and what's to come-- The further we go, the more polished it all is.
219353 haa, I misrepresented myself again. I was reflexively commenting on my comment not being a polished work for me to worry about fixing. For that I'm simply glad I didn't offend by accident.
Then again, any piece can always accept a little more polish, as there's yet to be a story so perfect the universe stops having a reason to exist. Never stop bettering yourself or your work, but again, I wasn't calling this unpolished... not intentionally in those words at least.
Now I've got me rambling again. I suppose I should end on a higher note this time. Ab
Why did the mention of the CMC make me believe they will play a role in this, a disastrous role...
and realized that Fluttershy got Friendzoned...
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Wonder if Studentzoned is harder to overcome then friendzoned...
220568 oh shit man, we ALL have been in the friend zone at least once..............
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Well, hopefully Fluttershy is just being paranoid. And I'm sure Twilight would be glad to be Studentzone'd... for given definitions of "teacher and student"
Lunashy!
The "part of the bad news" from Twilight being that she gets to spend more time with Celestia confuses me a little, I know what you're trying to accomplish, it's just.... there's absolutely no reason for any of them to be sad if she's going to be "away more during weekends" and the like, now if it was a full "I won't see you girls for however long" that would make more sense.
I you can understand what I mean.
hahahaa did rainbow get the 'fantastic finish' that comes from the spa. with two mares *cough*threesome*cough*
Its just adorable to see the interaction between Applejack and Rarity during the book scenes. Though I gotta admit, surely Twilight knows what she's asking when she's asking to be "shown the ropes". Rarity's sudden acceptance of... what... being watched?--- was pretty shocking to say the least. Then again, its always the prim and proper ones that are tigers in the bedroom when they let their hair down. If Applejack is already talking about rope, I can't IMAGINE what else they're doing when they're alone, hahaha.
So Twilight asked for higher-end MAGIC lessons, ahhh I see. That makes more sense than you skipping the asking-out scene entirely. Your story is way too well-structured to leave out a big part like that. Faith restored! I'm eager to see the interaction there and see what kind of Celestia you write. Like I said before, she's a hard pony to wrap your head around. Luna is much easier, acting like the flawed Greek goddess most of the time. The Princess of the Sun on the other hand... tough nut to crack. Can't wait!
Whew. I must admit, I'm a bit relieved that it was just advanced magic lessons that Celestia agreed to. It would have been going far too fast if she already asked her out. O.O
And also, with this chapter, I must give a proud star for THIS line:
"blushing like a bride and brandishing a book full of badly-behaved bim... "
Simply because I adore alliteration, and that timing of such was *perfect*. With that said, Onwards, once again!
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If you love alliteration, you are in for some AMAZING joy later on.
Loving the story as always Ariamaki, so far I have not seen anything to me that feels weird but since this is a reread I sort of know the future already when it comes to the story. I am enjoying every minute and I must say this story helps bring a smile to me at the end of a hard day.
Still a very fabulous read just like the last few chapters
This is getting weirder and weirder...
But it's very well written and a quite entertaining read... Even if a little disturbing at times...
I love the "I'll give you four words to explain why a name for this is the most stupid idea you have ever had." from Dash.
And that's when the story almost became My Little Pony: Friendship with benefits
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Yep
How about "The Six for Two" group
ok thats adorable, and an actually believable way to get the horny mixed in with twi/rar/aj