Twilight and Fluttershy realize they each love their Princesses much more than platonically...
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Loved the opening of the chapter, well I liked all of it but the beginning was an interesting piece.
Ooh, pull the other one Starswirl, it's got - errr ... um.
an awkward coming out party?
well not coming out but meet the family? i don't even know what to call it...
"slightly excessive bit of cuddling, they got back on track. Fluttershy’s curiosity, as rare as it was, had been piqued. So she got Luna to open up about this new subject, wondering just how much she might find out about herself in the process."
I think the beginning of this sentence might have gotten chopped off by mistake. Other than that, great chapter!
loved that bit where spike walks in on them
i saw this had updated and was on it faster then I could see what the chapter name or number was...
Celestia make-out ambush! Also, dual-casting = sex. apparently more than sex because Twilight considers it more personal.
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Then prepare for more in the future. :3
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SOON
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Actually got fixed like 3 minutes after posting, I just didn't fix it -in time-. Stupid experimental FiMFiction GDocs Uploader.
Yes update, great chapter and all that.... sorry im going on 3 days with 5 hours of sleep...
And I just finished my last final....
And.....
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Get your friggin rest!
Also, congratulations.
Right on!! nice chapter, can't wait to c who spike hooked up with, probably the usual sweetie bell, or apple bloom
On a side note, I believe this is very well played out. I don't quite c where your going with that starswirl part... but your the mastermind
Keep it up, and by the... uh, I hate to think about this... END!! Your story will be as good, if not better, than romance reports!! * shocked face *
Aww Yeah! Another update! thanks so much! This is really nice! It certainly put a smile on my face when I needed it most! Thanks a lot!
*Just finished playing a round of LoL with some friends*
Random Friend 1: "So, you guys up for another?"
Other friends: "Sure."
Me: *While checking email* "Sur-- oh, something came up. Be back in 10."
Yes, that just happened. Lovely chapter as usual. Wasn't expecting Spike being that mature, but it was cute. And I know I've said this hundreds of time, but oh God I love me some Twilestia.
Every other Twilight shipping story I've read with Spike walking in on them he had some crazy reaction. You are awarded 1 mustache for "Idon'tgiveafuck" Spike.
Why would you post this when I open in the morning?!?!?
Great chapter though
The opening was certainly not how I expected this chapter to start. I thought it was an interesting change of pace and a good chance for creative followup. I liked how Twilight wanted to make her combined spell cast with Celestia something special. I can't wait to see what comes of that. I'm also intrigued to see if anything comes of the Luna/Fluttershy "Stare" inquiry. Also, just have to say, for a dragon that lives in a library and is assistant to the resident egghead on...everything, it's a nice change of pace from the norm to see Spike not freak out as Vinyl_Scratch above mentioned. Good chapter, and as always, moar plz.
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<3
And don't worry, the end is FAR, FAR away.
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Always glad to be of service.
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PFFT, good to know I can disrupt Action-RTS gameplay. Now if only updating could make ME stop playing SMNC for a bit...
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IDGAFSpike now comes in moustache flavor!
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Because MWAHAHAHA.
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Moar of everything you just mentioned is certainly en route.
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Can I get it in Soarin's Apple Pie flavor instead?
The Starswirl bit was brilliant. Loved it through and through.
Also Spike's initial reaction was hilarious. I could easily see him panicking at first.
You say that the "meet the parents" chapter is soon. I can only wonder if you, for whatever trollish reason, have Tia/Luna's parent stop by for the first time in millennia and see how each is together with. Don't make Mr. Troll make another prediction.
Alright Portalz, find any mistakes this time?
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Just got done playing some LoL myself. We rolled an all tank team. XD
Well I had planned on going to bed, but seeing that your marvelous story updated it can wait a little longer. Love the writing and keep it up my good man.
Also, the Hazard Pay line got a good laugh from me
579543 you play SMNC? I can't get mine to work, I always play TF2.....hmmm, now there's an idea! An Ariamaki engineer mod! Because you are a genius. Now, I just have to figure out how to MAKE it....also, if anypony here would be kind enough to give me suggestions on how to get my Super Monday Night Combat to work, that would be greatly appreciated. I've already tried uninstalling it and reinstalling it, didn't help.
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Make absolutely sure you have the latest patch- Once it's installed, check to make sure by Verifying Local Files in the Steam options. If that fails, add me on Steam-- Name is Ariamaki-- And me and my friends can try to guide you.
I will now read the word "Awesome" in my head in the same voice I use to read anything said by Gandalf.
This piece of literature was awesome.
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YOU SHALL NOT PASS.
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Dear Twilight Sparkle
Yes, yes, your latest friendship report was very nice and all but there appeared to be a stain on the bottom right corner...
Smelling faintly of chocolate and cherries and liqueur and- Oh dear me this appears to be some rather lovely Black Everfree Cake!
Based on my love of this cake and knowing how fast you read I estimate I'll be at your door in approximately ten seconds!
Wait, I just tasted some whipped cream on the corner!
Scratch that, if you look up you'll see I'm waving at you from the kitchen!
~
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Does Twilight scream Celestia's name in the throes of passion?
OH, OH CELESTIA I'M ABOUT TO- NO I DIDN'T MEAN YOU I MEANT- WELL I GUESS I DID MEAN YOU BUT- OH CELESTIA THIS IS CONFUSING- STILL IN THE FORM OF AN EXPLETIVE THAN A PRONOUN CELESTIAAAAAAAAA~
More importantly, what does Celestia shout?
~Oh, DISCORD, I'm about to-
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The issue of dating the very being you use as an expletive term is going to be coming up, don't you fret. And thank you for enjoying it all. :3
... It's 4:20am, I'm fucking exhausted, and I happen to decide to check FIMFiction before I try to sleep again. DAMN YOU AND YOUR EPIC STORY MAKING ME STAY UP LATER. Oh well, it was totally worth it. Somehow. I think there is something very wrong with me, if I can justify staying up past 4am with ponies, even more so when I have to start work in just a few hours. Kudos, good sir! Have a moustache and my hope for a new chapter soon!
And then Spike became a man.
Oh, Ariamaki. You never fail to amuse me with your pony plots.
And you never fail to arouse me with your pony plots.
Nice chapter.
I'd switch the footnotes for
Earth Pony***
and
awesome**
To:
Earth Pony**
and
awesome***
Since Earth Pony is referenced before awesome
Epic story is still epic... And I have this strange feeling that Pinkie Pie is going to have a new Party Cannon.
Cause she'll be in 'The Shop' and go and then she'll pull one of her spare cannons out and look at it, and then she will do this:
And then it will be born. The SEXY Party Cannon. And RD will be all like and then and then Probably in that order.
Anyway, now that the rambling is done... I can't wait for the next set of escapades by the royal couples(and to see what happens when Celestia and Twilight get a-hold of some fully aged Liquidus Sky. (If it does what I think it does, based on Luna's earlier thoughts about it...)
Oh, and IDGAF Spike? He just got 20% Cooler.
So, as one of her projects, Twilight decided to make sure that she copied over a lot of old Starswirl the Bearded manuscripts to fresher copies for posterity? Living in a library just barely begins to define that girl's love for books and scrolls. In fact, I can see a point sometime in the future where Celestia probably does a little teasing of her lover by making her sit quietly on the bed while Celestia reads from some musty old scroll of historical significance, pausing now and then to wet her lips with a gentle lick, and completely stopping any time it looks like Twilight might be losing her concentration and waiting for said concentration to return.
(Actually, I wonder just who was assisting Starswirl with his research on said topic? I suspect that it's not outside the bounds of possibility that Celestia could have offered a comment to Twilight after reading her footnote on the redacted portion about just what her idol's features looked like at the time he was penning down those observations. )
The continuing conversation between Luna and Fluttershy on the nature of the Stare was enjoyable, and I'll be looking forward to some more of the practice ideas when they come along. It's amusing how much more comfortable Luna and her paramour seem to be with each other at this point, though it's also true that is because; a) Fluttershy mostly lacks the OCD issues that Twilight has in such abundance (not completely, mind you. The episode with Philomena comes to mind.), and b) neither Luna nor Fluttershy have quite the control issues that are present in both Celestia and Twilight.
And finally, my compliments on your version of Spike handling both what Twilight is doing with the Princess, and (apparently) his reaction to the news about Rarity's stated romantic affair with another pony. I'm reasonably sure that Twilight is good enough at reading her number one assistant's reactions to know if he was simply putting on a brave face for her, so I guess we get to have fun for a while working out who else might have become the focus of his affections. Bravo!
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My work here is... Well, far from complete, but at least my sub-goal of insomnia induction is all well and good.
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These are all very good ideas to keep an eye or two on...
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Well, Starswirl's writings are SO old that it would be very difficult for a modern pony to just pick it up and read it- Imagine an untranslated copy of Canterbury Tales or something else done in old OLD English. What Twilight did was 'translate' the text into modern terms and dialects, making it possible for others to understand it more easily.
As for all your observations on their relationships, thank you very much, and keep them coming- I love to hear that kind of insight from my readers. :)
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You are a wonderful, evil bastard. Please continue destroying my sleeping patterns.
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I'm just grinding through the chapters here so I forget if my comment here is for this chapter or the last. Or maybe the one before that..... Anyway, I get the distinct feeling that Luna and Celestia have been a bit closer then just sisters in the past. At least normal sisters. I mean, the sisters that do the stuff that sisters do in Penthouse maybe........... Or twins. Yeah, cause ya know, twins, incest or masturbation? Oh man, i need a nap. Too much reading for one day. But there's still chapters left so i can't just quit!!! Plus i'm still scruffy from work & don't wanna sleep til i've at least showered. Arrggggghh!! Damn you and your awesome story!! I mean, thank you very much for all the time you spend to keep up poor lazy bums entertained for free.
Based on Starswirls research does that mean Chrysalis was defeated by Shining Armor and Princess Cadence having magic sex in front of all of Canterlot (including Shining's little sister, Twilight)?
Well played Hub.
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Hey, you're both correct! :D
Hmm, your idea on magic intigues me and does make for some rather interesting situations in the show. I... I may borrow that idea if you don't mind. Also hurray for pervy Starswirl, now if I could just remember where I had heard someone refer to Starswirl as she/her...
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... but... I've had palom duel cast with Tellah... Ahh! creepy old man! creepy old man!
Maybe it has been mentioned in a comment above, but meh I don't feel like reading so many comments again (No offense guys)
I may have an idea as to which spell Twilight and Celestia will perform together, as well as Fluttershy and Luna. Let's just hope my assumption is correct and will verify itself in an oncomming chapter.
I have to say this is so damn fabulous I fear my brain might explode in a mix of fabulousness, glitter and adorkableness
I'm calling the spell that Twilight and Celestia would cast together
It's for raising the sun
god, that got me
What spike was thinking about diamond dust
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I sincerely hope so.
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I've always been amused by deific beings who swear by themselves.
im keeping you back