Twilight and Fluttershy realize they each love their Princesses much more than platonically...
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I'm really liking this Fluttershy. Truly enjoying this fic a lot. =3
Fluttershy made me d'aww, giggle, and cheer in this chapter - sometimes in rapid succession!
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Glad to have been of service-- Hopefully she'll keep delivering that roller-coaster of reactions. :3
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Thanks! I made sure to have her be shy and reserved, but still capable of her 'moments'-- A bit of an overboard moment, like the Gala, hopefully being the rare exception. I'm sure you'll enjoy the more to come. :D
This Fluttershy is pretty damn awesome. It's good to see someone writing her and acknowledging the physical side of infatuation - 'Shy having "I wanna eat that up like an ice cream cake" moments is something I just haven't ever seen with other writers who ship her.
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Aaaw, thanks! I definitely feel that physical attraction is just as important as emotional attraction-- and in some situations, especially at first, it can be -more- important. I've made sure to give it the attention it needs, and in the future, while there will be more of a physical / emotional balance, lust is still gonna play a big role.
Not the character of the same name, either... Although I've heard of worse crossover ideas...
Oooh, delightful! It will be interesting to compare and contrast Fluttershy and Twilight in their respective courtings.
Are you going to account for the obvious dichotomy of Luna's mane at all? To be more specific, the fact that it is sometimes a light blue and other times it is a startling embodiment of the night sky?
I've always wondered if it was simply a crude retcon or if there was some science (or magic ) to it.
Are you planning to have chapters with concurrent perspectives? By this I mean will one character get a chapter, and then another will at some later point be given a chance to show what happened to them during that same span of time? I ask because Twilight seems to be getting the short end of the stick... Most of her plot seems to be happening somewhere I'm not privy to... not that I'm terribly upset about not seeing twilight in the privy. Ok that was a forced joke at best.
If nothing else though, it does seem to be picking up. More seems to be getting accomplished in a timelier fashion, without being poorly hammered together. The more I read the more I feel like writing, if only I could nail down my ideas............
Maybe I need another chapter.
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Full-sized Luna's mane has -always- been the night sky. It's only when she was freshly-defeated and in 'filly form' that she had a normal one. This suggests that the old picture of her and Celestia from the start of the first episode was made when they -both- looked like this. At least, that's how I handle it: When they're fully in their element and power, their mane reflects it.
There are segments where we will have concurrent prospectives-- The majority of the fic from here on out goes 50-50 within the same chapter. Every time one character has a scene transition, we switch narrators, and back. Twilight also gets a few segments purely to herself to even out the very imbalance you noticed. And coming up is...
Well, if you want a new chapter, why don't I fulfill that need? Check your PM inbox. :3
Fluttershy cannot reel it in can she? I'm glad Luna is so receptive too. Everything is coming along nicely. Did Luna accept Fluttershy, or are they taking it slow?
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A very good question, or actually, both of them. Answers will come to both in time. :3
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*mumbles about awesome readers*
I'm a bit of a sap when it comes to romance stuff so I'll come clean and tell you that you are doing this genre a wonderful service with your writing skills!
I agree with most thats been said, this Fluttershy is adoreable. She is a grown mare after all.
And I like the uncertain feeling that comes from Luna, how even Fluttershy don't seem to be sure what Luna meant with her actions.
I am also very happy to see Luna speak in her half updated archaic ways, I often miss that a lot in Luna fics.
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/facepalm
I had already fixed that, but then uploaded the wrong copy of the document. :le sign:
Just saying - that was beautiful.
Singing to rise the moon? That's some ethereal stuff you got here.
- Midnight Specter
Liking the characterization a -lot- in these later chapters, good job
That was beyond adorable. You make a wonderful fic
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Why thank you! The earlier chapters were a touch rushed, so don't be surprised if 1-4 get replaced with versions up to this par. :3
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Thank you very much! Lemme know if the 'adorable' tag still sticks later on.
She's in there!
D'aaaaaaw
I think Luna's song might be C418 - Beggining.
Check it out
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As a long-time MC fan, and general enjoyer of C418's work, I might agree-- At least it's a good base if all else fails. :3
That was a very interesting interpretation as to how Luna raises the moon. Her words on the qualities of the sun versus those of the moon were quite beautiful. I enjoyed that scene a lot. I'm actually quite clumsy when it comes to portraying how the royal sisters move the sun/moon, so seeing it done so elegantly was like a breath of fresh air, I gotta say.
I do sit and wonder about Luna's reactions when she realizes Fluttershy may be more than an affectionate subject. This Fluttershy is slightly more forward than we're used to, but I certainly don't wanna wait around for twenty chapters before she works up the courage to make a move-- so kudos there. I'm glad she got the ball rolling. Then again, if she's already sort of pressed into a mild heat I imagine she's gonna be hard-wired to seek affection, haha. The bit about Luna's height was just adorable. The implications that Fluttershy might fit under her pretty snugly was a really cute thought on her part.
Looking forward to reading more!
~Aegis
You sir, are the reason I will not sleep tonight. I'm addicted
Well this chapter was a sweet and pleasant read to end my night. I thank you again for a wonderful chapter Ariamaki.
......Holy Christ dude, leather. That's the material it was supposed to be made out of wasn't it? That's just......wow, those must be some really bad memories for Luna.
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> mfw I realize that
interesting and cute. I loved the ending. So adorable. <3
I am looking forward to reading more of this, especially if it has more of those kinds of scenes.
Implications, indeed.
*Reads on*
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This is a truly wonderful story so far. I find it to be a really relaxing read.
This is only the second time I remember seeing an in-depth description of Moon-Raising. The other time was one of Estee's works. It was Twilight Sparkle Vs. The Equestrian Cutie Mark Constellation Registration. There, it was a warning against those things that hunt in the night. A reminder that she is the apex predator than can hunt them. And will, when they threaten her subjects. This was a much calmer, more soothing version, but just as good.
"Pinkie, you're so random" definitely feels like old vers. Pinkie. Your new Pinkie feels better, mare rounded out.
super cute, I like the building romance between flutters and luna.