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I claim this spot to prevent someone else from saying something stupid. This chapter was sexy in all the right ways.
I expect a detailed description of some RariJack, involving what it takes for AJ to actually tap out under those particular circumstances, on my desk by Friday. That, or some AppleDash instead. Still involving the same.
I get the feeling that the next couple of chapters are going to be recaps of the Sun and Moon parts of the story.
Why would that be?
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Smart job, and thanks. ;3
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WHY NOT BOTH?
Just kidding you'll only get one... for now.
And as far as recaps are concerned... Well, I wonder?
me gusta
Damn it, if I was not to sleepy I would start reading this right now. but a last I have not been to sleep in 24hours.
And I have to stay up a bit longer so I can get back to sleeping at night.
Oh well....
I happened to have the fortune of having the "Ow! Consarnit, rake, rake!" line to be the last line on screen before needing to scroll down again. I must admit that it genuinely made me stop and think for a bit on why AJ said that. Considering what this story is about it wasn't too hard to figure out the meaning behind it before continuing on.
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I'm glad that it was contextually clear, and managed to be thought-provoking instead of confusing.
Yes update!
cant wait to see what their reactions are to what happened between celestia and twilight in the gardens
Also
You made the featured box!
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CONGRATULATIONS!
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It's the third time! :D
Thanks regardless!
((This is my second post since they added re-featuring, and I've been re-featured both times. I DID get featured originally for the very first post, but for some reason it only lasted like 12 hours instead of the at-the-time usual week or so.))
Tracking and going to read later.
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Feel free to comment on the older chapters as you go through them! I always welcome comments, even back-dated ones.
((Also, it looks like you Watched me but didn't track yet. Don't forget to hunt this down again when you get the chance. ))
Lol, when I started reading there was only 2 views. After I refreshed the page and 54.
Another good one.
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Alright I will ((I'm VERY new to the site))
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Fast like Dash, baby!
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Thanks. :3
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No problem! I'm more than willing to answer questions if you need anything help-wise. Fantastic avatar, btw.
i wish you updated more...this is too epic not to have an update every day...
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tx, I made it with a pony maker on dolldivine.com
I'm deciding if I should leave as is or eventually photoshop a cutie mark in...
decisions, decisions
I'm with Midnight Specter here, I'm expecting a good scene on the whole RariJack matter.
Including Rarity's safeword.
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Things might be speeding up soon, but don't hold me to it...
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I haven't decided if I should have her use one of mine, or make a new one for her. We're already alike in far too many ways...
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You mean to tell me that you make dresses for ponies like Rarity? Or have good control over telekinesis but not a lot of other magic? Woah, Ariamaki, you and Rarity are like clones.
Well the chapter was definitely sexy, for sure. And the devious Fluttershy was great. I laughed so hard seeing her be devious about the whole thing. I can totally see AJ and RD going at it just for shits and giggles too. Seriously Appledash in this story would make for some crushing drama. oh, my heart aches at the thought.
Alright, you now what time it is now. It's time for....
Mr. Troll's Predictions of the Next Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Fluttershy and Rarity notice how "heated" Twilight is and try to help her out which will cause Twilight to feel super guilty and breakdown in front of Tia.
- During this announcement, or whatever, of Luna's she will reveal the relationship between her and Fluttershy but somehow screw up the wording to make the whole town think it is wrong somehow. Don't ask me how the town will think of them, just a general bad feeling is what my crystal ball is foretelling.
-Rarity will be teased by RD about the safe-word and Rarity will feel slightly embarrassed/betrayed by AJ. She will then get jealous about her hanging with Rainbow and mmmaaayyyybbee ask to her her(Dash) into the bed with them.
-(This last one is not something is a necessarily dismissing or praying with my heart and soul over, just something I could see you do....) There is some kind of party, whether it is in Ponyville or the castle, where hard cider is free and flowin'. At said party EVERYPONY gets drunk and some princest happens and this resolves Twilight's guilt and Fluttershy might ask to join. Again, just my crystal ball saying what could happen.
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Hey, I didn't say it was THAT many ways. :P
Glad to hear you're interested in Appledash potential...
And now, for the first and probably only time:
TROLL PREDICTION RESPONSES:
1- PFFThaha. AHAHAHAHAHAHAA no.
2- Official Ariamaki-CO policy is "No announcements regarding the announcement."
3- Close but no oblong tobacco product.
4- Trollvision is looking too far into the future, with cider googles apparently.
I admit that I hope to see what happens between Dash and Apple next. That and I am totally like WOAH when I saw that Luna was trying to confess the same thing. Either that or it's been too damn long when I last read the first 35 chapters. Who knows? Anyway, good job my dear Brony.
Adieu~
After reading another chapter Ariamaki I must say I am impressed again with your work. Today I actually plan to star rereading your story from the beginning to refresh myself on some of the older details. If I remember this time I will try to leave my thoughts on some of your earlier chapters.
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Looks like a lot of people are considering rereads lately, or at least thinking back to the old days! Takis, I would love to see your comments on the older chapters-- I wait gleefully. :3
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Will there at least be a princest flashback interlude, what with Luna alluding to such things two chapters ago?
P.S.: How do I personalize replies?
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Mmmmaybe.
P.S. You just did! :D
Something to consider my good Sir;
"And after a battery of baths, a cavalcade of care, and layer upon layer of luxury, Twilight and her friends finally reached the baths."
They leave the baths, then head back to the baths?
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Metallurgy, best safe word ever. Just saying. That or crawlspace. Never hear those words.
Also, Fluttertroll is to cute to hate, and to trolly to love unconditionally... I don't know how to handle this.
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Responses to the Responses to Mr. Troll
1- To be fair, you would totally pull something like that if it was beneficial to the story. To say you wouldn't would mean lieing to yourself.
2- Looks like it is time to haxorz your company and publish your story before you can. (I don't know how to give the link as text sooo...) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AM0IH1SUJa8&feature=related
or Luna will announce that she will be in Ponyville much more often and then something like this will happen.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZRzYAAY17LM&feature=related
3- Only close?! Damn.
4- *takes off cider goggles* Hmm. I see only one solution to this not happening.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xwTt2JOULXg
Well. This is something. Not quite as funny as Beating the Heat, but I get the impression you're not trying to be.
No, this is great. It's absolutely brilliant.
I fully expect Fluttershy to put on her playa bling for the next chapter and treat poor little T-wizzle to a lesson on how a real mare does it.
You cruel, magnificent bastard.
I eagerly look forward to the RariJack rough sex. And is Rarity gonna get those piercinge?
I'm almost starting to think that you're letting yourself be a bit inspired by a certain fic containing notes on a certain race of pony's behaviour when it comes to reproduction.
Not to imply that its being close to it or anything. I just got a ping on my scry-o-vision of there maybe being some... changes to a certain unicorns biology somewhere along the line. If so, I'm certainly looking forward to seeing if you're considering something akin to that to a pegasus that shall remain anonymous for the time being. It certainly looks as if it's being implied, if kinda subtly.
If I read correctly it seems like that sort of thing has only been done between unicorns previously, and as such the 'changes' are not quite as noticeable. But with a princess? I'm really looking forward to that, even if I turn out to be wrong.
Might even somehow explain Cadance...
To be honest I'd just love to see more of that. It's always interesting to see authors come up with explanations of that kind of transformation.
Of course, so far it seems to be far into the future whether I'm right or wrong, but no matter what I'll probably stick around until the end.
(If I'm somehow being too vague: I'm implying that Twilight and/or Fluttershy might turn Alicorn at some part of the story, and that I'd love to see that and how you write the explanation. Your 'excerpt' at the top certainly tells me that you're capable of writing it.)
Absolutely brilliant story that you have written here, I'm honestly surprised that its taken me this long to find is and read it.
You have the perfect amount of sexiness and detail without delving into being lewd, and I commend your talents on this, giving the impression and feelings of being intimate all the while keeping the emotions on the forefront and keeping them believable.
While I think that it was a stretch to have had Celestia harboring feelings for Twilight for a long period of time, you pulled it off exceptionally well. Not to mention FlutterLuna? Did not see that one coming, nor did I see it working as well as it does.
While I personally ship AppleDash, the side pairings of RareApple and PinkieDash are well written enough that I still find them endearing and entertaining to read.
Over all, seeing as how I read this in one sitting: FANTASTIC.
10/10
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Consider rereads? Either I'm ahead of the game or you guys are too slow. I've already logged 2 rereads, and am starting to lean towards a third.
Awesome chapter, as usual.
Oh, and 637295? I can't tell you just how much I agree with you in hoping about what is to come. If we are indeed thinking of the same story, and I think we are...
Just so you know, this is up there in my list of favorite fanfics. Just thought it'd be nice to have another fan!
Great chapter Ari, lots of fun with awkward moments Though I doubt Rake would make the best safeword, considering that in the heat of the moment it'd sound a lot like "rape" to passerbys. Which would be deliciously awkward to walk into... Full speed ahead my good man!
Ah, we get to the all important gossip time with Rarity. I've been hoping to see what the Marshmallow can extract from our shy bookworm. And you tossed in a side order of Applejack vs. Rainbow Dash in the eternal competition. Excellent!
Let's hit the spar first. I was a little surprised that they'd hit the tennis court for a full contact sparring session, but on reflection I suppose it does make sense. Their competitions do tend to get into the rough side, which would naturally be something you don't want being a public exhibition; bad for town morale, and it could tend to be misconstrued by certain ponies. Plus, the court has the advantage of having a smooth surface that is rock, root, and hole free so you don't have to worry about possibly turning an ankle or even breaking a leg in the worst case scenerio. I am touch surprised that Rainbow Dash didn't know about the concept of a safeword, but considering the personalities of both the speed freak and the party pony, I can see why neither would be very much up on the more involved points of a playful relationship in the bedroom. And I am a little curious about what Rarity might consider that would put AJ into safeword mode (although, it sounds like piercings in sensitive places is likely to feature strongly in that in the near future.)
And then we get to the spa. I like the role reversal we're getting between Fluttershy and Twilight with discussing their respective weekends. I suppose that Fluttershy does have the advantage that a lot of what Twilight is getting to hear has been at least superficially covered in her dinner conversation the night before. For her, the ice has already been broken with Rarity on the subject, plus she is used to discussing things with Rarity during spa appointments. I think that neither of them were really expecting Twilight's lead-in to the weekend to start off with a study session, but given what they know of the library resident, I can't believe that they were too surprised, even allowing for the fact that this was intended to be a romantic weekend. Poor Twilight just kept having her headspace rearranged by Fluttershy's activities. And there's still the big announcement to come.
Good job, I'll be looking forward to more.
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The first ones are more like scented baths, perfumes and such, as opposed to the actual steam baths.
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/innocent whistle
Dunno what you're talking about.
:this website desperately needs a lying applejack avatar built in:
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Well, hopefully you'd never be yelling it loud enough for passerby to be an issue. And if circumstances require you to yell it THAT much, maybe it's a good thing that it might get confused that way.
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<3
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Twilight is honestly just surprised at how mutual it turned out to be ahead of time.
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Oh, she knew about the -concept-. Check beck on her internal monologue afterwards. What she didn't know was how it could be used. And thank you for another deep analysis of a chapter. :3
wait a second; im confused,
*it had to be something major. Had Luna revealed some major secret of the Royal Sisters? Maybe she had discussed this mysterious "plan" that was taking place tonight? Or...
"She was trying to confess the exact same thing."
She WHAT!?*
why is twilight so shocked exactly, i mean; it's not that big of a deal considering the situation....
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Interesting. Can't wait to see what you're planning
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Right, but allow the relatively sheltered bookworm her over-reaction. She had thought it was fairly one-sided for both of them, but coming to the realization that no, the Princesses already reciprocated well ahead of time... It's slightly unnerving to her.
recap before big announcment?
i don't know if i should punch you out of be happy this story lasts longer...
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ah, okay...i forgot that twilight will always be twilight...
oh my god do i love you ariamaki. i started giggling when aj said rake, i had a feeling it was a bedroom word
http://www.mane6.com
This chapter reminded me of this in the best possible way.
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This is how I see round 2 panning out in my head...
"NO WAY WILL THIS END IN A STALEMATE AGAIN, AJ!"
"This ain't like when you and Twilight play that fancy-schmancy chess stuff"
"No but Rarity told me about that thing she does behind your leg and-"
"Rarity told you that if ya told her what Pinkie does to yer ear that you like so much. Then she told me."
"You wouldn't dare..."
NOM
*MOAN* OH. IT IS ON.
LICK
Mmmmm- hey wait did you hear that?
*Crunch Crunch Crunch*
: "Oh don't mind us darlings, just carry on, really. "
"Where did you even get popcorn?!"
"Is that really the first question yer gonna ask?"
"You are so boring when you question me, dear. Dash, try just up and to the left of her cutie mark"
: "Oh dear CELESTIA Rarity why did you-"
"Rarity that wasn't fair. APPLEJACK! You. Left hoof on flank. Right hoof tail. Then...TWISTER!
"OH LUNA!" WELL TRY this
GLOMPH
"RAKE! RAKE!
Really dear? Is that all it took? Suck it up for your mistress! Don't you dare displease me!
"Someponies whipped!"
Ooh, Jackie, try slapping her on the rump, it drives her
*THWACK*
*Munch Munch Munch*
"I'm going to grab some more soda"
" Take your time. Mind grabbing me some hayfries? These two are going to be a while..."
"I sure hope so!
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Why not both? Wait...
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Ehehehehe, good call.
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And the award for most prescient (but still not totally correct) future-summary of the week goes to...
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Great minds think alike. We are truly the greatest minds of all.
635903 Recaps are good when you get to see the reactions of characters.