Twilight and Fluttershy realize they each love their Princesses much more than platonically...
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Oh god... That's kinky...
Oh my my my. Though I must admit I'm enjoying the RariJack.
Clicks "Next Chapter" Ends up being the bonus thing...
You really need to stop adding all the updates under the bonus one...
Inb4 the RariJack Holiday Calendar!
Will Twilight be joining them? Will Sweetie Belle walk in on them? Will anypony else walk in on them?
...Will this turn into a Ponyville-wide orgy? Please say yes...
All questions which must be answered soon!
- Midnight Specter
I shudder to think of how Fluttershy might take a suggestion like that!
Very tastefully done, author, I enjoyed it greatly.
I think one of the reasons I like this fic is chapters like this one; its lack of (physical) detail when it comes to the "clop" scenes and instead having good charecter development. Then again, I am reading this for the story, not the plot. Keep up the good work Ariamaki.
So hot... Even if nothing really happened. =3
Taking Twilight back to school as it were. The whole exhibitionist scene was a bit out of character for Twilight in my opinion but I'm excited to know what it is that Rarity can teach Twi.
Go on...
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Ehehehe, why thank you. :3
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I definitely think there is a lot of range that can be covered with the level of detail in a piece of work like this. Some stories benefit from extreme detail, others are better off leaving things murky or subtle, and sometimes it just doesn't make sense to cover the scene at all. I prefer to jump around the scale a bit, so don't be terribly surprised to see more (not neccesarily much more) detail in the various Intermissions.
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Well, Twilight herself was pretty surprised by how much she liked that-- She is, after all, essentially just coming into her maturity with this kind of thing, and even if she weren't, people tend to stumble onto their turn-ons and fetishes in a pretty sudden manner.
Yes pictures. For they are good . . . for science of course.
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Bravo, keep it up.
Funny. In the mood I was just now, I was really sort of dreading a sudden clopchapter... And was rewarded by not having to read any tactless 3rd party interco...mmentary.
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Aaaw, why would a sudden clop chapter be 'dreaded'? Just trollin', or honestly not in the mood for one this evening / day?
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You needn't worry about my moods Dude.
I was genuinely not in the mood for one, but I was forcing myself to read either way because in a fight between myself and I, I'm the one person I can't lose to. [/Shirou]
Don't take it as any poignant commentary on your writing. I'm jussa fickle bastard. I actually enjoyed it quite well.
Though I suppose dread wasn't quite the right word... perhaps loath to read would be better? still a bit strong though... ah such is the problem with a large vocabulary... too many words to remember at any given point in time.
Unlimited Phrase Works...?
nnn... I'm having difficulty not lapsing into Jp right now... just keep doin' what you do. The Dude abides right?
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...Huh. Well, reasonable enough! Although did you have to pick a word like "tactless"? Really?
And yes, he most definitely does-- And I do a stellar impression of the man. Although I couldn't drink a White Russian to save my life...
Why do I get the feeling that this needs to be expanded a bit more, don't you think?
Well for the most part, I kinda got lost with the dialog but its still is.... awesome! But as I said and molesita agrees that the applejack rarity scene needs more. But no rush, we are all patient here!
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Happy news! This scene is actually already long-finished and will be showing up later as an Intermission! :D
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For some reason, I'm imagining Sweetie Belle is just completely jaded in this continuity. She walks in on them, and her only reaction is, ugh Rarity's doing that again *rolls eyes*. Looks like she'll have to find somepony else to help her with her homework, because Sis is going to be busy for a while.
We hereby approve of this Raritwijack. We christen it the good ship More-awesome-than-superman-riding-a-tiger. or MATSRAT for short.
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I will be intrigued to see how crazy the christening gets when the Intermission showing what actually went down comes out.
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Probably going to do something like that in -another- fic, but the CMC in this... Well, we haven't seen or heard much of them so far. And for a reason.
266638 We shall see. You are certainly familiar with the concept of Brockian Ultra-Cricket? I am uncertain if the actual depiction can match my life affirmation that I have somehow missed the sexiest romp in romantic literature. However, as one of the ticket collectors on my express ride to pony hell I will give you that chance.
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I'm thinking more of walks in not really caring grabs something off a shelf and walks out.
MY GAWD. Its kinda hard to imagine the paragraph where twilight is first 'on stage'.
I was actually pulling that face the entire time.
Not that I didn't enjoy it . Just, I could never EVAR imagine anyone openly doing that...
Meh.
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Ehehhee, trust me, I can imagine it. Or remember it, really- Been there, seen that, bought the... Well, let's just say it wasn't a T-Shirt.
And as to the reaction image... Can't it be both?
C'mon everypony! Let's sing together! "I'm going to hell, in a handbasket..." Seriously, it's great, but I had to stop reading multiple times to hit myself over the head with a 2x4.
"She wished they would have allowed her to take notes...
or pictures"
that had me on the floor my friend
Um... she did it for science? My jaw was just about to hit the floor when I realized that Rarity and Applejack were actually going to go through with it... Also, couldn't Twilight have just explained that she had devoted most of her time to study, and naturally wouldn't know much about sex from any other standpoint than an entirely academic one?
"Pinkie Pie out of town helping the Cakes at a baking competition, and Rainbow Dash on a bit of long-ranging scout duty for the Weather Patrol..."
Yeah, right.
And that is why the triangle is the best shape!
*gasps* Twilight's a perv!!!!!!!!!!
This. This is 120% completely accurate. And had me on the floor howling.
1135288 no hexagons and octagons and dodecahedrons are the best shapes
Hmm, I dislike the no kiss thing. it does remove some of the sensuality from the moment. I Get it, but like, sex is a bigger prize than mere kissing. Rarity's just being weird, weird and a little mean. I like to imagine she tried to say 'no kissing' but as they got wrapped up in the throes of passion they all made out. Otherwise, it could risk causing a heartbreaking moment for twilight that might leave her scarred during/post orgasm when the after care was probably not very good.
Of course upon reflection, if this wasn't going to be shown in full then it may have been best to cut it earlier and only give the vaguest hints at what happened. I was kinda looking forward to this threesome.