Twilight and Fluttershy realize they each love their Princesses much more than platonically...
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First!
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Anything about the story itself, or just in the mood to be a thread-topper? :P
Pure Win.
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Thank ya kindly! :3
I totally saw this coming.
- Midnight Specter
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1- I see what you did there.
2- It's almost like you help me with this stuff in the writing process or something! :O
3- I felt confident enough that everyone did that I was willing to essentially spoil it in the Intermission title. :P
225732 - Oh, so you liked my little pun?
Yeah, crazy stuff, huh? It almost is like I'm a pre-reader or something XD
- Midnight Specter
I know it's kind of Pinkie's thing to break the fourth wall, but it really messes with reader immersion to do it in a story.
Still, I'm enjoying this. Keep up the good work.
Nice
I really like RainbowXPie but it seems that all the romance stayed with Fluttershy and all the clop gravitated here. Without whip cream to be seen? Pinkie Pie knows to bring snacks but I guess Rainbow is chock full of muffins...
Keep em coming!
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Yeah, it's dialed down in the future, but she can get... insistent.
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Thanks. :3
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It's going to be a running theme that, while still focused on the nature of their romantic relationships, Intermissions have two things in common:
1- They're not narrated by TS, FS, Luna, or Celestia.
2- They're REALLY clop-heavy.
No problem! Another update comes in roughly 24 hours, and then I (maybe) take the weekend off.
Pinkie put that fourth wall down, you don't know where it's -
*KER-SMAAASH*
Oh well.
so thats why rainbow dash was late... awww yea
....... i was pretty good i have to say , even i didnt understand most of it.
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Ding ding ding! Give the gentlepony a cookie.
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Well, at least she's not the only one breaking that wall in this fic.
226014 The singularity is upon us! The horror, the horror!
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Gotta say, I really like your way of writing things. Because it goes into just enough detail without really describing anything (which in my opinion, is even more gratifying during 'certain' scenes), and I love that.
Contrary to the others, I also enjoyed Pinkie for being, well, Pinkie and her 4th-wall-shattering, along with the constant PoV-switch.
So Trixie is basically the local equivalent of a "drug dealer" now. lololololol
And good ol Dashpie fluff makes me smile.
lol
i enjoy
keep em coming my friend
an i shall keep reading
that is all
kthanxbai
track and fave this i will
quite good as usual and ya just gotta love when pinkie breaks the 4th wall
pinkie broke the forth wall ya'll got:
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I now it was maybe 15 minutes ago I kind of joked around with PinkieDash shipping...
But man did you make me want to fly around my room when I read this chapter.
Nothing can describe how I'm feeling inside than this clip from the latest episode:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k7qUDvvJm8k&feature=related
It's funny how you have sex, yet not described enough to be filthy.
Well done. A brilliant chapter.
I liked it but I wouldn't say it's really clop heavy, it's just cloppy, but good cloppy so
225749 What's the fourth wall
I forgot
Also the Pinkie Pie bit confused me
T.T R U A WIZRD
Eh, I'm not really a Pinkie fan so this chapter was a dud for me. But that's just my personal taste. Moving on!
Written like a baws. That is all.
I lied, stayed up for one more chapter.
While I am not a big Pinkie Fan myself, I did enjoy this chapter and it is well written in my own opinion.
I expected this alot less than I should've based on Pinkie and Dash in ch 5. And it was awesome. And intense, in all the good ways.
star approved
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I disagree, pinkie's excursions into the text itself make it just a bit more complete for me
Pinkie Pie breaks the fourth wall like a bawse!
Such a fabulous intermission
Poor fourth wall..
Anyway, things are moving quite fast.. I must be honest, I did NOT anticipate Dashie & Pinkie... Doing this, I didn't even expect them to get together as Rarity & AJ.
Anyway, I think this smily speaks for itself
Not a big fan of Rainbow Pie... but surprisingly this works!
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After reading these first five chapters I feel like...
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and if the image doesn't work then i feel like everyone is in love but me! dammit it's like i'll be forever alone
The wall.
It just got broken...
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Brilliant...just...hah....brilliant ^^
Well done, you naughty writer, cutting out about 2k words by 'passing' the scenes....oh you are sooo bad. Just barely skimming the edge of the 'teen' line. And yet still keeping that cute innocence... hah, Love it.
I didn't really understand the scene where rainbow was leaning over the take off pad, I guess I just didn't visualize it right, but whatever, I'll re-read it later to try and make sense of it.
i love the story and the way you bring in clop fits seamlessly
Rainbow Pie huh, well definitely not the weirdest Mane 6 ship (that belongs to Twinkie imo), but I can't say I actually see those two getting together.