Twilight and Fluttershy realize they each love their Princesses much more than platonically...
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Can't wait to see our dear Fluttershy's face when Luna shows up at her door.
^^This.
Oh, and... hohoho, what will Twilight and our dear Princess get up to while Luna's out to play?
This is getting good. Nice job, Aria.
- Midnight Specter
Another amazing chapter. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Squee! Loving every update The build up is filling me with... anticipation
Oooh, I like Twilight's mental image of herself adorned in finery there.
Yeh! Update!
Spike quit box blocking damnit
Ah, it appears that things are starting to come together nicely. Er, so to speak.
Of course, given where we last left Luna and Celestia, perhaps more literally.
Perhaps I simply have a dirty mind. Oh well.
Things are going too well... I sense a big twist. Great updates!
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Dirty minds are important when reading romantic fiction. Makes it funnier.
Can't wait to see what 'important event' Celestia has for Twilight. Methinks a date is in store?
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I'm crossing my hooves for a date too . I've got 5 bits that says Twilight is going to be the most adorable nervous wreck while at this mysterious formal function. Anypony wanna place a bet against me?
oooooooh yeaaaaaah~ the moooooon
beautiful~~~~
sorry i had to say that... Looks like things are finally coming together, hopefully Celestia and Luna prepared for a rainy day
Celestia and Luna will be getting some this weekend.
I expect adorkable Twilight soon.
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Neither can I (says the man who has already seen it)! :D
And thank you both. :3
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I think that's supposed to be spelled "Antici..........pation." /frank.n.furter
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Why thank ya! Perhaps she'll be able to make it happen, one day... :3
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PFFFFT
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With their age, and personalities, one can simply never tell. It's just as plausible as any other activity, after several thousand years...
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I bundled these questions together for a reason. Any guesses?
And to everypony else, thank you! :D
So no one thinks that the two princesses planned this little weekend of fun?
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she goes on a date, makes an adorkable foal out of herself and get 'condolances' from the princess?
She turned her head to the side as she replied, her nervousness slipping the Royal We into her sentences with increasing frequency.
“Oh. I. That is... I had been hoping to do such.
I believe the first "I" there was intended to be "We," to be corrected by "That is... I," correct? My guess is your grammar check preempted you.
Also, I noticed you used -emphasis hyphens- in italics... this may be a stylistic choice, however, reverse italics is the accepted norm for adding emphasis to already italicized form.
Seeing as I frequent forums and chat without luxury of per-letter formatting, I find myself doing the same frequently... though I believe it cheapens writing ever so slightly to do so.
Considering your otherwise incredibly clean (or at least well-maintained) grammar, it's not something that detriments the piece much, but it is something I would try to void doing excessively.
Hope I don't sound too critical, just trying to be objective.
In any case I think this is a nice chapter to of...how to say... 'cool-down' the 'heavy skills' before reusing them, though I could also argue that the chapter is more or less a vehicle this time around.
(But I won't argue that since I'm currently deadlocked in my own chapter being very vehicular and not very substantial)
Well, I suppose that's my long winded and over-analytical commentary for the day.
Looking forward to the next chapter, this story is so engaging in it's own way.
Dis gon be gud.
"After all, friends don’t always need words to say goodbye."
I don't know why but that quote hit me like a double XL shot of 190 proof grain alcohol.
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im sorry...what?
"Two of Canterlot’s finest pegasii" - Son, I am disappoint. The correct spelling is pegasi
281304 For a moment there, I read your username as "Woodboner"
this story is plain simply EPIC, and Ariamaki you are hillarious both in the way the story is written and your comments XD
I well...*place appropriate awesome describing words about great story*
need i say more
oh rarity you made twilight a little black dress
DAS ÜBERMUFFIN !!!!!!!!!
cute, love the 'trading places' moment.