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PAGE SEVENTY-SIX.
Ahem.
It's quite hard to pull off a sudden shift from comedy to tender emotion but you pulled it off very well in this chapter, Ariamaki. Another delightful read.
"Celestia: Do your worst." Poor Twilight, we knew her well. I'm not sure I want to know what was on page seventy-six.
Oh god, the awkwardness is about to reach critical mass!
*Ahem* Either way, this has to be one of the best chapters yet, in my opinion.
The 'plot devices' line just killed me I had to stop reading for a few minutes.
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Welp, looks like we've cemented this thread's Special Word. :P
Thank you very much- I try to keep things balanced, as is my nature, so those transitions have always been a big stickler-thing for me.
...There's no real good way to say "something I am a stickler over", now that I think of it.
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Ahahah yeah, that choice in words may have been... unwise.
And here's a hint: It involves mural-sized paintings of... activities.
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Thank you! And oh yeah, the awkward train just keeps rolling through... :3
305322 Murals, eh? I wonder where the originals are now ...
... "And this is my private study, my faithf - Twilight! Come back!"
Can't... type... must... contain... lolgasm...
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"Big Sister, why does nopony ever go through the Traditional Canterlot Smuthall anymore?"
"...Let's just say they have become re-sensitized over the years, and leave it at that. Also, go put the pillory away, you're scaring the guards."
/totally-not-canon
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Oh dear, it seems you have gotten lolspew all over the comments. What a shame.
305330 "MINE EARNEST GUARDSMEN! WE REQUIRE YOUR IMMEDIATE ASSISTANCE IN THE TORTURE CHAMBER. And you ... bring that fruit basket."
Buy the book Twilight. Page 76 is worth it. ...Granted, soon enough you'll have her posing for you personally, so one supposes the question is... How long can you hold out?
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305322 That much I had figured out, it' just that the way Celestia was talking seemed to imply that said painting involved her and the Sun.
Edit: or certain fertility rituals.
Edit: or both.
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Ding ding ding! Give the reader a cookie! Or a muffin, or a cupcake, or really their choice of pastry.
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See previous statement in re: fertility rituals and Page 76
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Endurance, it turns out, might be one of her better suits...
You better commission page 76 by the way, and put up a link.
'They could have at least asked for a reference, it looks nothing like me!'
Hurk *LOLSPEWW*
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Man, I think I'll try casting some bait for a reverse commission:
If anyone can make a solid rendition of what they think "Page 76" looked like, I'll pay out with some influence. Maybe a sneak preview, a drop line, maybe an Intermission chapter or a one-shot. I won't make anything concrete, but I will say that ANY image is enough for me to do at least something in return.
I'll make sure to put that in the big blog post coming up-- Speaking of which, there is a big VERY important blog post coming along with Chapter 16. Major vote that determines how the next few weeks of updates go, ya see.
OK I don't usually read ahhahhmmmm *clops* but this one really is great funniest part of this story Twilight dropped the boook........."whats wrong twilight?" "p..p..page ...76." "oh um yes so i was asked to um.....well do certain things sometimes.....My thought on that trolololololol
TWILIGHT YOU FOAL! YOU NEVER ASK CELESTIA TO DO HER WORST IN THIS KINDA SITUATION! It's like asking for a perfect fusion of Molestia and Trollestia. NOPONY SHOULD HAVE TO ENDURE THAT
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Off in the far distance, on the open plains, a pink alicorn and a white alicorn face one another. Their grim determination shows through- Somepony had said Those Words, and so now they were duty-bound to answer. Rearing onto their hind legs, they moved closer in moments, forelegs arching through the air until two pairs of orichalcum slippers made contact.
"Fu...sion..."
...
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NOOOO RUN FOR YOU"RE LIVES SHE"LL MOLEST US ALLL!!!!!!!
>Do your worst
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SOOOO GOOOOOD
You've done it again! It keeps getting better. Mother of God...
And, Luna and Fluttershy are adorable.
When you said plot devices, I knew what you meant but I think it's funnier to imagine Celestia being handed a script for the rest of the story.
This story has a lot of cracky lulz, but I can't help but think it would be stronger if you were willing to show more rather than tell.
"But she was doing it right next to Twilight, her body shockingly close, her words breathy, each one sending her ears twitching out of reflex. And the things she was saying... Twilight didn’t know whether to melt, cry, come, or possibly all three."
This entire sequence just left me cold.
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That line in particular is going to be getting some investigation in the future. Suffice to say, it is the way it currently is for a reason.
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She wouldn't precisely need one. <.<
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...That gif. I had some other response, but now I am transfixed. There are no words, only an infinite spinning sea of faces.
305412 Would you accept ... live-action recreation?
Admit it, for how long did you sit and giggle to yourself after coming up with the 'plot device' line?
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Only a half-minute or so, give or take-- I was typing live into a GDoc with one of my fellow authors watching, so I couldn't delay too long. Didn't laugh over that one for NEARLY as long as I did an upcoming line...
And re-enactments would be welcome. ;3
What's worse?
Being dragged into said establishment by a couple of pony friends?
Or?
Being dragged into said establishment by mentor/ruler/close companion Celestia?
Also in reference to pg 26: Oooooooooooooooooooooooh Myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Guess I'm late to the party.
I'll say, you delivered with the Trollestia/Molestia part, so good. XD
I'm glad to see Luna and 'Shy are starting to move forward a bit, but I enjoy those Twilestia moments sooooo much it's not even funny.
Oh ah, because I have to, PAGE SEVENTY-SIX.
Loved every moment of it, but kinda sad that Fluttershy will get some before Twilight...
Any plans for doing a time travel related chapter, maybe twilight going to old canterlot to explore the making of page 76 ,ending up changing the future slightly by being in it too
I'm pretty sure that Celesta gets off when Twilight is embarassed.
Loved this chapter for Twilight about to faint and Fluttershy being a stud!
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Hmmm... I suppose the most correct answer would be "Visiting with both friends and the Princess." But what are the odds of me ever doing that?
/unsubtle.
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Why thank you! More trolling comes soon. :3
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Having seen the preview snippet for the time-travel episode, and already delving pretty deep into how the setting (and my interpretation of it) handles magic... I would not rule out time-travel shenanigans entirely.
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If you think you've seen Flutterstud now, just wait until Chapter 16 and onwards...
Wow. Other than the occasional grammar/spelling error, this is probably one of the funniest/best fics I have ever read. It has good plot (pun intended), good transitions, and so much awkwardness that my sides hurt. Keep up the good work.
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PAGE 76! And possibly 77....
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This ones a bit more... explicit, hence why it's a link instead...
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Despite Her hotness, since you are not JJ, I can't give credit for this.
However, if it turns out you actually ARE JJ, that's another story entirely.
"Do your worst."
Twilight...what have you done? WHAT. HAVE YOU. DONE!?
Oh dear... Now, I truly need moar. Damn you Celestia, why are you so terrifyingly enticing? Also, methinks that Celestia totally knows what Twilight wants and is being a Princess Tease. Also, there's a huge chance that you already covered that, and I have had a fail. If so, I blame Celestia. Her blasted murmurings have distracted me to the point that... I need alone time. Okai, bai.
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Hahahahaha, I squealed from laughing so hard. I have never done that. Take that laughing v-card with pride.
Back to the story. When I saw Four of Two has been updated email, I thought my day was made. Only after reading the chapter did I realize I was previously wrong. This story just keeps getting better and better. Please don't end this for a long while, use the suggestions every is giving b/c they would be a further funny adventure.
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I totally agree. Celestia must have a tasteful torturer inside of her. '
In the end, this chapter gets 6/5 Trollestia's
HeeHee - I remember helping you out with this chapter.
It was wonderful.
- Midnight Specter
"There should still be one in the fetish section!"
Why does it seem like people are only concerned with page 76? Why is nopony clapping for Fluttershy?
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...HAAA~!
*echo'd child's voice* Destroy us all! Destroy us all! Destroy us all! Destroy us all! *repeated ad infinitum*
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DAMMIT! I'M DYING! I'M LAUGHING SO HARD I'M DYING! D:
I approve.
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Hey, somebody caught that! You win a prize~!
You win an even better prize if you can get, in one guess, WHY he said that.
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Mmmh. :3
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Everypony is holding their celebration until they actually get to see more of her success.
Twilight is being a very silly filly for daring Mollestia to do her worst! This is definitely getting better with each chapter and the highlight of this one has to be best pony (aka Fluttershy) kissing Luna. I have a couple of ideas for drawing page 76 but I'll need to think for a bit longer...
oooh looks lke Twilight might get a personal "after hours tour of the national treasury"
and i guess this makes Luna and Fluttershy officially dating now? Oh well can't complain, continue writing sir.
Massive
Massive
MASSIVE
Google: "The Cannon Dildo". That's how massive.
(Disregard the comment below)
“Be calm, my student. If you do not want me to continue making my little jokes and jibes, all you must do is ask.”
“I... no. Just because all of this is new to me, doesn’t give me an excuse to back down from it. And plus, like you said, I’ve been here before. So go right ahead, Celestia: Do your worst.”
It took her a moment to realize what she had just said, and another to parse the horrifyingly wide grin on the Princess’ face. But despite that, she did not retract her statement- After all, if she couldn’t handle this, how could she ever even dream of a real relationship with her? How bad could it possibly be?
I REALLY need to know what Celestia was whispering to Twilight in order to paralyze her like that . That lil' unicorn never stood a chance in an environment like that, did she?
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Next up, I must have taken a five minute break to calm myself and steadily stop laughing after Twilight found the matching set of toys based off of both her and Celestia. She's already having a panic attack as a result of simply being in the store at the same time as her mentor, that pair of toys was the last thing she needed to see .
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PAGE SEVENTY-SIX.
I'm picturing Playboy-style centerfold spreads of Celestia... and I'm pretty sure I'm going to Pony Hell for it .
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Aaaaaand lastly, you did a wonderful job of turning the cuteness dial all the way up to eleven with that last scene between Luna and Fluttershy . Just seeing 'Shy that much closer to her goal really makes me smile .
“Do you have anything in the way of, ahem, ‘plot devices’?”
LMAO.
You have a brilliant sense of humor :). Watched.
Celestia, Get Twilight out o, before she has a stroke and in no good for you!
Okay, on a re-read... and my sleep deprived and hard-cider addled brain came up with a new image for the infamous page 76. Celestia, laying on a her throne, exposed, and being attended to by three mares(one of which is busy 'attending' () said princess) and a stallion, surrounded by an orgy of massive proportions while the sun beams in through the windows high above.
... I'm going to pony hell for that, but it is what it is... (insert molestia smiley)
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And what it is is... probably the new canon Page 76.
709359Okay, this is truly sad. I'm laughing and cheering over having come up with something so awesome.