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That was, well... It was very lacking on plot development. I liked the use of magic by Celestia and Twilight to clean up the sap, it was well described and easy to imagine, but besides that and Luna and Fluttershy suddenly going to Canterlot, nothing really happened. The chapter was still well written, no glaring errors that I remember and such. It just feels like you decided to delay getting on with the story, just to torture usdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png .
I also can't help but notice a certain similarity to your descriptions of their magical travel to the descriptions used in Alicorn of the Stars. It's still different, kind of like you explained the feelings and sensations of 'joining with the sun and reappearing where it shines'. I'm not accusing you of stealing it, just stating the similarity.
Whoa. Talk about some intense travel. Now I'm curious as to how Luna's trip with Fluttershy went. nicely done once again.
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1- "First posting" makes you look bad. Also, get that GIF out of my comment section.
2- Did you actually read this chapter? One would assume that major revelations like Luna having a personal aide that nopony has ever heard about, both Princesses having a magical form of transportation that is utterly unique to them, and the side effects it had on Twilight would probably qualify as, ya know, major plot developments. But apparently not the case for you, so... /shrug.*
3- Never heard of it, but I'll have to give it a look.
*- And just for reference, that same sentiment applies to any similar or even less-thought-out comments down below.
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This fic just got SARGE'D!
Agh! More! Moooore!
Interesting chapter, though. It's odd how you just throw this kind of stuff in. Not bad, but odd.
Update swiftly!
That is all.
Journcy Out.
Oh, and is it just me, or does that picture of plains look an awful lot like art to a Magic: The Gathering Plains card?
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It is, in fact! I totally forgot to add in the credit at the end, but you can even see Avon's artist signature. I believe this was a Zendikar one.
How unexpected. Celestia playing with a white-mana deck...
I mean, interesting travel theory. Not enough action though. With that title, I was expecting something different. XD
My, that was certainly an interesting travel-idea. My first though was that Celestia and Luna would be able to go wherever there is sun- or starlight. Kind of like stepping in one ray of light and stepping out of another. A seperate plane that surrounds all of the world is just as good, though. It certainly got Twilight worked up. Me like.
Now this was interesting. I have to wonder if Fluttershy will experience anything while traveling with Luna. Traveling with Celestia doesn't seem so bad....
So Celestia taps one plains and casts Divine Light.
Meanwhile Twilight taps one Celestia but is counterspelled.
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Actually, you got the entrance method 100% right. The extraplanar stuff is just what happens when they are between steps.
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Action is coming aplenty in the next WUBbled Intermission.
Wait, did I just spoil the fact that WUBbled is going to have Intermissions?
/shrug
Hope Luna lands in a bedroom, sounds like Fluttershy may need it if her reaction is similar to Twilight's
I'm going to go ahead and guess that isn't the normal response to travel by that kind of spell, considering Luna's (presumably) going to use the same thing on the return trip with her assistant, which I doubt she'd do if her's had...that kind of effect. Speaking of...I don't seem to recall. Have we met Luna's assistant to this point?
1182758 So then, that means it has the same limitations as those kinds of spells normally do, as far as being useless in, say, deep caves, or windowless rooms?
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Well said, although I know some people who are hesitant to read any Twilestia fics. I can't imagine why. Their such a cute couple! Also, I'm a huge fan of RariJack. Just saying.
Every time I see this updated, my day is instantly made. My twilestia fix has been satiated, thank you ariamaki.
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this could come in handy later
Love the whole solar plains thing. The picture made it for me, just made the whole scene seem that much more beautiful in my minds eye.
DAT COVER
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Magic 2011/12/13, I think. At least one of them, probably two.
Sigh. I have become thoroughly bored with this story. I don't want to be one of those ponies, but... nothing. is. happening!
Hooray for inter-spacial transportation. Hooray!
Interested in this "assistant" that Luna has. Could be good. And that rhymed.
Cheers,
~Plyxe
I'm almost afraid to ask this, but... Was Twilight's heated response a reference to the sunlight-invoked polyestrus cycle of horses?
Haven't read any of it yet, but i'm gonna make a few assumtions
1: Twilight is most likely going to be shut down by celestia
2:Luna will fall for Fluttershy (cuz who can resist the cutest pegasus ever, right?)
3:Rarijack.
4:Not sure about the pinkiedash but it seems most likely (although i always ship pikie with doctor whooves when I have the chance)
5:SEX. 'nuff said
6:I will regret putting it in read later and forgetting about it after I read it.
THAT IS ALL
GAD DAMNIT I MADE IT 1001!
MY OCD IS KILLING ME BUT I DON'T WANNA DOWNVOTE IT
The "Solar Plains" kind of remind me of the "Hidden World" from Clannad.
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I wonder if I have that Plains...
Pointless garbage filler chapter. Even more so than the previous.
1183371 In regards to your number one, if the author does THAT after all this I won't forgive them until it's put right.
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M10/11/13, as it turns out, so yeah, two of the ones you listed.
Beyond basic Plains artwork...
*sees update box*
"Ooh, I wonder what this is..."
*yesdance.gif*
My night was going to be boring. Then Four of Two updated and the world was sunshine and rainbows for 2.5k words. Even though the plot didn't move, I think Its obvious what dat announcement iz! I hope that ends well.
That was still torture, I have to keep waiting for the announcement!
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Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Is it a little sad that I knew right away where the picture was from?
Anyways, been enjoying this story for a while now; keep up the good work.
Oooooh, those are two very interesting methods of travel! Twilight seems... suitably impressed.
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My reaction when I saw a new chapter... Now, time to start reading :P
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I wonder if the assistant is made of wood, string and beads?
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By Celly's Shapely Flanks they'd better hope so!
If twilight was like THAT after about 10 seconds/one mile, imagine what will happen when fluttershy and Luna arrive
Assuming Luna's mode of transportation has similar side effects of course...
1182638 Second rule in the comment rules: "Don't "first post." If you think your post will violate this rule, don't post it!"
Read the rules maybe, or just try and be less annoying in general. That would typically help you avoid the first post idiocy attitude.
Ariamaki. As always, great work, and ty.
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Done.
I'm probably just being really cynical, but the aide doesn't seem suspicious in anyway yet, so I read it as Luna going to pick up her 'night' planner that helps her keep track of her schedule. Heck, Twilight didn't mention her brother to any pony, and no one really asked Luna if she had one or not. It could go somewhere from there, but it's nothing big right now.
The teleportation style and effect may be unique, but the form of travel isn't. Twilight, Celestia and Discord have been shown to all teleport easily enough, though I would assume Twilight can not teleport as far obviously. The side effect on Twilight is just an aphrodisiac, which is interesting, but doesn't really add anything game changing to the story. I would compare it to Celestia having that hoof fetish, interesting and sexy, but not story changing.
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Yeah, it strikes me as cynicism and intentional plot blindness, if not an attempt to be outright inflammatory. An entire dimension, or two, or more, outside of normal time and space? And Celestia is showing it to an eminently curious researcher. This is NOT teleportation-- They are going elsewhere and travelling through it. If it were just a visual 'reskin' of the same kind of teleportation Twilight used, then there would be no reason to dedicate an entire chapter to it. That's not even getting into the issue of a potentially-major character, somepony who is close to the otherwise-reclusive Luna on a regular basis. These kinds of things need to be introduced before they can become major-- Give it some time before you jump to conclusions.
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Sorry I didn't notice it was another dimension. I'm wasn't trying to start an argument.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png
This reminds me, I need to go down to the comic shop and try out the white deck I scrapped together a couple months ago.
I believe I own that particular card. But as usual, fantastic work.
An amazing chapter as always, and I eagerly await a new chapter of awesome.
Awesome chapter, can't wait to see how Lunas and Fluttershys tripp went. Hopefully Celestia will take Twilight to the solar plains again.
that ending was... sudden...
even though I saw it coming when it said she was rocking...
but i loled
you are too good at this my friend
A lot of people seem to have it out for Twilestia..... I have no idea why.
1251993 They released the game for free a while ago. Fileplanet download link
just finish all the chapter before this one and my god this is the second best fic i have every read. the detail. the story. every thing is sooooo good.
now i just need more
Thank the Gods I've caught up! I started reading this fanfiction again about two weeks ago, and I was on chapter 19 (I don't even know anymore) but I said to myself I'd only read this one until I got to the last chapter uploaded. And now, I can rest....
Or not, after seeing these things.....
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Fantastic fanfiction, Mah Boi! I especially love how Spike and the Crusaders get their own bits.
I read this in one go, congrats, not many sttories drag me in like that.
this rivals discworld in level of epicness
I demand MOAR
please
After reading this chapter i have to point out one huge, tragic flaw... It ended and now i gotta wait for more.
After reading the whole thing over the sunday i gotta say that i love this fic. It's well written, hilarious and without all the emo drama that seems to plague so many fics. It feels like watching the show with uuuh *cough* a bit bumped up pg rating
Well done sir, you have written something good and you should feel good.