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“O-of course! No sense in worrying, right?”
Another scream within.
Poor shy...
Oh, dat Lunaughty.
List Number 22.
I see what you did there.
And 23, I see what you did there too.
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Oh really? Do tell!
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I'd never be so obvious as to just blurt it out.
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WELP. That is... Pretty much the best thing ever.
"Who the hell do you think I *vicious hacking cough*."
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I know right?
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Damn it. I swear I KNOW what you are getting at too, but for the sake of the Sisters I cannot remember where it is from. And now that is going to annoy the hell out of me. All day too, mind you.
Well like all chapters past, this one did not disappoint. However for whatever reason I have been getting into the Vinyl/Octavia shtuff and the other fic is slightly more interesting. Maybe that is just because it is new. :pinkieshrug:
One last thing. Humans? really? Why? and,frankly, how? And why open an equin sex shop if they are hoo-muns? And how bad is Lyra gonna flip her shit? So many questions! Even the recently knighted and PhD receiving Sir Dr. Mr. Troll is stumped. So much so, that he didn't even show up to work today.
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And Ariamaki, I will have to challenge that title of best thing ever with this
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=D0TqVaEMlgI#t=57s
Yus. The first update I've seen since I actually read the fic (which wasn't too long ago)
Matte Finish... is.. WHAT?!
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That's Patchouli Knowledge, from the Touhou series of vertical-scrolling bullet hell shooters.
And yeah, they outright said they were humans a grand total of... Like, 10-20 chapters ago? And so did Pinkie, even more blatantly. LIke, verbatim. Matte has said "hand" at least once. I can count dozens of hints dropped on it.
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See previous statement.
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Excuses. Excuses, I know But maybe I should stop reading this in the dead of night when you release. And then maybe, just maybe I will remember any of that,
And now there are humans in this story.
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*edit - comment continued*
funny though, I figured you would have gone for changlings instead. But alas, too late now..
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come with me Melancholy and together we shall pierce the heavens!
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Previous statements in this comment section. See them. Also, glorious reaction image.
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Must I read them as well? For as far as I am concerned with the exception of 4 others, all comments are below me and therefore not worth my time. :Blueblood:
dunno... you better have a really good reason to bring humans in this story, which is awesome (the story, not the humans) ( till now ). having humans in a story let them tend to become un-awesome and most times even rubbish. so you will need a (like statet above) a really good reason, if they are to play a major role in the story from now on...
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Nope! They'll remain primarily background supporting cast, which is just the way they like it.
Ish... humans? I don't want to sound exactly like everyone else... but humans? Ish. When I search for new stories to read I automatically skip anything with a "human" tag. I just hope this doesn't end up ruining the story for me. And I might mention that this very long retelling of what has already happened is making my patience wear thin. Please return to being awesome. Please?
Your update came at precicely the right time. I was feeling rather down due to an unpleasant story about unpleasant evil doing between Luna and Celestia. And then along comes "Four of two" to give me some warm Celestia & Luna sisterlove and all is right in my world and mood again. I can't thank you enough, Ariamaki, you rock! (Would ponies say that too, I wonder? Or would they say something like "you buck!" or whatever? Hmm, time for a pilosophical debate on that...) I give you a Luna & Fluttershy pic (though I should mention that it's obviously not mine) as a token of my gratitude for cheering me up and making me feel a whole lot better.
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More than happy to help.
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It is very hard to return to something I never left!
But in all seriousness, Matte and Nickel's existence (much less their nature) is a background element, and the Sun and Moon re-tellings are just a framing device so we can see what everypony else is up to. It's not going to be too much longer, so don't fret so much.
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This is the first time ever I have been glad to see humans in a fic and enjoyed reading about it...
Actually there is that one about the guy who boards with Derpy after being sucked into the Everfree and stomped by Fluttershy for trying to eat a chicken which was HIGHLY amusing but...
I mean, that reveal...I was like: Changelings Changelings Chan- Bugs? He's exploiting the-
Celestia noticed too? It wasn't just me?
Dear Princess Celestia
I have to leave forever now. My home Planet needs me
Wooooosh
~
Matte died on the way back to his home planet.
Oh dear, Humans..... Well, you haven't steered us wrong in this story yet. Here's hoping that adding Humans to the mix doesn't lynch the story like it has so many others.
Anyway, damn funny stuff with Fluttershy's epic freakouts.
Ms. “Stuck Royalty’s Horn Down Her Throat”
I think that was my favorite line. Can't say I was expecting the human thing, can't say I'm entirely in favor of it either, but... I suppose I trust your writing skills enough to believe you either have a very good reason for that, or it was a random thing (unlikely given your track record).
But oh well, we shall see how it pans out.
Come on guys, there's plenty of human in equestria stories that are pretty damn good! (Sophistication and Betrayal, anyone?) Although this is the first one I've seen where the human characters aren't the main characters. It's certainly a creative idea, and I'm curious to see where it takes us.
Side Note: Every time I see your name Ariamaki, I see Aramaki instead. Meaning this is what I imagine you look like:
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If you don't know the reference, it won't seem like a compliment, but it totally is.
Still loving the story, though same reaction on the humans thing as everyone else. If the story isn't about everyone being humans I prefer no humans, but I'm soured by seeing all of the 'So and so travels to Equestria magically and read to find out what I...err..he/she does!'
Still love the story, and quite curious why Luna needs a couple of sex shop owners help with her announcement *unless she just asked them to stop by and talk to Celestia for the heck of it anyways o.O;; but somehow I doubt that*.
741756 I guess you weren't a fan of "My Little Dashie". Just because there are humans in a fic doesn't make it bad...
Saw the human thing coming. It was hinted at like a million times.
Also, Fluttershy is champion of deepthroat.
And, uh, not much else happened. Although Celestia and Luna are clearly up to shenanigans.
742066 That is glorious, and exactly what I think half the time as well
Eh, I don't know. I was already mildly irked at Nickel and Matte, with their super-detection spells and invisibility to Princess-sense, and their being humans just makes that worse. They double shouldn't be able to fool the Princesses, because they're not even familiar with pony magic aargh aargh aargh
I just read the entire thing in one piece... no breaks.
I am very impressed, and very addicted! Great read, and I cannot wait for the next chapter
I knew it! Now my brother owes me five bucks. Thanks for that
Changelings would have made more sense.
Oh yea another chapter! awesome as always!
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They exist OUTSIDE of pony magic. That's why the Princesses have such trouble with them.
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Yes. Yes they would.
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We now have all three Lebowski ponies represented.
This chapter was worth every excruciating moment of waiting. Fluttershy's brain was so full of distractions that I had to stop and clean coffee off my monitor. Twice.
Luna catching Tia off guard with the list - priceless. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
And cliffhanging the girls by talking about a cliffhanger? Isn't there some sort of rule against that?
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Except they can use unicorn levitation and such, so they don't exist outside of pony magic. And, how does 'being outside of pony magic' help them see Celestia when there's no light bouncing off her?
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I never said they weren't able to use Equestrian magic. I said they weren't bound to it.
And as for seeing past the transparency,
"I like to think of life as a game... I'm just working with the bugs."
Matte has cheat codes enabled.
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Hmmm, who else do we know who treats life as a game, and cheats at it?
I mean, am I the only one who has a problem with human OCs with Discord powers being inexplicably shoved into the middle of this sweet/hot shipping/clop fic?
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Whoever said Discord was the only one?
That checklist bit was simply genius. Also, reading the last few 'entries' made me think of this:
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So, here's the "trick":
The Royal Instinct means that Celestia and Luna automatically know the name of any and all ponies.
Matte and Nickel were never ponies to begin with- Pony-shaped, certainly. Pony-esque, maybe. But not ponies.
So it's not that they have some miraculous power that lets them ignore the rules-- They just aren't a valid target, so to speak.
Okay so I'm going to keep my comments to my self because I'm sure you will explain your self soon.
Okay, yeah, seriously. I want to know the story with Matte and Nickle.
I just stayed up for two days straight just to read this fix non stop... I'm now questioning my motives.
I really love this story so far and it's obvious that you're an amazing writer, but there is one thing that continues to urk me. When Luna and Fluttershy were preening you mention that they are only realigning the feathers. When birds preen, normally it's to take off the casings on mature feathers. only thing that bothered me, mainly because I'm also obsessed with birds. Great read so far, keep up the good work!
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That one falls entirely on my shoulders, but I personally feel that pegasus feathers are a bit more "anchored", and tend to need adjustment more than removal / stripping. I will make sure to be more clear about the hows and whys of that in the future.
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:"Give it time."
Matt Finish and Nickle 'n' Dime = Matt Finch and Nicole van Dine?
Being a descendant of the van Dine would be thematic... Consider van Dine's 15th rule:
The truth of the problem must at all times be apparent — provided the reader is shrewd enough to see it. By this I mean that if the reader, after learning the explanation for the crime, should reread the book, he would see that the solution had, in a sense, been staring him in the face-that all the clues really pointed to the culprit — and that, if he had been as clever as the detective, he could have solved the mystery himself without going on to the final chapter. That the clever reader does often thus solve the problem goes without saying.
741623 Or the use of "glove" in the manuel for the gift Matt and Dime gave Twilight.
742066 i hear his voice in my head whenever i read Ariamaki's comments too
I'm a sixteen and a half year old guy...i'm not gonna lie. when i saw this update? Fluttersquee
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Humorously, as some recent comments on my userpage and other fics have noticed, He of the Infinite Badassery and Ludicrous Hair IS actually the inspiration behind my name. So you're not far off!
aww man, your chapters are getting shorter and shorter. loved the list and I'm interesting how you handle this twist
745187 I very much enjoy your special brand of psychosis. Frankly, I saw the human thing coming like a fat woman on a unicycle. And as slong as there will be no human on pony action, I am perfectly accepting of them. Humans get Dischord powers in Equestria? That's so many levels of awesome.
As for the rest of you, shut yo damn mouth. Humans were obviously going to play a part. So deal with it. And they haven't pulled any humany stuff yet. So chillax.