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Nice timing. I just finished another story and came back to my tracked stories...
Ah! another chapter!
Just one thing
"(for now, of course (she squelched that thought, worrying she might jinx herself (a thought which was also quashed for being absurdly paranoid and mildly unscientific)))"
The 'squelched' should be another quashed, methinks.
Other than that, Woohoo, you rock!
The surprises have been doubled!
hmm so far we have
-celestia in no certain terms admitting she *really* likes Twilight
-Luna in ponyville
-lyra and bon bon out of nowhere
-Twilight doing her favorite thing with her favorite person
-Celestia sends Luna off so she can be alone
-Rarity and Flutter plotting
OOOOh yeah will this be a good weekend
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Glad the timing was solid-- There WAS going to be a super-short bonus chapter coming out this morning instead, with this held off until the evening, but I decided to stick this up and work on polishing the bonus a bit longer.
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Nah, I wanted to use a synonym instead- Twilight gets kinda 'dictionary' when she's flustered, and thesaurus to boot. :P Plus, I can only have 4 Quash in this deck at once, and I wanna preserve those for when I really need them. /magicnerd
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Also coming up this weekend, we have the mysterious "formal event", a stupendous amount of chocolate, surprise appearances from bit-part ponies, and... shenanigans.
Thank you all, once again!
Another wonderful chapter. But what really stood out was Celestia raping the fourth wall. It's funny when Pinkie does it, and adorable when Fluttershy does it, but holy shit it's kind of scary when an insulted Sun God does it. ~Run to the hills!
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A.) God tier avatar.
B.) Thanks!
C.) Trust me, I'm already bunkered over here.
Tell me Ariamaki, do you like bananas?
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Sorry the first thing that popped into my head after 'adorkable' was Zooey Deschanel..
291014 Are you a mmmmm beeyetch that likes bananas? Or are you a mmmmm beeyetch that doesn't like bananas? Cause you about to go bananas...On the MOOOOOOONNNNNNNAAAAAA!!...
Sorry...couldn't resist.
I registered just now. And I demand more chapter right now.
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Nope- Citrus for life! The moon is made of LEMONS by gods!
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:D Why thank you for the honor! And there will be DOUBLE chapters today / tomorrow-- A bonus Rarity-focused non-clop PLOT CRITICAL chapter before Wednesday's normal scheduled update.
Lyra is so awsm. She's like pfft, Immortal Moon Goddess better not look at Bonnie in that way or Im'a hafta slap a filly.
Solid updates!
291236 Lyra gives no fucks to nopony.
Lyra for president!
Also, am I the only one who thinks 4th wall Celestia is secretly a 14/14 Indestructible Eldrazi with Annihilator 5 and a tap exile? Jus' sayin'
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Lyra gives precisely as many fucks as she has fingers~!
...
Now Lyra is sad.
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Aw great, I make a single Magic joke in the comments and suddenly the pony cards start coming out! Quick, somebody get the Maro, or possibly the MaRo. There's still time to salvage this one!
((Celestia has like five variants and they're all Planeswalkers. Just sayin' :P))
Celestia breaks the 4th wall? Everyone run and panic!
Once again, thanks for giving me something to read in class. XD
I checked my email during work and saw this was updated and I was all "Yes!" just like Twilight in my head.
Ha, nice take on Lyra.
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dates are formal arn't they?
and who know maybe she'll get a personal tour through Celestia's "muesuem of Lust" (i trademark that name) and see her "collection"
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Celestia's cutie mark isn't the sun, it's white mana.
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Oh god everybody run she can see the audience!
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Thank ya. :3
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Potentially.
(this answers both lines, ya see)
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PFFT. Artificer Rarity may be closer to canon for this fic than you would initially iamgine
SCENE BREAK DISRUPTED
Speaking of expressing things, Celestia wonders if the author isn't possibly using her lack of any present relationships as a veiled insult. Not to mention playing up her easily-distracted free-associating nature, amongst other offenses... As such, she would like to know how he feels about long-term placement on a celestial object somewhere. She has heard the moon is quite tolerable this time of year.
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The author, in return, would like to excuse himself to go narrate for somepony else. Quickly.
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This had me laughing inside for well over a minute . Ah, I needed that .
Also, that Lyra's a pretty cool guy, she plays the lyre and doesn't afraid of royalty or anything .
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And lastly, did I hear somepony say shenanigans? Because, and I'm not sure if you know this already, I likes me some shenanigans .
yay another good chapter i think... if thats ok that is...
(sorry felt like tryin to do something fluttershy would do dont know if it fits though...)
any way keep it up lookin forward to MOAR later on.
Lyra's behavior around royalty is badass. I would probably do that too.
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I know better than to trust artificers! Jhoira has brought me nothing but pain! PAIN I SAY.
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You say to the man with seven copies of Zur the Enchanter. SEVEN.
Note to me circa the summer of 2006: A three-man solo one-sitting draft of an entire Coldsnap box was never a good idea.
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Ehehehe, there is much shenaniganing, much awesome Lyra, and (eventually) more Celestia wall breakage. Of course, at least four other characters are capable of it so far... Did I say four?
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It most definitely is. :3
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See previous statement in re: Lyra, fucks, and fingers. She is just that BA.
293347 why thank ya kindly
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...Mind sending me one? I'd like to strain my relationships with my MTG-playing people...
The 4th wall break was good for a quick chuckle, but I felt like it really hurt the flow. The giant bold text and the large gap afterward really snapped me out of my immersion. I could see doing that in a more comedy driven fic, but the combination of usually subtle comedy and overall serious subject matter made that really stand out. It might have felt better without the massive 'we are ending your immersion here' signs all around it; you know, just subtly weaving it into the text so it takes a moment for the reader to realize what is going on.
Just my two bits.
Otherwise, loving the story so far. The level of characterization you give is very good.
Wait....FOUR characters are capable of 4th wall breakage, you say?....well, we know Pinkie does it, and now Celestia, so probably Luna as well....Discords still stuck as a glorified garden gnome....so that just leaves......oh goddesses.....SCREWBALL?!??!??!
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Actually, something might be arrangeable. Hit me up in a PM.
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The fourth-wall breaks in 4o2 are definitely -meant- to kill immersion and be a bit worrying. Whereas normally, it's a bit of comedic thing, around here it's... Well, potentially worrying. Some characters are definitely displaying more than their normal amount of influence...
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"...four other characters..."
So with Pinkie and Celestia accounted for, that leaves at least four MORE... I'm sure you'll figure them out eventually. ;3
WHAT IS THIS. THIS IS TOTALLY UNACCEPTABLE. I WANT MORE. GIVE ME MORE.
Ahemm. Sorry for that. Absolutely awesome fic so far, even if you have accelerated the relationship somewhat. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Yeah, a very important running theme in 4o2 is that every relationship evolves differently. Some go through great amounts of angst, some manage to get things together without any issues at all. Love is felt and expressed in different ways, as is lust. I make sure to keep everything properly rooted in personal experiences, so I can assure you, no matter how outlandish something might seem, it is entirely feasible, if my past has anything to say about it. <.<
Bonus chapter today or tomorrow, 3 chapters go up this week even if they go up a bit slow. Medical issues in the family are keeping me from doing my usual brisk pace.
Lost it at the Authors rebuttal to Celestia. Lmao'd ^_^
Ha, Lyra is awesome. 'Oh look, a princess. Cool.'
"She only.had this one weekend" -
We are gathered here to honor the memory of the Fourth Wall. Never before had someone other than Pinkie so skillfully massacred it, and its presence shall be missed sorely.
Ish.
ONWARD WITH THIS NEW SILLINESS!!!
seems like pinkie has a run for her money, man it would be awesome to see her and celestia just break the forth wall in some epic display of shenanigans and epicosity, I will be waiting hasbro
That poor fourth wall...
Sssh... It's going to be okay Fourth Wall... Celestia only broke it once...
Unlike Pinkie
Gah, that 4th wall break was crippling, why do you hate my immersion so?
I get the comedic value and all that, though I'd keep it to Pinkie.
"It had been a it of a rush"
*bit
Thought you might appreciate that ^_^
In Fan Of Most Everything's canon, Ditzy Doo is friends with both Jace Beleren and Tezzeret, "Pinkamena Diane Pie" is a name nearly as feared as "Nicol Bolas", and Pinkie knows how Equestria — and the entire Plane of Ungula — was made, because she made it. She also created Discord and his opposite number, Lauren Faust. Planeswalker Celestia doesn't scare me.
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Wait. MTG and MLP? I'm very confused now.
The mental image of Bonbon yelling nonchalantly "royalty is here to see you" just cracks me up
Do you like bannanas ? Well it doesn't matter cause you are going TO THE MOOOOON bye bye now :3
3780411 BEEEEEEEYYITCH!!!!!
Quiet? They would treat you like a monster? They would know if you're a monster, as they have weekly, if not daily run-ins with them.
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Yeah The Everfree Forest Equestria's monster central is right next door.
Llyyyraaaa.
BAHAHAHAHAHA I love this