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why you do! moar please!
New chapter! Love the dialogue.
AUTHOR'S NOTE COMMENT
Don't be surprised if this chapter gets edited once or twice throughout the day- I forgot that GDocs formatting doesn't carry over colored text automatically.
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:3
503346
Thanks!
was that Luna in the end?
One request: Celestia must never utter the nickname Twilee. EVER.
I'm guessing time travel is involved! The awesome kind.
503373
Mmmaybe.
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Also mmmmaybe.
503399
Of course not! That's purely SA's thing.
503399 Second.
GAH! YOU! YOUUUUUUU!
...
*sigh* I will wait.
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Hey, a foursome involving Twilight, Celestia, Twilight and Celestia would be quite the read.
MY HEADCANON IS ADDRESSED!
We very nearly saw Celestia lose her flawless composure in that scene. If she hadn't been wearing her shoes... Aw lawdy.
503399
Agreed.
"Royal Instinct"
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but yea I'm still really excited for the chapter were the 2 pairings meet
took a while for this latest chapter to come out.... or that could just be my mind playing tricks on me
still great chapter and that moment where twilight put Celestia's hoof in her mouth..... priceless
my personal opinion: Cele or Tia as Celestia's nickname and twilight should remain twilight
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503423
Why thank you. :3
503531
It has come up a few times before, actually! Celestia and Luna innately know the name and station of anypony they meet... And were both surprised when it FAILED to work on Matte and Nickel.
And yeah, this chapter took a bit longer than even the last several, due to some health stuff. More is on the way, of course!
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503430 ......i really wish i could art or write this.
OH SWEET CELESTIA, FINALLY.
Ahem, sorry. I had been wondering when the next chapter would show up and, damn you and your cliffhangers. XD
Have I said how much I enjoy this story already? I think I have, but just in case, so freaking much. Yep.
I'm not quite sure I could possibly survive a double Twilestia scene, if it were to go that way by some (sexy) chance... A very weird (and I mean sexy, very sexy) chance...
Well, a couple of nice "morning-after" scenes with our two new couples. I like how both pairs are looking for that extra little bit of alone time, and start off getting interruptions. Nice touch with Celestia's hoof sensitivity, though honestly with her ever-present set of hoof-covers, I had to wonder if you were planning on a sensitivity issue that could be enjoyed. (I'll admit, that was more of a hair trigger than I'd expected, but then she has been holding things in for a really long time before now, hasn't she?) That was a horrible, horrible thing to do to us with a cliffie, though. I suppose it could be a sneak attack (there is that pesky "Adventure" tag in the story list, after all), though I really don't want to consider what Twilight is likely to do to somebeing that shows up and interrupts her Celestia time in a negative way.
About the only other comment I have this time is that the chapter feels short. It's not that anything is missing, per se, just that things felt a bit rushed. If that's intentional to build anticipation for the next chapter, it worked quite well. At any rate, I'll be looking forward to the next installment.
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Thank you VERY much, on all commentary accounts... And yes, it's good to be worried about the Adventure tag.
As for how short it feels... Maybe I'm planning on another update MUCH sooner than the last few.
LUNA in da house
4of2 updated ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh; and Bah mini cliff-hanger; i need more. MOAR MOAR MOAR
um that is if its ok with you.
Hoof Fetish
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/bow
firstly; twilestia is back!
secondly...you and your damn cliffhangers...
anyways, now as twilestia is back in action...MOAR!!! (well i dont have a problem with lunashy, i just never enjoyed that pairing that much; still fun to read about though...in moderate amounts)
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Well, if there's another chapter already rolling down the ammo feed towards the launch tube, all I have to say is:
Quicker fixes for my addiction is always a good thing, and I trust that you will always give us quality product, regardless of the posting schedule you choose.
WOOOOOOO!!!!!!! Always stoked when 4o2 updates.
I'm excited for whatever is coming down the pipe. Carry on...
suddenly matte appears and informs the new couple they have to travel to the chamber of fornication and show their love to one another to unlock the secret key of D'amour, which'll lead them to the secret shrine of the pagan goddess Aphrodite. there they will learn the secret to true love strong enough to defeat the changeling empire!
Bahaha, oh bby~
Loved it! Damn you and your epic cliffhangers! MOOOOOAAAAR!!!!
... If, um, if that's okay with you...
The levels of gusta are off the charts.
Another great chapter ending with another mind blowing cliffhanger.....
I both love and hate these things, but I know your story is worth waiting for.
> Blue magic
> Long time
Cadance. Calling it.
Also, OTP + hoof fetish. This is... not irrelevant to my interests.
Awwww, such a nice, quiet pair of scenes of the two new couples quietly getting to kn - *mwah**mwah**mwah* CRASH *tinkle*
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Why yes, I AM my damn cliffhangers! :D
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PFFFFT
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As has been said before, MEGA Gusta.
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As for the magic, no comment- Although Cadence's magic isn't blue at all, so lol dunno.
As for the hoof fetish... :3
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Hey! That table survived... Barely.
507014
Then they were simply not trying hard enough.
507014
im just gonna correct that and pretend it never happened..
Oh Celestia...I don't think your chef was insulting your choice in mares...I think they are just jelly.
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Yay, new chapter!
"Luna perked up her hears." => "Luna perked up her ears."?
507014
Her magic isn't blue? Obviously I require punishment. Punishment in the form watching the finally again. I'll endure it gladly.
(What color is it?)
EDIT: I was right! In all my Mumble server-friends' faces! They told me I was wrong... But I proved em wrong! Heeheeheeeheeeheeaahaahahaa
507014
Nope.
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Tis not I that requires rewatching, tis thee.
Also, 480p is the new HD.
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I wouldn't really call that blue. Teal or light blue, sure. I suppose we can both blame FiMFiction's terribly limited text color palate.
*snicker* still planning on drawing the REST of the royal regalia :P IF you ever describe it :P
I have a distinct feeling there's a little bit of DOOM incoming...and i bet that was the Changeling I heard about. pity me, i got roped into something last weekend, and by the time I noticed the clock, I'd missed HALF of it!
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Certainly! The Royal Regalia is as such:
Four (4) Slippers
One (1) Diadem / Crown
One (1) Collar
Two (2) Ear Piercings- For Luna, one is a five-ray star, the other a half-moon. For Celestia, a six-ray star and a lick of solar flame.
Two (2) Nipple Piercings- These are relatively plain domed studs.
One (1) Clit Piercing- Luna's is the crescent moon of her Cutie Mark, Celestia's is the full sun of her own.
Any need for further description, just ask. :3
And if you're looking for the second half of the finale, just do a YouTube search for "Canterlot Wedding" and you'll find the whole two-parter as a single video.
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okay, I'll do my best. probably make some variants, depending on how they're oriented. note, I WILL have some trouble with both a pony head...and lady parts
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Well, there's definitely some resources out there for help with both-- Lots of very good pony smut artists who make sure to go for anatomical accuracy. But either way, thank you very kindly. :D
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I was basing my colors off the assumption that all ponies are pastel. Ergo: blue = tealish. BUT I GET WHAT YOU MEAN. Friends on League of Legends told me her magic was purple, so I had to call bullshit. SO MUCH OF IT.
Looks blue to me:
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(The top one that is Cadence, not the bottom one that is the imposter).
Cadence? Luna?
Man that season finale did a number on this fic, actually...
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A number which I have actually already planned for!
...Especially in regard to Ms. Cheeselegs the Impossibly Hot.
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Oh god I sense a Great And Powerful Trixie self ship coming on...
"We are powered by love, and there is no force in the universe GREATER THAN TRIXIE'S LOVE FOR HERSELF!"
~Trixie sheds a single tear
"TAKE ME NOW YOU BEAUTIFUL, MISUNDERSTOOD MARE".
And then they scissor. With magic.
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Pffft, scissoring is for silly humans. Trixie has no need of that when pony anatomy allows her the wondrous joy of backing*!
*- An actual behavior mares in heat perform, don't look it up unless you're a fan of pony smut... And if you aren't, how are you still here?