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You my friend are a artist though that last chapter did seem like the end but apparently you have different plans hmmmm?
I was wondering if I would see an update for this today or tomorrow. And I REALLY wanted to not read it right now because that would mean I would have nothing for class tomorrow (well, ok, I have a book, but it's not as fun and awesome and perfect and so many other things I can't think of that would describe this story), but I couldn't resist.
"Somepony who can actually keep up with me... In all regards.”
I loved that, by the way. XD
Another awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one as usual.
[Edit] Damn it, 35 seconds late to being first. That's what I get for writing a mini-wall of text. XD
..........I was the first to comment whohoo!!
Wait, if music and/or poetry can function as spells...
That would explain quite a lot.
I was busy and didn't catch Chapter 20 until just tonight and then I finished it and was like and then a minute later I saw that chapter 21 was up
Best Day EVER
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Ehehehe, I am all about dem plans. :3
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I wish I could more consistently provide stuff for you in class time, but I like to update around midnight my time, give or take.
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And only more explanation will be found from here. :D
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Glad to serve!
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I see that.
Haha, "Abject terror".
Awsum, can't wait for some FluNa? LuShy? action.
Ooo, expounding upon the nature of magic! I love when something clicks well like that As to the rest, d'awwwwww just about covers it ^_^
I have taken this past week to read through this story up until this point, and I have to Say as a writer myself you have a great talent for it. It's not often I get to read something as well thought out and as well written as this is. I can't wait to see what you have planned next Great job.
First! And aww!!! So cute! Go get you some twi!
Good...
YES MOAR CELESTIAXTWILIGHT!
also they are so adorible together. I cant wait to read about what happens on their date, whatever happens it is sure to be full of ,, and a whole lot of moments
looking forward to it!
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You are definitely going to be happy with upcoming chapters and sections, then. :3
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Thank you, quite a bit.
This is SO GOOD. Keep writing, Kind sir.
Stayed up to catch the newest installment. Don't regret the decision at all!
Bring on moar Twilestia!
...
I want to see what Twi's "dress" looks like
Stupid sexy Twilight...
Oh shit Celestia just used the canter-lock voice.
Twilight raising her hips... no dear not yet, later.
yes abject terror is to be expected.
apparently Celestia is humming "Let's get it on"
"No sense in rushing" My new name for this fic. come with me, the clop is this way, but look, some roses over here. pretty aren't they?
322031 That was already a guarantee :P I've got to say, I love straight exposition, but I love well interlaced exposition through plot even more, and you seem to have mastered the art :) (Don't ask me why I like exposition more than standard plot. I have no clue)
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Gladly! :D
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Not much, if her reaction is anything to go by. <.<
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A lot of people, myself and you included it seems, just really take joy in solid world-building. I can think of some series you would really enjoy for that aspect, if you like the way I handle it. Look into the recently-completed Negima!, which is generally phenomenal, and specifically in re: exposition.
I knew they would "delay" going to the party
and now I leave you with this game
it is very fun and makes you want to beat your own high score (mine is 43,462 try to beat it)
:( This chapter ended too quickly!
I always liked alternative forms of magic casting, one can read about the old hand-wavy, chanting magic so much before it gets a little stale.
Movement based magic just sounds so cool from martial arts perspective too. You make your enemy think you are evading or blocking when you are really preparing a spell, whether it be to boost you ability further or a straight up attack spell.
Seriously Ariamaki. This is the second time to have updated this story when I was in the middle of something else.
I am in the middle of another fic when this is updated. I am coming back in like 2 hours, when i finish the last couple chapters, and reading this. Count on it!
EDIT: (to avoid a double post)
Celestia stared for a second before breaking into laughter.
“Aaaah, Twilight. I... I’m truly glad you wrote me that letter. This seems like the beginning of something I’ve been looking for- Somepony who can actually keep up with me... In all regards.”
Well, at least that Mature rating is no longer reserved for Luna and Fluttershy.
And was it just me or did that chapter seem a little short to anyone else? I don't wanna sound like i'm angry or complaining or anything like that but it did feel a little like filler with little development.
So glade option 2 won out!
Trollestia=Lulz.
Molestia=Creepy.
Smutty Trollestia=*Guffaw's something like Jimmy Carr telling a joke to Brian Blessed*
322066 I echo that sentiment. This is heartwarmingly lovely, and will lead to raw awesome.
322126 You sir, are 20% cooler than any other writer on here dimply for drcidong to do this.
Arguably the best at Twilestia.
Keep on typing.
Another fantastic chapter. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Celestia really likes pleasing Twilight.
Good lord, their chemistry is adorable.
DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
“Celestia?”
“Yes?”
“...May I kiss you?”
“You don’t have to ask.”
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by celestia's mane!!!!.... that was excellent
GLORIOUS.
322126 World-building is just the best thing. It grounds the story so much better.
I am amused, and gratified to see, that Twi is skilled enough to pick up an entirely new magical skill essentially by accident - and generate the Royal Wingboner in the process.
Hey, if songs can be magic, this partially explains Pinkie's singing! It implies that earth ponies with exceptionally deep reserves of magic (such as results when they befriend THE ENTIRE TOWN) actually CAN cast spells, in a manner of speaking. Bewitching spells that make everypony smile and sing along, spells that summon laughter and wreck schedules in favor of impromptu parading, that turn town square into party central. In other words, the best kind of magic!
Also, Twilight's talent being Magic is distinct from her position as the Element of Magic chiefly in the degree to which she is connected to everypony around her. The Element would be able to draw on the talents and magical reserves of his or her friends, as an essential aspect of the mythic role of unicorns in such arrangements (see 'Hearth's Warming Eve' for another demonstration of this concept).
EDIT: Wait, did I just specify that the Element of Magic has to be a unicorn? I don't think that's actually intrinsic to the role. Given that she seems to understand on an almost instinctual level that friendship is magic, I suspect that it would've been possible for Pinkie Pie to attune to Magic instead of Laughter. The circumstances would've had to be very different for that to happen, though... Maybe somepony should write about that.
Sweet mercy am I behind on replies. Allons~y!
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You, sir, are an incidental foreshadowing machine. Keep up the good, albeit apparently psychic, work.
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Well, let's see: It covers several hours of in-plot time, brings up scads of new information, cements their relationship's nature, involves their first bit of promiscuous activity... Nope, seemed fine to me!
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Hehehehe...
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It is definitely an entirely Twilight thing to do... on both counts.
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Folks of the comments, pay attention to this one- Might be relevant eventually.
Also, somebody already has-- There's an Ask Blog out there for a Pinkie who's Magic, in a setting where everypony is rotated around the Element set.
For the curious: Ask Diane Pie
Was Celestia humming a Barry White tune? O_o Perhaps this one?
so as I'm rereading this I remembered that it had the most likes I had ever seen on a story and I look.almost 1400...
one thing went through my mind
'Holy shit i have a story that's actually catching up to this how the hell can something of my doing even come close to the gloriousness that is this masterpiece?!'
You are a god among fanfiction writers
"whorse"
You sir, have just made my headcanon meaning for the word horse in a world of ponies.
*NOTICE*
patient has just been released from hospital for last incident
patient has immediately been readmitted due to broken daaawww counter (heart)
*end of transmission*
BEST FIC EVER
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Funny seeing you in this comment section.
Centuries of practice also means centuries of build-up. I bet her explosions are legendary.
It's called a dancer, Twilight. And no, you most certainly are not. Unless that's some sort of attack spell, in disguise.
In regards to the tune, whenever I read about anyone--in any story/setting, not just ponies--singing lullabyes, or humming in general, I always think of A Home In The Meadow. I used to like How The West Was Won--the movie, that is, I only heard about the series a couple years ago--when I was a little kid. Then I got old enough to actually care about watching the whole thing, and not just the last 10-15 minutes of ''trains and horses,'' as I always called it back then. And I discovered that I actually really liked it.
cute, I like the slow teasing. when celly and twi finally hit the spot its gonna be a mess XP