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MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
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Commence read!
Holy balls, an update! Let the readings commence!
... Wow.
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IT LIVES!!!
Also, great chapter! The secret of Scootaloo's family will be REVEALED!
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Living or dead huh? Sounds like you're tempting fate. *grabs a shovel*
Well, Scoot has parents anyway, that's good to know. Also, poor Sweetie. Awkwardness
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Sure it is.
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Feel free to drop additional comments once you've read. :3
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MWAHAHAHA~!
1594078 Will do!
Surprised on the choice of Scootaloo's parents. Seems like Sweetie is going to freak out. Spike also has to figure what he is going to do.
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I'm terrible at leaving in-detailed analysis and comments, so I apologise for this being so short. I know that's bad, because I practically orgasm when I get a comment on my stories longer than a paragraph, but I'm shit at providing them. What I will say is that I love the explanation for Scootaloo's lack of pegasus abilities at her age. It's rather interesting and seems original and you should feel good about yourself.
1594014 Does it still count as self insert when you insert your proofreader Star?
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Oh it counts as inserting something alright~!
I tthink Scootaloo's dad sounds cool
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Not the face, not the face!
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I think it's Mary Sue syndrome by proxy.
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Is that a promise?
Ooh la la! New chapters and romance and inserts, oh my!
Sounds like Sweetie Belle may have a hard time with this guy.
I dislike short chapters
But... Oh well... Can't really do anything about it.
~Me before reading this.
~Me after reading this.
ARIAMAKI
DELIVER UNTO US THE HALF-PROMISED CHAPTER OF TITANTIC SIZE AND WHATNOTS
Please?
OH MY GOD IT'S AN UPDATE!!!
(The above is to be read in Jessica Rabbit's voice toward the end of "Who Framed Roger Rabbit")
I'll be back when I've actually read it
EDIT: I could write an essay on all the stuff you packed in here Ariamaki. Instead I'll just say that this chapter was wonderful and well worth the long wait. It brightened my day imensely, thank you
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Yeah, odds are HIGH.
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This is actually way longer than the 4o2 average of 2,500 words. And if you go look at the most recent blog post, you will see there IS something you can do about it.
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Yup! Work is going to start very soon, and will hopefully continue apace from here on out.
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I DID write "Long" in the blog :P
And I've come to see ~6000 word chapters as long, so 2000-3000 feels small to me xD
- Sweetie has possibly been scared out of her wits on the subject of fathers of amorous interests
- Scoots has two fathers.
Hijinks incoming!
Duck and cover!
most amusing, also like that Luna would not think about using a train.
Today is a good day, first season 3 and now 4o2 updated? I can live with that
Ugh, this dropped the moment I decide to leave my computer. I find out three hours later. -_-
Interesting take on Scootaloo's family. And on an unrelated note, this is like the third update I read today that involves Sweetie in some form of shipping... She's been getting around lately.
Still, looking forward to the massive update and the (finally!) unveiling of this announcement.
WOOHOO! YAY!!!
He's an Assassin!
Playing Skyrim, doing Twilight esque studying of heat transfer by conduction and the mean free path of atoms in a gas, and my iPod pings. Checks.
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The other day I just started rereading as well. Again. 4th time, you know how it goes. Clicked my link and I thought NO. Nope, we're making an event out of this, wait till midnight and have a pot of tea.
WORTH. THE. WAIT.
Glad you're back to the desk, Ari. I love you. Er, I mean your work. Eeyup.
Ah, my favorite romantic comedy. Good to see it still updating. Can't wait for the next. I'm to tired to be witty.
So... uhh....
Just finished reading this whole fic earlier today and then a couple hours later I get an email about a new chapter. Huzzah! Anyway I really like this fic, which is weird because I'm not really a fan of any of the main pairings in the story. It's just so well written and daw-inspiring that I don't even care about that.
Goodness gracious, I finally caught up with everyone! This is not the longest story I've read in general but it is the longest on THIS site by far.
OK, comment time: >>Ariamaki, you've made my still short time in FIMfiction rather enjoyable with this story. Every shipping was given a rather significant or at least fairly substantial introduction as to how they came to be and I hardly ever felt that anything was forced to "just because". Heck you're even getting to point out details that the CMC have to deal with!(I'll get back to them soon) The flow of the story in general feels juuust right and you have me spoiled in the details regarding lovemaking, relationship specifics, scenery, certain items and last, but not least, magic and how it plays a key role between the royal sisters and their main squeezes. Long explanation short(Redundant redundancy is redundant at this point I'm well aware.) it's stories like this that make me glad I started reading fanfiction 3 years ago(Ironically the first story I ever read WAS the longest. 'Tales From the House of the Moon' by Rezmiranda, 326,106 words PLUS a lemon chapter..... Quite a start!). Overall, I grant you the most adorable thing I can think of:
Now, on to present matters: Scootaloo has parents!? And one of them is seems like an un-daunting foe for Sweetie Bell! And I can't help but wonder if Applebloom will get lip from her family in regards to Spike! Will hilarities ensue? Find out in the next episode of Drag-*bricked**K.O.***
P.S.: This will be the longest message I'll likely ever write to you.
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Sweetie Belle is not prepared for what these dads are bringing.
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Who? Me? No! Of course not.
...
/hides Dark Brotherhood getup.
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Did SOMEBODY just use not only my favorite Scanners GIF, but the full length version of it?
KUDOS!
Also, love ya too silly. :P
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I am glad I can provide a delightful story despite the ships not being your usual cup of tea.
If it's any consolation, some of the other stuff I have coming down the pipe in the future has RADICALLY different ships.
Including some real weird ones.
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And by being the buzzer beater, you just got a reply comment all to yourself, double-post for me or not.
First off, thank you, deeply, for taking the time to not only read my massive wordpile but to leave such a thoughtful comment.
Secondly... You know, I hadn't considered the amount of hassle AB might or might not get from her family... I believe I have some new fodder now.
P.S. Make sure it isn't and I can make it worth your while.
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Because I am oldschool and was talking about Oblivion's DB armor.
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Why would you use that getup? All you need is the shoes! Then go full dragonbone, Jagged Crown, Fire Breath Paarthunax from the mines at the tippy top of Monahven and yell I'M KING OF THE WORLD!
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Classic ending.
That basically sums up my feelings about this too, its sowell pacedthat many other fics don't do. With no impetus to be short, everything gets its allotted time.
Course, now I need to tackle that beast ...Wish me luck
Scoot's dad1 is a barber, isn't he?
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Ahahaha no I am going WAY more cliche than that. And not a butcher or a farmer or a florist or anything like that either. Those knives get used on living things for non-food purposes.
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Dear Faust, you replied so fast the thread doesn't even know the order to put them in.
Without my this context we'll have a staggering quantity of previously said gif going on.
I need to get Morrowind myself. As the best descriptor of the Dwarves poomfing off into Divines knows where, which is a bizzarly recurring thing in Skyrim. Septimus thinks the Heart is in the Dwemer Box, Arniel Gane pulls an LHC about it and does an experiment on it, and there is so many books with explanations going on I srsly need to hae a go.
Huh. Pony ships (best shipfic at that) to Kelle.
'ow rare.
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My advice?
Don't.
Just... Just find a Let's Play of it somewhere. Many would call it blasphemy, but I personally think Morrowind is a garbage game, even more so if you've played anything made in the last 20 years.
That wasn't a typo. I am literally saying games from the very early 90s were more technically apt and well-constructed than the Cliff Racer infested, 5-minute non-TAS speedrun, blockier than a Lego minifig's genitals Morrowind.
Well, this updated? I'll be damned. It's not updated in a while, so i went back a few chapters to regain some context. First off, Ariamaki, i love the detail you put into these scenes, especially when you described the Solar Plains, and Lunar Abyss. They appeared so simple on the surface, but when looking deeper, they're anything but simple.
I'm afraid i'll have to re-read the whole of the story to get a proper 'Ultra's great-wall of comment' going, but i can tell already that this might be a record-breaker (the current record is ~1400 words, so basically the size of a small chapter) and i won't regret any time spent on it (provided it gets done).
And it seems i'm rambling again, so i'll leave you with this: This was a great update and i look forward to more in the future!
I just realized i'd not thumbed your story, so i've taken care of that, and thank you for writing this.
I need to re-read the entire story, it has been so long since I read it.
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Thank you, across the board, and I look forward to your text wall. You might want to save it for Chapter 40 at this rate, which is going to be HUGE... Unless you plan to give that a wall all its own. :3
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Welcome back!
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You know what?
Sound plan that. I have FO2, was so chipper when I found it for £1.
NOPE.AVI
Soooo slow, but hey, at least it had a compass!
On to a more profound and pony based note, a few other Twilestias also posted tonight, whilst those were a top off to the night, one of the day and one of my week, this is the fic based highlight of the last half year, cuz it means the bawss's back.
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*righteous fist pump*
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*Readies the 'Fodder Cannon'* All set Captain!
Also, you're welcome. Chances are I'll only make minor comments on individual chapters, but I WILL try to make a substantial one regarding my feelings from here to the end.
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I had to try writing such an ending at least once you know. I'd do it more often but I have a rational fear of brain damage.
I also like the way you refer to the pacing while hoping that the story lasts for a while.
Luck is for wimps, a REAL adventurer brings a sword:
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Where pacing and length is concerned...
I am glad people are pleased with the pacing, but don't let it fool you into thinking the -entire fic- is approaching some kind of close. No, I like to handle fic the way I handle DMing: In discreet story arcs. LONG discreet story arcs. And with no plan on ever stopping, ever.
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A FIMfiction equivalent of Wonka's Everlasting Gobstopper? FREAKING AWESOME!
On a similar note: I did not feel that the story would be ending any time soon, your words serving only to confirm this. Another thing I've noticed while reading ALONG with some comments is the fact that this story partially gets influence from the readers as it "evolves", making it somewhat interactive between reader, author and story......... Unless I've misinterpreted that instead of you simply having keen commentators.(Then again...'FODDER CANNON')
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It can certainly be both. Most of the time? Perceptive readers or my actual proofers and pre-readers spoling stuff.
Today, for example, when you brought up AB being hassled by her family?
Almost certainly reader influence, since I had no plans for that up until now.
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Spoiled by spoil sports eh? Well, it seems like there's more than a handful of people involved that's for sure. Props to your snitches--er I mean pre-readers and adept readers for contributing then.
I'm kinda giddy, the story could branch anywhere at this point, while hopefully keeping a relatively good pace and fluffiness to go with it.
1596082 I wonder if you can beat My Little Caboose in number of chapters which capped at 256 if I remember right. I should also mention that you have great timing updating because I just finished the season 3 episodes I DVRed when this new chapter was posted. Still number 1 on my fav list.
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15,000-40,000 is my preferred chapter length, so kwitcherbitchin'. xD
Still, Four of Two update. Must read. Did read. Happy. Definitely needed happy after finishing Background Pony. Oh sweet Celestia I needed something happy.
Hm. Well, OK, then. I liked this chapter. This chapter gets a moustache!
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You're a little out of practice Ariamaki. A little out of practice indeed.
Tisk tisk tisk.
Well, I suppose that just means you'll have to write more. It's the only way.
And, I guess, we'll just have to read it, even though you're usually perfect and this is only sublime. I guess we can sacrifice ourselves like that.