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I've been waiting for this chapter forrrrEVVVerrrr, so that I can say:
IN A ROW?!
*squee*
Finally updated!
Things are getting a bit steamy for everypony, eh?
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It's ridiculous. It's not even funny.
CMC makeouts are cute!
I've never seen this story before, only now that it popped up in the featured list. Looking at the list of chapters I'm rather.. overwhelmed. I mean, just how long does it take to confess one's love? I mean.. damn!
Oh my god it updated!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Sweetie_Belle_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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Oh, it only takes a modest bit of time! But I think that stories which end immediately after the confession are usually MUCH weaker for it. So it keeps going along, following the trials, the tribulations, and the ponies poning pone.
I can't even hold in my excitement. I find I don't even want to.
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1129073 So did you have this whole entire thing planned out beforehand, or do you just make things up on the fly? If it's the first, that's pretty bucking impressive. If it's the latter, well.. that's still pretty bucking impressive.
Potentially paralyzed ponies perplexed by bang-backed baked goods! Lovely and lively living quarters suddenly serenaded by singing strudel!” My goddesses that Alliteration was sexy!
And then that Pinkie Pie! Thank you for breaking my laugh box, splitting my sides, and making me laugh my ass off.
What the heck did AJ have/eat?
twilight owning a ninja costume doesn't surprise me in the least, but how did scoots know about it??
YAY! more adorable! and bribery in the face of Mad Confection!
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Bit of both. I plan out the major points and salient details ahead of time, and work on the specifics as I go along. Sometimes a new scene or thread will pop in and make itself known, so that gets woven into it all.
CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS EXTRA SENSORY PERCEPTION POWERS ACTIVATE! ( aka, they heard the front door open ). This chapter was AWESOME! I just wish it had come out sooner! Can we expect a quicker update schedule now that you're back from your unintentional sabbatical?
Been waiting for an update for Pinkie Pie foreeeeeever (totally worth it). I like where this is going. Very glad to see this update. The CMC stuff was excellent, especially the tree sap bit. The announcement is finally getting closer (still feels like Soon, though). On a somewhat related note - can't wait to see the next part of The Fun Has Benn WUBbled.
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Brilliant chapter, but I think I missed the KoL reference. Are you still an active player?
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Yup! Zombie Slayer for (un)life. The reference was that Starfall made a joke in his comment about the running gag whenever 37 of something comes up (IN A ROW!?) in the game. Because this is chapter 37.
Glorious!
I really love how Twi interacts with herself.
1129094 I think she tasted the Rainbow...
Cutie Mark Crusaders SNOGGING Cutie Mark!
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Firedon over here 1129221 is correct about the flavors, and how Rarity can has them. As for the alliteration, you know I'm always up for providing a profuse provocative platter of pony-peppered prose.
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Wow I scanned every line of text looking for 37.
Didn't realize it was the chapter number.
Mind if I throw you a kmail at some point?
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Hit up either Kellidan or Ariamaki, and feel free!
Hallelujah this updates! But no announcement yet...
I have a strange feeling right now, like I'm way too happy for something that I didn't think would happen but did, and while I'm simultaneously sad it didn't I also can't help but me ecstatic...
I think it might be called cock block?
I realize I already told you this somewhere else but...
Doth my eyes deceive me? No, they didn't. I wish they did when it ended to soon though...
Particularly enjoyed Twilight's self-interaction (not to be confused with THAT kind of self-interaction). =3
1129360 I have only this, which I stole from deviantart, in response.
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I can't help but find the Rarijack scene in this chapter incredibly hot. Even if it just one kiss. (the implications!)
Good show, as always. With a wellspring of word wizardry working wonders, this story seems to show how many magnificent masterpieces a man can combine into a complete consummation of perfection.
okay, worth the wait for sure, but really? tree sap?
Huzzah, thou livest! We art most relieved, for thy long silence hath made us fear an ill fate had befallen thee. 'Tis most pleasing to once more lay eye upon a most wondrous new chapter of thy literary masterpiece. Highly we doth approve of the romance displayed in the words above, 'tis heartwarming and sweet. Furthermore we art pleased to see that thy absence has affected thy skills of waving entertaining lines of humour not. The Pie was strong in this, and we felt naught but joy for it. Most wonderful author, remain steadfast in thy pursuit of writing the highest form of literary entertainment, full of humour, smut and plot. For the further success of thy work we offer prayer, may it be long and renowned. Now, we shalt throw a celebration for thy return, the magnitude of which not yet seen before in this existence, for it was crafted and masterminded by the pink hoof and intellect of Pie.
What's this? A Four of Two update?! Best. Day. EVER!
Edit for CMCxSpike being cute.
Ship. Ship ALL THE PONIES!
In all seriousness, great chapter.
"And a pony!" Laughed, a lot.
1129030 no clop when be the clop?
Celestia has a point. If 500 bits is all it takes to keep Pinkie from (among other things) baking potentially deadly doughnuts and eldritch abomination cakes, its probably worth it. Maybe just give her a monthly stipend, preempt the whole thing. Though I must admit, I'm terribly intrigued by the idea of Cakethulu.
Second...if tree sap is one of the lower end defense sprays...what the hell does it spray on a high threat? Acid? Fire? Acid that has somehow been set on fire? Cakethulu batter?
And as for the Crusaders and Spike...I'm reminder of this comic(linked, because its too large to post). Not sure why...
The level of coincidence would be staggering.
I don't believe in coincidences.
1129360 Hmm, given Rarity's predilection for piercings in earlier chapters, I had thought perhaps it had been the metallic tang of a tongue stud. I think I like yours better though. This opens up the possibility of the Mane 6 and the princesses getting into a massive orgy.(because we don't have a Luna emoticon. WHY DON"T WE HAVE A LUNA EMOTICON?)
Sweet Celestia I need that so bad. You have no idea how much I've missed this.
On an unrelated note, your writing reminds me a lot of Terry Pratchett.....except with ponies.....and lots of sex. But since he's one of my favorite authors ever to write in the English language, I can say with conviction that that's a good thing. Now you better not disappear on me again. I've run out of physical books to read so I need to keep up my daily literature intake with fanfiction.
1129132 Every time I think of anything to do with the word "soon" I manage to think of that definition of it, and have been waiting for someone, just anyone else out there to use it. I can now die happy.
I honestly don't know what to say... I can say with certainty that I (barely) managed to restrain myself from squeeing when I saw the chapter notification in my email. This is of course important, because I was with my parents at the time... That could have been embarrassing.
Once again, an excellent chapter. And things have started coming together, and hopefully next chapter, the princesses spill the beans on whatever it is they are hiding. And here's to hoping that it isn't another month and a half till the next chapter! (I in no way place any blame on you. Life is well known to suck at times.)
So Luna totally saw them making out. I wonder if she'll mention it to Twilight or just let it go.
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Yeah, I got to work, then my thought process went like this:
1. So what could AJ have had in her mouth that made Rarity nearly take her in the street?
2. Oh yeah, last chapter her and Rainbow Dash had sex with the very convenient-and sexy-plot holes that Pinkie didn't give a flying feather and Rarity had that situation as a fetish.
3. It's just like that Skittles commercial: "Taste the Rainbow, Share the Rainbow." and that reminds me...
4. Oh crap, that new commercial where the chick is making out with a Walrus, while eating Skittles and then the other chick walks in, just popped into my brain. Eeeeewwww....
5. Come to think of it, both the commercial and Rarity's fetish/roleplay scenario both have someone "cheating" on someone else...naah
XD this is so silly!!
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You're right; Rarity is a walrus.
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Her horn is secretly a tusk.
So this chapter. There's really not much to say, past how quite simply ridiculously awesome it is. Also to be noted, this remains to be my favorite ship. Oh and I had forgotten momentarily the sheer density and volume of shipping this story has. You also have presented me with a puzzling question. Is it that every single ship in this fic my favorite and it's the sexiest coincidence to ever happen, or are these my favorite ships BECAUSE of this fic, with the exception of my OTP, twilestia, which can be blamed on device heretic. But seriously - lunashy, pinkiedash, applespike, and rarijack are most commonly my favorite ships. The only exceptions are sweetaloo, because I haven't read a sweetaloo fic before (need to find some nao) and twiluna, which is obviously unneeded in this fic.
Ariamaki, why must you give me thIs inner turmoil?
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I should start playing KoL again.....
Ending=SpikeBloom shipper squee.
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OHgawd... Why, why do you post that? That is the evilest trademark in existence! So much waiting I had to do on Prolol. T-the horror... t-he boredom...
Wait... I was commenting on a story! Right, horrible flashback over.
Thank Celestia you are back. I've ran out of physical books and am running low on digital ones. One of my favorite chapters, though. Uhh... I don't know what else to say without ranting... Glad you are back! Can't wait to add this to my list of 'things to re-read after its finished, and then re-read it in a month when your out of history books.'
And did I hear something about killing zombies? Where? I must keel all undead. ALL OF THEM.Buck. Yes. 4o2.
1129094 Rainbow Dash
if yah know what i mean
SO MUCH MAKING OUT.
Umm... dude... take it easy, lest you ship Angel Bunny and Iron Will!
This story is nice, although it's one giant ball of everypony mating with everypony.
You took a kids show and shoved in so much sex in it that it's almost too funny. That
doesn't change the fact that the story is epic and I look forward to more... "making out".