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Twilight, you are a true wizard, you just made the goddess of the sun speechless. The pony who existed for over a 1000 years, and you broke her brain. well done.
God I love the yes dance, its such an expression of pure unadulterated joy. I am happy and I give no fucks to anypony else right now.
"Shall we go get you dressed?" to an intelligent race which goes about naked as a norm, that has to be VERY kinky, having somepony help you cover up strategic parts of your body.
Awesome, truly awesome. Only problem I see with it is that I hit a part were there was no more to the chapter.
Heh heh heh. This chapter turned out quite awesome. I can't wait for the next segment to come out. I love this story.
::does the yes dance along with twilight:: this chapter has made my day
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The Yes Dance is all about those happy moments where you cannot possibly care what those watching think.
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Thank you both- More of this coming soon, Wednesday afternoon most likely. :3
GLORIOUS! SIMPLY GLORIOUS!
Perfect.
315475 More so soon! Only one response will do:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P3ALwKeSEYs&feature=youtube_gdata_player
Bravo, now observe:
....
“Twilight.”
She couldn’t open her mouth, so she made what she hoped was an affirmative-sounding noise.
“Mmf?”
The expression on Celestia’s face was unreadable, but her voice actually faltered for a moment.
“Do... do you like bananas?”
Is it wrong of me that this was my first thought?
Oh, this just keeps getting better
I love this story so much
Start of the Story until now, how i felt:
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From this chapter:
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Twilight dream probably include her reciting a poem that includes:
"hey sexy princess, come sit at the top
because im looking at those flanks going clop clop clop"
Also study buddies with benefits? priceless
All the Spocks sing: Go Twilight, it is your birthday; The day of your birth. We are going to party as if it were your birthday.
Yessss. Twilight, why you so adorable.
wow this is the end okayyyyy then amazing story I loved it Twilight broke celesta's brain I cant believe a maybe 20 or younger year old pony left a 2000 thousand year old pony speechless. your an amazing writer I can't wait too read stories to come,
It's too bad that Celestia had such a restrained reaction to the "Yes!" dance. Although, I guess that she has probably seen it from her number one student before. You're doing great, it's just too bad that the segment wrapped up so fast (relatively, anyway.) Anyway, here's a Fluttershy cheer for Twilight's success.
Oh, you... magnificent bastard? Let's go with that (And I mean that in a good way), yes.
Step 8 somewhat reflects what happened earlier today (the massive freakout part) because about 20 minutes before my class, I thought, "Damn, I shouldn't have read chapter 16 yesterday so I could have something to do in class," and then you go an drop this on my inbox literally one minute before I left to class. =3
Loved the checklist titles and the letter (with the PS and PPS thing, I figure Twilight's the kind of pony who adds like 10 PS at the end) and overall, really. damn. cute. Yes Dance included.
I just thought of something about this current arrangement (your updating schedule now, I mean) though. On one side, I'll be getting a lot of Twilestia for some time which is, well...
But then, I won't be getting any Twilestia for quite some time while LunaShy catches up and that's, well...
Then again, I suppose I will need time to work out the massive sugary rush all this Twilestia is going to create anyway. XD
As usual, looking forward to the next part.
Woo! Go get her Twi!
I do have a question though. What was Celestia going to mention? Twi cut her off with her own concern, but we never find out about Celestias potential issues with the relationship.
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Nnnope.
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Nope! It's not the end-- Hell, it's practically the beginning. Just because they're together doesn't mean anything is changing-- Day in the Sun 2 / Chapter 18 goes up Wednesady, no worries there.
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Yeah, this segment goes quickly, simply because Celestia... Well, we'll see her feelings on relationship progress later.
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Ahhey! Someone caught it. :3 Don't worry, it'll be addressed- And soon... ish.
Thank you all again, and HOSHIT somehow the fic -lost- a bunch of thumbs down votes while I was away playing Borderlands. I suppose it's finally swaying people back around.
dude i swear to god i lost it at "study buddies with benifits", also, can i assume when celestia said about going back to sleep im not the onnly person who thought molestia would guest star?
Gah finally. I was waiting for 17 Chapter for that. And it was WORTH waiting for. Cant wait to read HOW Celestia will help Twi get ready and how she will react when she sees Twilights dress.
When Celestia had that speechless double-take, my mind supplied the classic sound of this. Also, much laughter ensued.
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awesome!!!
I can see some clop in the next chapter as they are "delayed" by dressing
Yay! We obviously knew it was coming that Twilight and Celestia would hook up and I'm glad to see you wrote it in a very different way to Luna and Fluttershy. *does the happy dance then realises he has trashed half his room* Damn, I'm too big to get this excited
PS I hope those twelve ponies who clicked the wrong button at the top have been sent to the moon!
"Princess Celestia, why is there a black door at the back of your walk-in closet?"
"Oh, never mind that door, Twilight. It's where I keep the Collection."
This chapter has renewed my interest in Twilestia. And here I was worried I'd have to endure so much of it.
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I believe everyone thought that was coming around then. Even Twilight. Maybe even Celestia.
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No comment. <.<
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Ehehe no worries. And hey, until this chapter came out? It was EIGHTEEN people who clicked that one. The number sharply dropped after this update. :s
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PFFT, I think that might end up being essentially canon to this fic now.
Another great chapter Ariamaki. Twas torture having school today knowing that Four of Two was waiting for me.
As with so many others, I also lost it with the study buddies-with-benefits. Also Molestia is bound to come, I can feel in the depths of my soul. Soon she will strike and Twilight will never know what hit her.
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"PFFT, I think that might end up being essentially canon to this fic now."
Feel free!
316190 I hit it raght on th' head eh Ariamaki?
Celestia and Twilight are like this now!
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOO~ THIS CALLS FOR A CELEBRATION!
EVERYPONY DANCE!
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This chapter just made my entire month.
Damnit you! I wish I could read more! well.. guess i better stop refreshing the story page and look at those four other unread tracked chapters...
That was HILARIOUS! I love it! Impish Celestia is the best Celestia, methinks. xD She's ever so much fun.
I want the next chapter NAO!
SO AWESOME
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Did...did you draw this? It's easily one of the cutest thing I've ever seen!
Short chapter? PFFFT! It took me hours to read it! I could not stop laughing and my body was simply never ready for whatever happened next! Every single moment of d'aww I had to pause to giggle in a small corner of my room.
After their first romantic hug, I knew there would be a yes-dance. Either from me in the comments, or from Twilight
This story is slowly making my cursor creep towards the favorite button.
*Insert image of Celestia hanging on to Twilight*
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:D
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Aaaaw, thank you-- It would be much appreciated. :3 And I am glad it is going over well.
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We can only hope she is kidding.
((No two commentators see the same Ma-Ro...))
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I just made a quick edit to my comment. I didn't realize it counted a a double post.
Sry
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What? No. I was making a joke about your username, and the Magic card Maro. I didn't see anything that looked like a double-post. :s
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Oh.
Oooooooh.
oh.
Ah. I see. I, uh, don't play Magic all that much.
...
And that, fillies and gentlecolts, is how one puts two-and-two-and-two hooves in ones mouth.
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sadly no I didn't draw it
But its still adorable and fitting all the same
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You blew my heart out of my chest.
You blew my heart out of my chest.
IT HURTS SO GOOD
HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH
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That was easily the most adorably romantic thing in the history of the universe. The only thing possibly more adorable and romantic would be... Maybe Trixie's proposal to Fluttershy at the end of Kindness's Reward. That crushed my spinal column.
Life as a cyborg is pretty nifty.
The yes dance made not just my day, but my week.
*yes dance*
Awesome chapter and a MTG joke? Fuck yeah.
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Having Twilight's letter positively compared to the ending of Kindness' Reward made my goddamn week.
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Allow me to join you!
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Scroll back a few chapters, where the comment thread almost turned into a "Who wants one of my seven goddamn copies of Zur the Enchanter" discussion!
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Try The Divine Comedy or Say Anything for an even weirder effect. The previous chapter plus The Mountain Goats is mandatory, of course.
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That story is wonderful, both for introducing an original and amazing crack pairing and for being amazingly adorable.