The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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Well....that was a thing. Was taken off guard by the fighter Scootaloo, but enjoyed seeing her kick some tail.
Seeing Jerard get punched in the face was very, very, very satisfying.
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Well that was unexpected.
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The imp makes everything better.
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i'm glad to have surprised you
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Yup. Same here. I'm glad that i read the end first.
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I'm not far far along in the story. Apparently I need to continue reading this, no matter how pissed I get and yell Fus-Ro-Dah at my computer screen.
Execution that doesn't sound good
Oh wait now I remember
Its okay Scoot it gets easier each time
All of my what
Mmm... fight scenes...
This is just getting better and better...
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easier? what gets easier?
What did those poor fillies do to deserve that?
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their crimes were plain and found guilty
Darkest Chapter Yet?
Possibly.
Also seeing Jerard get punched in the face.
Best part!
- Swift
FINALLY GOT SOME SWEET, ASS KICKING FROM SCOOTALOO! YEAH!
It could have used more torture.
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killing
it gets easier every time until eventually you stop thinking about it
Damn didn't expected that ending
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yay for unexpected endings
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yay for torture
I defintly liked the part that somepony gets cooked and the family got to eat his body but i forget what his crime was
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killed some pony while protecting his family
Noticed there was a double there. I noticed a few other mistakes as well, but I figured this one was worth mentioning.
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fixed and thank you
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No problem. You should think of getting another editor alongside Kaidan. He definitely helps a lot, but more nit-picky editors are never a bad thing.
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planning to
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You know this from autopsy?
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I work in an animal center and at first i cried when we put the animals to sleep
now it's just another part of the day
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A female editor would be great. I may not have read the dick-torture scene very thoroughly due to that guy "sympathy" pain thing.
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I must say, I was expecting much funnier answer It must be incredibly sad, I'm sorry
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Well, if you guys are in the market for a female editor, I'd love to lend a hand.
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refro already offered and he's awesome!
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Oh god, he was hilarious during Kaidan's stream a few nights ago.
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who are you and how do i know you?
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I'm Kleora on most every site I frequent, and you probably know me, or at least kinda recognise me, from Kaidan's Twitch chat. I'm one of the like, four people who watch his streams and use the chat regularly.
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then i probably don't know you
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That solves that then, I guess.
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How did you expect a funnier answer we a talking about death here
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a sarcastic one?
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i love this story
You made it out to be WAY harder to kill than it is in reality. To be honest it's the same reason I laugh at stories like Cupcakes, just the torture for the torture's sake.
It got boring, not enough progression, to much blood. Humans (and ponies) are incredibly easy to kill, especially if you start cutting into legs and whatnot.
I'll hit you up on steam later.
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sigh....magic is all i have to say to you, and i wouldn't say i made it harder to kill than it is in reality, the condemned were forced to live longer than what they normally could physically in a showy type fashion, such as they didn't go into shock, they didn't go brain dead or any number of things, and it wasn't torture for torture's sake, there's a big reason why she needed to watch it in the next chapter
GOD I LOVE THIS STORY! This story has caused me to grow feelings for it. I can see and feel the characters and it's amazing. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter. Auther I want you to know that this story is my favorite story of all time. It has bypassed every other story with lightning speed. I don't want you to ever stop this story... It's to amazing to end.
~wubsy
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...... i don't even know
May I ask, when will the next chapter come out? I absolutely hate waiting.
~wubsy
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i'm still editing it, and my editor hasn't looked at it yet, but hopefully soon
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scootaloo is an filly basically the same age as in the show
Jerard high blood is around twilight's age not much younger, his name is used later on quite a bit
marrying age is when they mature to the point of being able to have a foal safely, but i can't say exact age because age hasn't been really been set in mlp
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that's headcanon, but probably around early twenties