The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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jesus, this was painful to read
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So, I really liked how Scootaloo grew this chapter. Her increase in sass is just the kind of sudo comic relief. Its things like that that help make the pain more bearable...
I was starting to worry ;-;
No one spoil dis for meh
I'm gonna read it when I got to bed later on so, shhhh
Hmmmm,I wonder if dash will get caught.
Dash...i ORDER you to kill jerard in the most gruesome manner possible...rip his horn out from his head...stab him in the dick with it...proceed to gouge out his eyes with the horn...all the while cut his flesh as slowlyas inhumanely possible...then feed it to him...let him taste his own blood...let him hear his own blood curdling screams!
2890140 I'd prefer slenderpony because I found out that he replaces organs and bones with anothers. For some reason, I find him getting his bones replaced with an infants and his heart (as black as it is) getting replaced by a chunk of coal.
I am really enjoying this fic (who am I?! ), it was getting only better and better, and the way you are building this story is just amazing, but I must say this chapter is, in my opinion, the worst chapter yet. I just can't stand Scootaloo's parents lack of reaction. They were kidnapped, raped, they learned about their doughter being raped and tortured for a long period of time, and they just reacted, well, normally if I can say that. I understand that the situation was without a way out, but seriously. There was no bargain, no threatening, no screaming, no crying. They accepted Scootaloo fate, without Jerard proving physically what he will do, if they won't submit. And then this whole inncest situation, which they took without a flinch. It feels empty to me because anyone can say he will do something to you, and Jerard didn't prove anything to Scootaloo's parents. Even if they knew how powerful he is, she is still their doughter. And I just don't think, that any parent would submit so quickly, to something like that happening to their child. I think they should fight more, even if the fight was lost, at the very beginning.
Of course this is only my opinion, overall I think, this story is great, and I already fear that I will finish reading it all soon.
Anyway I'm finally going to favourite this story, and rate it, but I'm struggling to decide which one will be more flattering to You, dear author: a downvote, or an upvote
Hmm, I think Voodoo by godsmack matches how scootaloo feels right now.
And now I want to torture Jerard in ways so horrible, Demons in Tartarus would cry like newborn babies.
Jerard, you will learn the tru meaning of fear if and when I get a hold of ypu.
ok its official who wants to help me rip out his sternum? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png
I support this sick bastard if you do have a problem with this wanna help me make cupcakes?
.... I... fucking... hate... Jerard....
I hate this fic so much why am I still reading!
4747221 because you've joined the dark-side of the fandom
THAT CHEEKY BASTARD!
Reading this has caused my stomach and just my entire lower torso to be tense with anger. I might develop some type of ulcer, but this story is worth it.
Damnit Dash, you ruined the mood. -_-
Btw, BEST. PARENTS. EVER!! It's so refreshing when I see a couple who love each other so much. I was as shocked as Jerard was.