The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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well ok then this will be good once the actual stuff starts
reading it, it could be worst... After reading the chapter 38 I was thinking Jerard give the task of transform Sweetie Bell in Scootaloo Pet a little like she was for Jerard... But I was wrong... She could be happy, it could be worst.
But we can see with this that Jerard have great power, even Filthy Rich is easy to be destroyed.
the further i see the further i lose any belief that jerard could do this under celestia's nose. he is too big t obe able to move undetected. so powreful to the point that it is ridiculous if celestia does not involve herself and soon.
you once said that celestia would not risk equestria. the problem here is that jerard is a cancer, and his influence is poisoning equestria a little more at a time. and you keep on depicting his influence as so great that it is impossible for celestia not to detect something fishy.
if jerard has spies, celestia has spies. far as i am concerned it is as simple as that. and her spies would be better.
Knew it. Knew Al was more of a badass then he was letting on.
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Can't get enough of this story.
That was totatly SICK! dimond tiara cught me completly off gaurd, also keeping the line “OF coUrSe nOt!” was a good move.
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Also, I wanted him to keep the line, just not have the LeTTerS AlL LiKE ThIS!
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the way the lines written shows how sweeties voice cracks at those particular spots, and i'm just not sure how else you could write it and get the same idea. however I really dont have any right to argue with you I'm no expert on Literature and well you've writen & posted a couple storys, I havent any. So Ill leave it at that.
btw Cooljwj did you know theres a walrus in your name?
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5028566 S'all good. Cool and I had a good laugh over that sentence which is the reason for him mentioning it in the A/N.
Tired? Don't you mean 'tied'?
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no i did not
Well, I am looking forward to see what happens now ^^
Sweet, another update.
I was not even expecting one. How cool is that?
I look to the creator for answers. I pray for deliverance, from the darkness that is the unknown.
I am sure all will be revealed in do time. Sill it got stuck in my mind on how Scootaloo was so cold. Not sure if it was some kind of trick by Jerard, or something else going on with her.
The part when she left the other one she hugged feel cold after, gave me the thought, is Scoots a zombie now? Is she the walking dead, and Jerard is keeping her alive some how?
Yes, my mind tends to drift.
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hahahaha what where would you get that idea?
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Oh, it gets worst. I clean for got when Scoots had told Jerard that she wanted to be his little vamp pony. And this has been his plan all along. To Turn her into a high order aristocratic vamp pony monster. All of the books and training would be a part of that, and his poking and prodding is just his way of checking for dun ness. It would also explain her high tolerance to dying. She has the teeth, Now her body feels cold to the touch, She likes the taste of blood. All she need next is a pair of wings like Fluttershy got when she became Flutterbat.
I guess when scoots can no longer see herself in the mirror, theirs your sign. Scoots just might get that wish after all.
Yesss! Your journey to the dark side is almost complete!
Well, ya! It should be!
Ok, all of that is just quite ridiculous.
Pleas don't ask where I come up with this stuff. I wish I knew, myself.
It just comes to me...
Come to Butt Head.
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hehehehe