The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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that whole back and forth in the medical room at the start was pretty confusing as I found it hard to keep track of who was saying what
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at what part did you get lost? or what lines did you not know?
2865943 oh forget it, I did try to copy and paste the individual lines but that proves to be tedious, so instead I'll just pin the whole incident on my own stupidity and move on
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i am saddened to hear you say that, but either way i hope you enjoy
hmmm what would happen jarard won.................um ??????
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you''l find out what happens in the next chapter
also no scootaloo won
Another great chapter man, I'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens next!
It doesn't seem like anything good can come though,,, its pretty high chance scootaloo is going to die.... But ehhh, your the writer, you choose what happens, heh heh.
This leaves me conflicted. But with a large slant towards happy for poor Scoots.
other chapter incredibly good
Cool, I seriously hope you're planning on killing Jerard. He's seriously pissing me off. Scootaloo's my second favorite character, next Fluttershy and Twilight. (Both are tied for first)
2865943 I'm having he same problem as Reeve. Jerard will say something and it'll mentions Scoot's reaction. This would be fine but sometimes it makes it seem as if Scoots is saying it. You so rarely use, "I said." "He said." That things can get rather confusing.
This was the 2nd best chapter.Poor Jerard.I knew he'd lose!
Damnit! He was so close, too!
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