The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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I still can't work out if Scootaloo is just playing along until Rarity ca help her, or if she actually does love her master as much as she says she does. Probably a bit of both.
Great chapter though.
How long are you planing to do this to Scootaloo?
Second question: Why did you choose Scootaloo for all of this?
Thanks ahead for answering
And this chapter was better then the previous one
I have always wanted to comment and shout MOAR!!
I guess my life is complete.
come on let him take applebloom and to a threeway or take swettiebell as threating bait and break down rarity Hmm Hmm
...where's Rainbow in all of this?
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It would not surprise me if the lies become truths, like the story of Fidle the cat who pretends to be human and tells lies and then becomes one and the lie becomes the truth, because he starts to prefer the lies over the truth. sooner or later pain will be a turn on and she'll 'love' him all the more.
This is painful to keep reading, and i'm only doing it in the hopes scootaloo escapes or gets rescued, I've even hoped she could die by this point.
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well this story is going to be a very long story
as for why scootaloo
scootaloo was perfect for one reason, her deep love for dash, i see scootaloo as seeing Dash as someone that's perfect, without flaw and only takes the best
so when she were to get raped she wouldn't tell anyone because she would think, that dash would think she was weak and shun her, this is a very common trait with little kids with heroes. this is the only reason why i choose her over any other filly, because she has a hero
sweetie belle and apple-boom are considerably harder to mentally work with in a story, apple-bloom would go to applejack and big mac, and sweetie belle would tell rarity right away, at least that's what my head cannon says
to me scootaloo is considerably tougher, and mentally stronger than the other two and is much more headstrong, she is like a filly dash in my mind, which means she can withstand more abuse without killing herself, whether or not this is real life there is still always a point where killing yourself becomes the only thing you can possibly want, especially in a situation like that
that is why i picked her in a overly long explanation, and why i didn't pick sweetie belle or apple bloom,
she just fit the bill all too well, well almost, the fact she didn't have parents made me almost go toward apple-bloom
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other than Scootaloo's parents no one knows Scootaloo left yet
Damn nice chapter
please do hurry with the next capter
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oh my friend, that is a good idea, or Jared could even take sweetie or bloom if scootaloo dies as a replacement hmm?
“Bad question. Yes, while I may hurt you, beat you, and torture you. however I'll never kill, disable, or disfigure you. You’ll marry me one day, and I love you far too much to do that to you. So have at least some hope.”
Bullshit.
Just as some clarification, how much of him is really able to it in her? Anatomically speaking, I cant really see more than half ever fitting in at one time... But you never specify.
He licked me without a fight, then started thrusting into my mom and eating me out. He groaned, being surprisingly turned on.
“I love you mom, but orders are orders. I hope you forgive me.”
I would find communication like this a punishable offense were I Master man. Would recommend changing to something like visual cues. I turned to my mom with pleading eyes. What met me was a calm facade that seemed to say I wasnt to blame.
Few other minor things, but really pacing was something that always could use work.
Try looking over the reveal scene for Scoot's parents. I think more explanation of now the mechanism works and what the beds looked like would be useful.
3248772 or just take all main six and sell them to his local whore house and keep the fillies to himself hes royal after all hehe
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that is indeed a thought to ponder on, is it not? in fact, i totally agree that there should be a sequence of sequels for that there idea...!
I get my hopes up thinking that someone will finally kill that bastard Jerard but no Scootaloo has to fall in love with a Child Molesting, Murdering, Raping, Tortureing, Sick Mother Fucker!
I think i'd prefer if the Cupcakes Pinkie Pie ( Pinkamena )
Killed the so-called 'Loving Master' SLOWLY.
- Swift
i can't believe i read the whooooole thing... in 3 hours.
but now i am sad.
i'm just gonna leave this here...
Three hours my arse.
I'm two hours into this stoned out of my mind and only read 40,000 words so far.
Explain yourself.
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you need to click the reply button if you want to reply to him lol
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Bollocks, I thought I did
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Three hours my arse.
I'm two hours into this stoned out of my mind and only read 40,000 words so far.
Explain yourself.
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hahahaha
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because i wasn't stoned out of my mind.
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I'm a fast reader, wether or not I'm stoned.
I usually read 20-30,000 words an hour.
How did you read 100k+ words in 3h!?
so when will he rape rarity and rainbow dash T_T want to see them both breakdown and become sex slaves
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if that does in deed happen, it wouldn't be for several chapters
3289710 Ha! your saying it might happen which is most likely since this feddish story is so loveable and fucked up at the sametime but still very enjoyable seeing scoot being tortured more and fucked senseliess ohh love it!
Seems legit
For some reason, I feel compelled to read this.
It's not like I find it arousing, I just like to read fics about pain, since it makes it easier to care about the characters.
I'm fascinated by this story. I'm up to Chapter 22 ("Magic Wire"), but I there is a part of this story I don't like.
The political situation in Equestria seems to be seven kinds of fucked up.
You're saying that Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, Princess Twilight Sparkle, Prince Shining Armor, along with five multi-time national heroes, all working together, couldn't get rid of Jerard? Because I'm finding that really, really difficult to accept.
You said that killing Jerard would lead to war. My question is: What kind of country would go to war over a multiple-murderer child rapist getting his just punishment, and more importantly, why?
You also said:
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So, killing Jerard would have worse effects than killing Twilight? Seriously?!
I'm just finding the whole premise behind Jerard to be unbelievable, from what we've seen of Equestria. Not to mention ridiculous laws: Acting to save a filly from certain harm is illegal? Killing in self-defense is illegal? Killing a royal demands death and the family is maimed? (No sane country allows family members to be punished for the actions of another.)
So, yes I'll be reading this story, but I can't see this being anything but in some horrible alternate universe. In my mind, Celestia would never allow such an absurd political/legal situation to exist.
Disclaimer: (Because I've gotten shit about this in the past) I'm criticizing the story. This is not a personal attack on the author, just me pointing out things about the story that I don't find convincing.
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Jerard had better die before I discover a way to build a device to literally put myself into the story in order to kill him horribly.
Nothing is impossible, just difficult.
3789159 do not touch the sick bastards of equestria
fuck man, I am going to personally send Jerard to hell now
5227944 Why?
6440192 Loitering in a school zone.