The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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GASP
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I do have bigger dreams like being a veterinarian but I feel more......at ease, I guess, with working at a bookstore. Not owning one though
2936298 Alright man.
Aw, what do you mean blood isn't healthy for you.
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>:)
Blood does taste kind of good.
Ok wow umm.. I think she may be a little TOO in to it, feel good or not this is pushing it... I wish I was a vamp.
Hey, the story finally broke free of the negative downvote ratio. Cool beans. Definitely deserved it.
It's gonna be interesting to see what the revelation is gonna be like when Scootaloo finally snaps back into reality. I'm actually really glad that that cunt didn't kill Drop. That would have been both incredibly one dimensional.
It also seems like what's his face is starting to become more and more attached to Scootaloo. On more that a BDSM way. I am left with the feeling that he is beginning, whether he likes it or not, to care for her in an almost fatherly way. Albeit a fucked up abusive father, but a father non the less.
Sethi is somewhat of an enigma for me right now... I'm not sure what her ultimate role could be, as she has way more development that a simplistic background pony, but not enough to show any clear motive or direction.
Just some thoughts for consideration.
Please get Rainbow raped by him. Please
2950092 Woah there Satan. Calm down.
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Yeah but it would be a change. Wouldn't it? Instead of Scootaloo. Say like Scootaloo brought her to the house or Dash came storming in. Please. You don't have to if you don't want to, but it's an idea.
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oh i know, Dash plays a huge rule, she may get raped or not, i'm not going to spoil it if she does, though it's likely considering it's dash we're speaking about
it just won't be any time soon
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Okie dokie lokie! Loving the story so far!!!
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i'm really happy to hear that
2955183 Not really. It would just be more of the same. Having that douche rape Dash would be like saying "I had a story, but I don't really care about it, so I'm just gonna have some clop for clop's sake. Story progression be damned!"
So I am adamantly against it. Not for content reasons, but for the sake of story progression.
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To talk about the story some more, after pondering Scootaloo's decent into masochism, I've decided that I am willing to accept it as a plot point. But I feel as though the idea was very rushed. Don't feel bad about it, as it wasn't an out of nowhere plot point. It still had a logical progression, it was just a wee bit fast for my taste.
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You're right, it was rushed because i wasn't liking the idea of giving scootaloo power, but the point of it was to show scootaloo 's mental progression which was needed, it's much more like a short phase that only lasts a day or two for her, it also gives a short break from the constant abuse and gives more contrast compared to what's about to happen to her
2974184 *sighs dejectedly* koooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool.
Ya know? I could just ask you to write a story that made you uncomfortable and it would be perfect for me :/
Nice and slice of lifey, that's all I need.
On an unrelated note, during this chapter, I kinda began imagining an almost sitcom type relationship would develop between what's his face and Scootaloo. Consisting of jokes and Scoots contently taking shots at the guy but at the end of the day she is still his and has to do his shit.
Kinda like genie in Aladdin.
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if you want to request a fic man i had a blog post for 50 follows, leave your idea there and i'll get to it
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omgosh i just rewatched Aladdin
2974223 Yea, I believe I left something there, but I will check.
2974250 And yea lol, that's how I really wanted it to go down.
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you posted it in the writing new things blog, i'll add it to the list, it's a short one i grant you, only four stories, but i have them in the works
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what did you mean by this?
Scoots lost her mind
Rainbow is about to kick some ass!
Rarity is gonna be pissed
And Luna, Tia ,and cadence are gonna eat popcorn thinking its a 3-D movie XD
is getting more interesting
2938515 you name is miss leading. Also everyone knows that blood is like candy. Tasty but not healthy.
Damn. She kinky.
p.s. Lyra will not be happy.
Fuck man, Fuck
Lol, Jarold and Sethi sound like a married couple x3
3640262 Why wouldn't she be happy? She was just indirectly bucked by the most powerful man in Equestria and beyond!