The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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best chapter ending yet...love it
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hehehehe
3779349 wow, that was a quick answer
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i just happen to be passing by right as you posted your question
3779399 sweet, i love perfect timing
Are you going to make some awesome plot twist where Scootaloo kills Jerard?
Dat ending confused me slightly.
I thought she'd be happy to be reminded of her home?
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I knew she was about to break down at the sight of Ponyville, and then Canterlot being the breaking point for her. It doesn't just remind her of good times, it reminds her of the things she has lost, and can never have again, and the friends she has known, but may as well be dead, and will be if she ever tries to see them again, and it's all because of Jerard, all because of Master. If she ever kills Jerard I'm not going to be surprised cause it not much of a twist, I'm going to be like "Bout fuckin' time.", because it needs to be done, not just for her sake, but for her friends, and for us, the readers... just not yet, unfortunately, now's not the right time.
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honestly i don't know what will happen till after i've written it, and i haven't finished writing yet so i don't know
I was a little confused by the whole different eye perspective thing. Otherwise, great chapter and I can't wait for more!
3780562 she is, she was just glad to be away from Hegi Zebira
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Just make sure you don't write drunk okay?
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oh wow you're wayyyy back there
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hahahah epic
Misspelling; it's supposed to be idolize
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Of course I am, I don't like Jerard, so I didn't really start reading till about a few weeks ago.
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no problem, i get that from quite a few people
apparently, Ive crossed a point where this stuff doesn't phase me anymore...
the hate for Jerard is understandable, but im prolly the only person who doesn't hate him.
also chapter 28 was glorious, keep on keeping on
3804986 ok so i read all of this in a day and i just ahve to fav it even though it doesnt feel right to do so the only reason why is because youve done something that has never happened to me before you made me hate you with almost every fiber of my soul you glorios basterd fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/056/8/9/clapping_pony_icon___scootaloo_by_taritoons-d5w610a.gif fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/056/8/9/clapping_pony_icon___scootaloo_by_taritoons-d5w610a.gif
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thank you
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not till you finish two more chapters
Two words...FUCK YOU
Okay, Jerard is acting......better I guess. I still think we need some OP person to kill him multiple times. Maybe I can ask Raiden, A cyborg ninja with an HF blade should work nicely.
Dawwww, I love it when he's like this! It's a little reminder that, although he likes being mean, he has a kind side.
Okay first comment and too much has happened for me to say anything about the last chapters, (that I did read one after the other not stoping to comment for,) however for this one I just wish scootaloo would openly admit to Al-Baster that "her friend" was more like a second mother or exaggerate further, just to make a point of how pissed of she is about being played into killing a friend.
Also the one thing I hope behond this story never existing, is that scootaloo takes everything away from jarard in the end and has an almighty revenge. I'm egar to see what happens.