The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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Have I said "My name is Commander Kaidan, and this is my favorite story on the citadel" yet?
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I have accepted that she will probably die.
Hopefully that bastard will die too
I love this story.
Although, I can't work out if I want Scootaloo to die just so it ends, or if I want her to somehow survive this.
Either way, Jerad needs to die.
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Will we get more soon? I find it fascinating as Jared seems unable to control himself. He loves the sadism more than he loves Scootaloo, and the way he forces her to disobey to justify punishment is amazing.
I'm sure you'll think of a clever way to torture her next time, and if not let me know and I'll think of something suitably twisted...
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once i give the next chapter to my editor in a little, then once he finishes editing
as for torturing her, believe me things get much worse for her
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Will it involve the middle eastern practice of surgically incising the clitoris to prevent orgasm?
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there's a fine line between breaking someone forever and just wasting their body
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A waste for Scootaloo, perhaps, but Jared would still enjoy it.
I'm a little worried that he keeps tearing her perineum open during the sex. Has he not figured out large dry blunt object + small hole = traumatic injury?
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there's a method behind that madness
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Combining her two holes into one big hole, then mutilating himself to have a bifurcated penis?
Okay, I'll stop spewing non-sense now, but only because I have more clop to read.
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no it's not nonsense, and yes if it happen enough then that would happen, but it's only happen a few times, so there won't be any long lasting affects, at least not yet
it'll come to a point where that is dealt with
3280243 because i'm better than you!
IF HE FUCKING FED SCOOTS HER PARENTS I SWEAR.
Also:
What the fuck even was this supposed to say?
I gave up hope of scootaloo escaping 3 chapters ago, I just wish she could peacefully die
I have to say that this story is definitely in my top 5 favorite stories. I usually hate stories that involve enslavement since very few authors can actually capture the essence of Stockholm Syndrome. You do a wonderful job of showing the conflict that is taking place in Scootaloo's mind. I applaud you for that.
Keep up the good work.
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*lick*
3322634 WHAT EVEN DOES THAT MEAN////////////
Lol I hope she somehow takes a combustion med, that, makes here body temptere rise until internal combustion takes place, blowing up the whole dam house in a firey flame of fury, in which that fucker Jarred burns as well
I don't care how much I need you! The next time you stand up, I'll end you with a blunt knife!
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what?
3333013 Use your imagination...
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oh you're talking to the story, not another person
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Yep
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hahahahaha
Once again, thank you for taking us to the darker vestiges of depravity so that I don't have to.
Yeah. Scoots needs to die to make the ending good and we need to see how Jerard will take it.
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that's a bit harsh don't you think?
scootaloo wouldn't be happy to hear that, and there's still so much to come
yes i suppose.... I just want the cliche tragic ending of where she really does die and he feels guilty and regrets it. I want to feel those feels... but whatever ending you have in store im sure it will be just as good.
Sorry. Don't get my comment as i want this story to end already. It's on my favorites right now and im looking forward to more.
PS. I love Twilight.
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i see, and don't worry this is a long ways from ending
sadly twilight doesn't have that big of a roll in this
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But she's my favorite.
k....
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okay let me re explain that, it's not so much as she doesn't have a big part to play, it's that she's just not an active character
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But she's my favorite.
ohhhh.... I think she's wants to be active in the story again. Aha.....
Im just gonna wait until this is finished.. and then only read the last chapter to see the bastard suffer!
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I wouldn't hold my breath on that one...
Hurry up rarity poor scoots has had all she can take.
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keep reading my friend
3359211 i am, just got to chapter 10, and its hard to go on.... i love grimdarks and nightmares, but this is just leaving a REALLY bad taste in my mouth...
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i'm glad
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.....
"I must say each down vote brings me joy knowing i did a job well done."
.......
*upvotes* MUAHHAHAHA!
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bastard!
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VICTORY IS MINE!
but srsly im addicted to this story and its good, only reason why i up-voted.
.....
i really am crazy
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like so many others
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YOU are a sick, deranged, bastard, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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YAY, finnaly caught up, so fucked up
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hehe
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don't worry it'll get worse for her, it never gets better
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he most certainly is
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lol i hope you didn't stop reading there