The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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why did i read that very gore part eggnog and that do not mix
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I cant help but wonder what kind of pony scootaloo is even going to be if she manages to survive to the end of this nightmare
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the purest of nightmares
This made me so happy thats its scary
i love it
I think that Scootaloo has gained prisoner mentality. She can no longer give up although she certainly resents that. The only way to really classify Scootaloo is that she is now a psychopath who at best will be sociopath when she returns to society or at worst will be a psychopathic megalomaniac when she returns to society. The megalomania will come from her desire to fulfill the lack of control she has endured during this nightmarish situation, in addition to psychopathic tendencies easily from this "game". Overall, Scootaloo, as we knew her, no longer exists. Only a dead husk remains.
I read the whole thing - even the gore part.
I've now forgotten what the meaning of sleep was...
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Finally. This made me so happy. But don't EVER make me wait THAT LONG again!
She's getting more and more reckless as this goes on, at first she was scared of pain, but as she was tortured more and more her sense of self-value and in tandem, sense of self preservation have gone down to non-existent levels, effectively granting her very high strength as she can essentially override the part of the brain that says "No, stop, you are gonna hurt yourself if you don't stop." (I personally like to call this 'Zombie Strength') this greatly interests me, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
-Missy
This story reminds me of anal sex for some reason.
Must be because Scootaloo's Master is so deep....
i love it ahahahaha and i did not see scoots killing balaile coming at all beautiful my good sir/mam. keep up the good work
Best chapter ever
Well played, sadistic bastard.
That was definitely worth the wait.
Preparing myself mentaly to read next chapter of Scootaloo's Master. Warning at the beggining... Aaaand I already know I'm gonna need a drink
... So much blood, gore, and beauty, I loved it, I loved it all and I love you, you magnificent bastard.
Everytime I read a chapter of this story, a part of my soul dies. No, wait, it doesn't die, it trembles, then cries, then falls to the floor, then burns until there is nothing more than a melted thing which smells like scorched plastic.
There, I put some of the readers' reactions into words, happy?
shakes head. the gore is trying too hard. all i can say. not to mention that it seems unlikely an herbivore species would gain any amount of spread homicidal sadism. there would be individuals that could possess such features, but they would lieky be a very, very rare monster in pony skin.
put basically you are putting human insanity in a creatuer that while sapient, do not have the motvations of humans.
seriously, as i said, the long lived elf lord like demigoddesses that promote the cooperation between very different beings for common goal, taking cahos and order and instead fo focusing on one aspect promotes both?............... they would probably be pissed by such brutality. Royally, no pun intended, pissed. and i have little dobut that could easily discover this bullshit, and grow completely intolerant within moments. Would the pricnesses bring war because of the suffering of one filly? FUCK YES, especially when that suffering reveals something incredible sick and black somewhere. They can make it more than jsut for scootaloo, they can make it for destroying the last haven of an evil far beyond anythign else in their world.
Cahgnelings are cruel by lacking emotions, and need to feed on love to survive. Discord is relatively harmless, for he seeks distortion and mayhem over death, and seems rather incapable of something so mundane. sombra was a dictator that ruled with absolute power and control, yet his dark power permitted him to do so without needless display of cruelty, for he could harm the mind rather than the body............. the beings of this land have neither excuse of corrupting magic power, nature, need, or lack of sanity. they are a wickedness only beings capable of choosing cruelty or sanity can muster. there would be few ponies in equistria who would be unwilling to risk there lives to stop it.
the only question i would have is why it is taking the sisters so long to move against them.
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intelligence breeds insanity
second, your reply made little to no sense whatsoever to me, so yeah
How DARE YOU! How dare you kill balai, that's all I hate in this chapter, just, argggggg!!!!! Yea, I got nothing else, just balai
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stop, stop, stop
no amount of replies will change what's happening in this story or how the story is made, please stop writing the long as hell comments, they are getting on my nerves a bit
1)If you want to make a point, number it, and have it be no more than one sentence.
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what...?
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Yea, cooljwj. Lyra is not happy with your shenanigans. You should feel ashamed of yourself.
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i'm so confused
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wow your like at the start, enjoy
I have to say I'm rather upset with what happened with Balai. But even more so with the response Scoot gave about her not even being an acquaintance. Even if it was her other personality speaking.
Also, are there going to be more chapters with lots of gore like this and the previous or is it going to lighten up a bit?
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i thought i had stated at the start of the chapter that there wouldn't be, plenty of torture, but not gore
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i think you meant her, but maybe baby
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Aye you did, thats what I get for reading at 1 a.m.
Hello cooljwj
You made a good job there. I really had some moments where my ethic was about to make me stop reading. But after every single chapter I felt proud not to do so and continue reading it.
I really cant wait until your next chapter comes out. Somehow I am like rainbow Dash in the new Episode Daring don't
So signing off here and I leave a big brohoof to this great piece of art. (At least it is for me )
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i'm glad to
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i've been busy but the next chapter is done and is in editing
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first, i wouldn't care if you would act me or not, it wouldn't make me lose a second of sleep
no, it seems perfectly fine to me, remember you're only seeing this through scootaloo's eyes, and Jerard is only this way with her, so of course it'd seem fucked up
now.
Equestria's politics are still a black area in the show and there's no real knowing what they are, and i apparently haven't explained this well enough for it to be understood.
i see Celestia as possibly one of the biggest monsters in the show, more dangerous than discord could dream, and more monstrous than Sombra could ever be
most probably don't see what i see, but that's how i see her, and since she's seen as an immortal princess which will rule basically forever, it would make sense that she'd have to make royals by which she'd marry out to other kingdoms.
Jerard is a prince as much as Twilight is a princess and he's been there longer with more power, he's just not an alicorn, five heroes are not gods, and Discord is just as likely to turn on them as a country would likely go to war with them
also read to the current chapter, i show one country which would happily go to war for Jerard and would slaughter Equestria just to see it burn, so it is entirely possible for war to happen, i'll explain more in chapter 29 why they would.
yes
it's not unbelievable, and the laws make sense
yet again, it only appears that way because you only are seeing the picture from one side
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yay
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i didn't take it as an insult, i said yay, which is good
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it never will be
When will the next chapter be ou
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working on it
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that's different than if some pony kills him
plz dont take too long for next update, i think im jealus of scoots.....can i have jarard as my masterim n love.
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You must have issues if you want that sadistic asshole as your Master XD
3698153 plz???ill be better than scootaloo...plz love me master.
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no master belongs to scootaloo, she would kill you if you tried touching him, litterally
3698277 ok.......mistress scootaloo then?