The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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Sorry I'm late :(. I've been doing a lot of work painting and plumbing with my parents, but I'm starting to catch up!
I'm going to keep this comment quick as to get along the the next chapter as soon as I can.
One part that really stood out to me was the brief exchange between Scootaloo and the guard. Her tone of voice matched perfectly what I would imagine some one who was living in hell would say.
Hahaha so so funny ahhahaha dammit you crack me up man.
2833237 My tone of voice was the same when I was eleven and tried to commit suicide because my life really really really really really sucked. Suicide was a miserable fail.....
All those cuts Scoots has reminds me of myself. Not suicide nor rape and abuse just,well I don't know.
Here I am, just thinking that Rarity has a chalkboard in her basement with a list of all the things she's going to do to Jerard. It just gets longer everytime she talks to Scootaloo. She should be good at healing spells if she practices on Scootaloo.
2833237 for her this is hell.
Wouldn't Rainbow and Rarity be protected by the law because thare elements of harmony? I'm also purity sure habeing a slave is a big crime in Equestria.
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