The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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8005157 i see you're having fun reading
I'm wondering if there's gonna be either a happy ending to this story, a bittersweet, or grim-tragic ending.
Honestly it feels like the author is descending further into madness the longer he writes this.
Somebody call an ambalam
To quote good ol Jontron.
That was a load of shit.
there is nothing else i can say. It was just sutpid.
I could go over the the old thigns is aid, and point out the contrivance and predictability of him SOMEHOW getting away with brainwashing rainbow dahs, despite all thought would say Celestia would not allow it.
It will only be repeating the same issues as the prior chapters.
Hmm.... what was Dash planning...? She asked De for a favor and then suddenly this happens... I feel like there's something I'm missing here...
So when Jerard dies it's going to be an ugly terrible death, right?
7876769 I don't think she can be anything other then loyal anymore. Just letting herself be the sort of person who can't do anything to help her friend isn't something i can see her doing.
8007822 That would be somewhat boring wouldn't it? I mean that's what has been happening this whole time, Souldn't there be something different happening at the end?
8008505
As my uncle used to say. Some people just need killen, and in this case I agree. I think it would be for more interesting to read about how he dies in a terrible way.
8005363 maybe there's a hint text
8012616
Agreed, she was surprisingly calm during the ball despite everything that;s happening... she's up to something...
8012628 possible faked death
. No regrets
8012666
heh