The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
Page generated in 0.03 seconds
Total duration
733 users online
757,375 hits today, 2,364,530 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Been reading this story for a good while. I'm not really into the whole "sadistic master/unwilling slave" thing, but I really want to see how this story pans out. For good or bad, I'll read this till the end.
I believe I should tell you that, right now, to me, this fic is in danger of sliding right into Darkness Induced Audience Apathy.
I am only here to read this story to the end. I am in too deep.
JUST FUCKING KILL THIS BASTARD!!!!
How many more chapters are you planning on writing?
NO...dammit, I really want to see this resolved, even scootaloo's death would be a release now I cant stop reading until it's done, but it just gets worse
Not enough clop
i have no idea why this seems to fit, but it does... at least to me.
3414104
i don't quite understand what you mean
3414219
ummmm don't quite know, a lot, more than probably 100-something thousand more
3414341
future chapters there's a lot of it, but it won't be for a few chapters
3414279
oh so much worse
3414279
I know what you mean!
At this rate there will literally be no possible way for Scootaloo to be free...
Unless she takes her own life.
3414567
It means that it's in danger of being so dark, so bleak that the reader has difficulties to keep being emotionally invested. There's still Rarity's plan to keep us afloat, but that's rather nebulous thing too.
3415311
oh i see what you mean, but i think there's still some hope
3415329
Yes, there's still some hope left yet. I guess what I'm saying is: don't wait too long to throw us a bone here.
3415339
ah i see
If it was me I would kill Scootaloo's Master.
3416067
as do i think all would
3416069 oh I could do it 200+ yards away with 2 of my rifles
I would love to see the insides of your mind. It must be a dark, scary and wonderful place in there.
Wait do you got a new editor ?
And is this means faster updates?
And i agree with uniame that there is not enough clop
://///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
boolean stillwriting
Int feels;
while(stillwriting)
{
feels*=feels*chapter;
}
System.out.println(feels);
3417151
I too share that sentiment.
3414104
Honestly it isn't like that for me.
For me it is just so unnecessarily dark that it is now just silly and I can't help but laugh. But my sense of humor is far sicker than most so take that with a grain of salt.
3417145
no i'm not sure if this was a one time thing, i haven't asked
more clop will come later>>3418249
3418001
no he treated his wife like any other pony, scootaloo's just special
3418297
I think more people who read this have a sick kind of humor.
i know i have
3419324
so true
3418986 gotta admit Mate you did a damn good job here
Love this story, read everything up to this point in two days.
Beautiful story, simply amazing. I've been looking for this kind of story for months
3418986
Considering how much it seems like he enjoys your story, I'd imagine that Kaidan would be willing to continue helping if you brought it up with him.
3422148>>3423383
thanks
3423588
i probably will shortly
So I'm up to Chapter 25 (I love you, Master) and again, I have to ask... how in Tartarus did Celestia allow such a political situation to come to be?!
Forget the fact that Jerard might turn evil. What if some nutjob wants Equestria to go to war? All he has to do is kill one pony. I'm just shaking my head at Celly here; you keep the fate of your nation dependent on the well-being of one individual pony? It's stupid enough if that pony is yourself (though Celestia seems to have been working against that by having Cadance and Twilight become princesses capable of leading if she dies) but when that pony is someone you can't control or watch, that just crosses the line into blinding idiocy.
Hell, what if Jerard slips on a banana peel, breaks his neck, and somepony cries murder? Equestria gets invaded?
I love this book, but it is because I understand it on a diffrent level...........
I like this fic, but I'm not givig it a thumbs up. It's a bit too grimdark for my liking for me to humbs up, but too well written for a thumbs down.
3414057 well for some reason I like it heaps
Each chapter is so difficult to read. Yet I love this so much. Also, this story has made me like Rarity so much more.
NEIN.
SCOOTALOO.
NEIN!
On a side note: Shit Scootaloo, you just killed yourself then and there, man.
You know, there's one major problem in his plan. Luna changes into Nightmare Moon when she gets really angry, and guess what'll get you angry even faster than jealousy? Righteous indignation. Plus the only ones capable of reverting her are the main 6, and they aren't exactly going to be unhappy with that turn of events.
WHY SCOOTS WHY?! I wish this fic have a happy ending
Good luck getting the Elements to do anything after this. There doesn't seem to be a kingdom worth saving.
[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ARDhJ2dpuYU]
This is basically the chapter where the bad guy wins.