The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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This story is awesome
but why isnt rarity just going to canterlot and telling celestia. Even he cant fight the princess
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i explained that
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i still like your music, but also know i enjoy the thumb downs just as much as the thumbs up, lets me know scootaloo's loved hehe kind of evil way of knowing but hey, it's enjoyable
I had forgotten to touch on this point earlier, but I like how you did some work to expand the back stories of characters like Diamond Tiara and now Dash. Little remarks like "I understand, more than you know" just ad oceans of depth to ponies that would otherwise be considered shallow and unrelatable...
I would like to caution you however, as this story treads an incredibly fine line between gratuitous rape and beautifully dark story telling. I would be saddened beyond measure should the former become the truth.
This really is a fantastic story. I look forward to reading more!
I don't even need to read this for me to love it... *sadistic grin*...
But hell, I'm an Sociopath confirmed by documents... Muhahaa~
I've died before. I was running in the street and got ran over. When I woke up I was in the hospital when my friend told me he watched the doctors shok me back to life. Good times.
2844447 your socio too. Cool
If Dache and I could interfere, Jerard would have died in so many ways that would scare the shit out of a Xenomorph.
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good for you... :sweetieunsure:
i readed the chapter 8... and when she says "He could call the guards from any country and jail you" I think that is wrong... Maybe almost every site, but in the Crystal Empire or the land of griffons, i do not think could do something.
Is thar or going to live with Chrysalis
PLEASE ANSWER ME WHAT IS SCOTALOO S CUTIE MARK
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Exhibit A: Chapter One