The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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Glad to see the stories back I read every chapter almost twice
9566094
well that's nice
You sir/ma'am may have just made my week on a Monday with this update, and I'm extremely grateful for that. I've been eagerly awaiting an update to this all the while hoping it wasn't dead.
9567248
i will finish this, i've just been lazy :P
In theory I think Scootaloo have a little defense, saying that it was a test to see if Celestia was testing her and was checking how far could she go, knowing that in any moment the test could be over.
I DIDN’T REALIZE THERE WAS AN UPDATE
9570484
now you have
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incoherent screaming
9570774
heheh
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please tell me that this is the revival
9572829
Well, not really, the story has one more chapter that i haven't finished, but i plan to work on it soon. While i could go on for hundreds of chapters, and i love mlp deeply, i just don't have it in me to write that much more for Scootaloo's Master. How i write is pretty much by talking with the characters while watching the movie in my head. Scootaloo stopped talking to me at a point and i never was able to finish because she was the last character i needed to talk to me. I'll probably write more stories, but i can't keep going much more with SM, it wouldn't really be fair to you guys, because i would probably stop randomly again
9574143
thats fine, just keep writing, and even if you dont, and we will be happy
Actually squee'd seeing this update in my email, I have nostalgia for this fic.
9578896
Damn, I don't even know why I read through this whole story. I really don't know what to think. I think that even though the prose can be improved, the intriguing story more than makes up for it.
Thank you.
9583306
prose?
Almost 6 years huh?
9733540
it is now
More please and soon cuz I have read every chapter and want more
9776567
there's only one more chapter, i'll get to it sooner or later
9574143
Ah that must be difficult if she simply stopped talking. It makes sense why the updates have been infrequent.
What an odd thing to come back to after all this time. I was much too young to read this when I started to but I'm an adult now and have the same morbid curiosity. Still a good read.
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i'm still planning on writing the final chapter, it's just kinda hard to do, but i will hopefully soon
I've only skimmed the two most recent chapters, but judging by what I saw, it looks like Scootaloo's situation does eventually improve.
Is that an accurate assumption? And if so, when would you say that starts?
Hmmm, i'm not sure how to answer that exactly, but Scootaloo's life is pretty good throughout the story.
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I only just saw your reply, so I apologize for taking so long to get back to this.
I find that hard to believe, considering the description and some of the earlier comments.
And as tempted as I am to at least skim through the fic to find out for myself, I'd really rather not.
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To understand madness is to stare into the void and not hear yourself but something else as you speak its words.
From my point of view, i think Scootaloo has a pretty good life, the transition between having loving parents to gaining a master might be rough to many.
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When does Scootaloo herself start considering her life to be pretty good, then?
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without a doubt by the end
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I see
Is there a specific point when you'd say it starts, or is it just kind of a gradual build up throughout the whole fic?
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I love this story, but if you're looking for a point it stops being this dark there really isn't one. There's ups and downs in scootaloo's comfort but that's about it.
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I see
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You kind of pity her less towards the end of the story and she's very interesting but... yeah it stays dark.
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Does the pity decrease as things get slightly better (emphasis on SLIGHTLY) for her, as she gives in to the madness, or a bit of both?