The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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hehehe you forgot the mind bleach
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i bet you have
Hmmmm, STRAWBERRY.... very good.
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what are you talking about? i don't hate scootaloo, i love her so much that i want her to be mine forever and love me so much that'd she couldn't live without me
to feel her fur brushing up against mine and love it as our warmth entangles in love forever
the person that loves you the most, is the one that won't share your existence
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:D
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he's a very likeable pony, sure you don't see it, but he's considered a great pony to dozens of nations for many great deeds, he's the perfect monster
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oh my god!!!!! that's an amazing quote?!
My only hope is that He gets the most painful and excruciating agonizing death possible...and thats just the warm up fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/052/4/6/curse_of_pinkamena_by_candys_killer-d5vsjww.jpg pinkemena...we need you...
My feelings of the chapter....
Just an administrative note, the italics broke, as you forgot to put a [i\].
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thanks
3000658 Sure bro! Loving how much the story is progressing. Still hate the royal fag though.
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who?
3000682 I always forget his name, but Scoot's "Master". AKA, Royal Fag.
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oh jerard
3000695 Yea the douche lord himself. I've decided that if this guy was in darksouls, he would be more of a pain in the ass than Artorius. Just chain stunning you till you die like the bitch he is.
Are you still busy with chapther 19 or is this story on hiatus
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no just taking a while, things in real life are making it hard to post right now, it may take a while for updates
Oke i fully understand that. just wanted if this was still in progress because i really like this story
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yeah i'll never put a story on hiatus, updating just takes a while, next to editing it and posting it, it takes a few days, plus i edit it twice before i give it to my editor, so it takes a while
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bad things go here ----->
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tell me it's something tasty
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but i assume you're enjoying the story so far?
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fine i'll slow on the branding and torture her in less bloody methods
I really enjoy this story, but definatly do not clop to it. Its a good story but im not so much...into crazy brutal clop.
This sounds really weird but i like this story especially becausr of the torture
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me to
(warning this is going to sound rude) how long is it itapproximately going to take for chapter 19 because i am impatient
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do not make me stab you boy, jk
about an hour after my editor gets done with it, so about a day i think, i'll ask him
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you know for a story like this, i'm rather surprised that so many people like it
Ok, where to start...
This story is great written, language is perfect, and scenery with plot both truly "breathtaking"...
...but this is DEMENTED on so many levels that it's impossible to describe thoroughly.
"Cupcakes" & "Rainbow Factory" are better than this. "Sexual Locust" & "Rise of a Changeling Queen Twilight Sparkle" are better than this. Things like "Equestria Divided", any post-apocalypse in here or uprising of dark gods/demons/nightmares/Mane 6 are NOT EVEN CLOSE in comparison to THIS.
Dear Author, You officially wrote not a grimdark, but infinitedark. This tag SHOULD be made ESPECIALLY for THIS.
Usually I enjoy a good dark story with a lot of fight, emotional strain & endurance, but this is worse than the scariest creepypasta outta here. You can have 11/10 for this. But no fave. NEVER FOR THIS.
NEVER AND EVER.
P.S. With this little bit of pedophilia, I have officially seen everything in the MLP. Now, excuse me, but I need to tear my brain out. TO FORGET THIS.
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Glad you like it
Still no chapter 19
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editor is way slow
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once you catch up i'll answer any questions you have left
sometimes, i feel things in storys in real life.
this is one of the times i hate it
my heart feels like someone squished it
it hurts....
and then a fully hollowfied Ichigo shows up and proceeds to disintegrate Jerard with a Cero. Oh, wait, That's too merciful.
I WILL TEAR HIS LUNGS OUT AND FORCE FEED THEM TO HIM WHILE HE CHOKES ON HIS SPLEEN, WHICH I MASHED INTO SOUP THEN INJECTED INTO HIS BLOODSTREAM! AFTERWARDS, HE WILL BE IMPALED ON A PILLOW WHILE I GIVE HIM A LOBOTOMY WITH HIS TESTICLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, now that that's out of my system, I'm going to go get a strawberry milkshake (With chunks of strawberry). I will eat/drink the shake while re-reading the part where he plays with her organs.
the bastard part of him is back ichigo means strawberry
on a personal note las vegas is spelt with an a and that is why my name is spelt that way so screw you guys I'm going home
Is it just me but has every time the word "Happened" is supposed to have been written I see "Happen" written?
On more than just this.
I can't do it... This story is too DARK for me. I used to hate fic where bad things happen to Scootaloo. Reading Fly Away Sweet Scootaloo make me stop hating it so much. But this is too much, I can't continue. So here is what I want to say but much shorter : your story is great but I'm stopping here and won't read it anymore, sorry