The greatest day of Scootaloo's life becomes perfect till it ends broken and torn, only to find that her nightmare doesn't end there.
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Hot damn. From zero to hero just like that!
That was a glorious chapter. The whole game with tricking Twi and others, and the big reveal for Scoot's mom? Perfect!
More plz. So much more.
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Hero? The sadistic, murderous, kidnapping, blackmailing, child abusing, sociopathic rapist (who is apparently raping his own daughter's soul now too) is the hero now? Really?
Okay, I have been reading this off and on, but need to ask, have I missed something? Because it is looking like all of Equestria is taking stupid pills this chapter (They seem to do so in other chapters too, but this is the most blatant). This just makes no sense.
1: Why in Discord's five dimensional sphincter are Scoot's parents suddenly so okay with this? I can understand being scared and not wanting to go to the police or guards. But when you have royalty, hell, not just royalty, but a demigod, wanting to actively help you don't laugh it off and protect the monster who is hurting your child. Even taking pride in the system that is letting your baby get hurt, I mean, is Jerardishness contagious?
2: Equestria is a monarchy, not a democratic government. Celestia may not like throwing her weight around, but Twilight sure as hell can. Heck, it was even implied that Dash would be executed for killing Jerard regardless of the reasons because he is royalty; so I am sure Twi could do something about it.
3: Dash and Rarity not telling Twilight or using their direct dragon line to Celestia still baffles me. Sure Jerard is a prince, but not THE prince.Hell, they have four alicorns they can call on, plus Shining and The Wonderbolts all without going through normal channels thanks to Spike. On the same note, if all else fails, they have access to fricken Discord (as this seems to take place post S3) if they are worried about a safe rescue. Discord needs no proof and can make Jerard into a banana or something with a snap of his fingers.
TLDR? I am not complaining about a dark story, I am complaining abut seemingly random changes in the personalities, morality and intellect of characters to keep from making any progress towards solving anything.
P.S. I will admit that I am mostly reading this in hope of a good old fashion divine smiting from the god-monarchs, so my views may be tinted.
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first of all i explained it in the story, but i'll explain it clearly
Jerard is a prince, a prince in Equestria from how i've made it holds blood ties to other countries, if he were to be killed or anything really then Equestria would be plunged into a huge war, Jerard has done enough good that he's seen as pure that countries would literally go to war for him
while Jerard himself isn't actively powerful, he has enough money and influence to get things done, he can hire his own personal army if he needed to and so on
War beats any number of alicorns, while they are powerful, last ep of season two proved they aren't gods.they could fall in battle like any other, discords been beaten it can happen again
as for twilight doing something, she can't kill him, and if he wanted to he could run to another country with scootaloo and she couldn't stop him
Celestia won't give up the lives of tens of thousands of ponies for one single filly, so even if she was told, she'd more likely tell Twilight to back off.
as for rarity and dash telling others, Rarity plan hinges on them not knowing till the time is right, if they knew they'd have to hide that they knew, and the chances of one of them slipping up would be too great a risk
Twilight would clearly tell Celestia and then the whole thing comes crashing down, telling others might not always be the best action because then things become much more complex and ponies die
sorry got to this point a bit late
first of all Twilight couldn't stop this, Celestia would be forced to take action no matter what to strive off the chance of war, she would be killed, period.
as for her parents, :( after what they've already done to scoots, i imagine they'd do anything she asked them, and she wants them to do as they're told, plus they are basically in the same situation as Rarity, what exactly can they do? if they tell any pony they'll die, then they will be killed and leave scoots all alone with him. also their chances of killing him are slim, and if they get caught, which they would, it wouldn't be just them that had to pay the price, it'd be all of them
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It did not register with me that he would retain that much support after his deeds came to light. Thank you for clearing that up.
I still stand that it is rather detestable for her mother to take any pride in what she helped cause and that Discord turning the prince into a something would solve this (as he needs no line of sight to use his magic and there would be no body to spark an international incident but that is not here or there and the latter would be out of place for the story's tone.
I would also like to apologize for getting a bit ranty there. I had just finished the last three chapters and was rather wrung out with a pit in my stomach. As, if I recal from the discription of the story,that was part of the goal, I must give you props on that. You are an effective writer for the parts I can stomach to fully read.
To avoid any more incidents like this, I think I will wait for this story to finish and read the last chapter before starting again. I figure I will manage to keep a more civil tounge if I know how/if he is finally... resolved.
Apologies again.
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it's no problem, i loved answering your comment, if you have any other questions ask away i'll answer them
That's three weeks -_- forgot your days?
I supported this sick bastard from the start and now he's good. WHAThe is supposed to be a saddistic rapist
Good shit it's hard for me to follow at times. But.............the whole situation is completely FUBAR naow!!!
It's all one blur. I think that's what it's like for Scoots, it's all a blur in this pit of madness.
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this is so freaking awesome
in the chapter Law, scootaloo's mom say's
“It’s the law. In fact, I helped create a few dozen of them.” My mother said proudly. “I have had my custody of Scootaloo thrown to the courts five times, and each time, I beat the heck out of them.”
care to elaborate why her custody of scootaloo was challenged?
sounds like a interesting/funny side story.
3878757 Naw he's cute either way. He's just like this 'cause she won't feel pain anymore when he hurts her.