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I am a fanfic critic i will give your work a number from 1 to 200. But i will only mark your work if you have more then 10 fanfic storys

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When my life ended, I didn't think it would start anew...but I am not going to throw away such chance.
Now in a rather familiar world, I'll enjoy a totally normal school life!

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Not long ago, Equestria received some rather...unique visitors. They call themselves Autobots. A harsh civil war that has lasted for eons has forced them to flee their dying home. Now they are refugees who simply wish to find a peaceful place to belong. Fortunately, they couldn't have found any place friendlier! Follow along if you wish, as the ponies show their extraterrestrial friends what their new home has to offer. Let's Roll Out!

This is a concept I've had ruminating in my head for a while now. I love both Transformers and MLP, and have had countless thoughts about what it would be like if these two fascinating universes were to meet. This will be a series of short one-off, slice-of-life type stories. The Autobots will be based almost exclusively off of their portrayals in the original Generation 1 cartoon and the High Moon games. (War for Cybertron & Fall of Cybertron)

I welcome any and all feedback, as I want this to be an enjoyable read for y'all. If you have any ideas for potential setups or events you'd like to see happen, feel free to share them in the comments!

Link to the cover art by Valcron, whom I thank so much for allowing me to use their work. Please be sure to check out their other awesome works as well!

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I know the exact day she will return. I have a good idea of where. I've been planning for this day for hundreds of years. My plans are perfectly in place. I'm sure everything will be fine.

Just one more night, and I'll finally see my sister again.

Maybe.

I don't know if I can face her.

Hopefully, I won't have to.


AN: Queen of Nothing and this one are sister stories. While neither are needed for the other, they complement each other.

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When Bon-Bon meets Lyra for the first time, she likes her. But soon their friendship grows a little closer, and Lyra discovers a romantic side she didn't know she had, as well as other sides to her personality.

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Discord, despite the thought that he was reformed, is back at it again with chaotic shenanigans. Only this time he's got the main 6 in his clutches. And the only one who can save them? Our dear friend Rainbow Dash. That is if she can keep from being discords plaything for five minutes.

Also as im sure many of u have noted, this is my first time writing outside of romance. :)

This is a story idea born of an rp between me and mrsupercala

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This story is a sequel to A New Flashlight


Flash Sentry came back in time to stop the rise of the Zeros from wiping out Equine life. now the Flash of the present must find the Shoehorn brothers and free the future from this threat and prevent it from happening in the first place.

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Shortly after the Battle of the Bands, a new student arrives at Canterlot High School. Nobody knows her and she's not in a mood to make any friends. On any other school, she'd end up as a loner, but Canterlot High School isn't normal.
Of course, shenanigans are inevitable. Friendship, feelings and magic, whether she likes it or not.

Another EQG self-insert that starts right after "Rainbow Rocks" and moves forward from there. Since the events from the movies and mini-series won't all be included, I'm giving this the AU tag, just in case.
Tagged as "Teen" mostly because of foul language.
"Violence" and "Suicide" only happen in the later chapters, I will give a warning at the beginning of those.


This story is dedicated to a friend I haven't heard of in almost half a year now. I met her while I was in therapy for depression. She wasn't into MLP at all, but we bonded over music we both liked and I showed her some of the stuff I've written before. We even watched a few EQG videos and even if she wasn't ever "into" all this stuff, she felt pretty strongly when I showed her some Anon-A-Miss fics.
Turns out we both had out problems growing up and going to school.

We started talking, making up stories and I wrote some of them down. I made the suggestions to place them into the EGQ world, and Ocean Blues was born.

That was more than a year ago. We kept in touch, even after therapy, thanks to the internet, and we kept writing this "thing" together. Until, almost half a year ago, contact suddenly broke down. Her social media still exists, but there's no reaction. Her phone number won't connect any more. I have no idea what happened to her, and with all that corona and world wide crisis going on, it scares me. I know people sometimes just move on. I know people stop using their social media or change their phone numbers all the time. It still scares me.

So I've decided to publish this. It's not all finished and there will be gaps in the story line, although I've been trying to fill some of them on my own. This story was originally written in German, so the translation might sound weird at some points, please bear with me.
Maybe I will never finish this, but at least I want to post all I have from our work so far. To get it off my chest, and maybe so someone else might find it and get something out of it, even if it's just a chuckle.

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Fluttershy and Thunderlane say their “I do’s” and immediately start planning on having a family. Fluttershy can’t wait to be a mom and Thunderlane can’t wait to be a dad. Hopefully no screwballs are thrown their way anytime soon.

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Princesses Celestia and Luna's popularity ratings are at an all-time low, with most Equestrian citizens deeming the pair amusing but incompetent and eager to distance themselves even further from the dissatisfied populace.

Determined to raise herself in said ponies' estimations, Celestia announces that she and Luna will participate in the Annual Amateur Hoofball League, a small-time sporting event hosted in rural Equestria. Unbeknown to her, the tournament plays host to more than teams, and one local hoodoo could ruin everything.

Note: hoofball = soccer; a post-S4 universe. Featured on Equestria Daily! (24 Nov 2020)


Glossary of Useful Terms

Roughly 30% of this story involves the playing of hoofball and uses terminology with which you may not be familiar. The following association football terms/idioms appear in the text. You may wish to refer to this list, where they are briefly defined.

Between the goalposts – (when used idiomatically) playing in the position of goalkeeper

Build-up play – the phase of play during which the team in possession attempts to create a scoring chance against an organised defence

Byline – the part of the goal line to either side of the goal

Centre-forward – an attacker who plays centrally; one who is typically expected to contribute to a team's build-up play

Final third – the third of the field in which a team's attackers are typically situated and where most if not all attempts to score occur; the attacking third

Four-four-two – a formation comprising two lines of four players in front of which two strikers play; a popular amateur formation due to its ubiquity and relative simplicity

Full-back – a defensive player on the wing; historically a player of the last line of defence playing centrally

Goal kick – a free kick taken by the defending side from within their goal area after attackers send the ball over the byline

Half-back – an obsolete midfield position; a player in front of the full-backs and behind the attackers in a two-three-two-three formation

Hold-up play – an attacker retaining possession of the ball to delay (hold up) play, allowing teammates to advance further up the field

Inside forward – historically an attacker positioned near the centre of the field

Offside trap – a manoeuvre in which players in the defending team push upfield in order to put one or more opposing players into an offside position

Penalty area – the rectangular area marked out in front of each goal, within which a foul by a defender involves the award of a penalty kick and outside which the goalkeeper is not allowed to handle the ball

Simulation – an attempt by a player to gain an unfair advantage by falling to the ground, and possibly feigning an injury, to give the impression that a foul has been committed

Striker – generally a forward or attacker; specifically an attacker at the front of a formation, who operates in and around the penalty area, anticipating scoring chances

Tackle – an act of playing, or an attempt to play, the ball when it is in the possession of an opponent

The break – a counter-attack; to break, or to hit an opponent on the break, means to launch a counter-attack

The hole – the space between defence and midfield

The sticks – the goalposts or goal frame

Touchline – the boundary line on each side of the field

Two-three-two-three – an obsolete formation of the 1930s utilising inside forwards in front of midfield to support the half-backs

Upright – a goalpost

Volley – a kick of the ball made before it touches the ground

Wall – a line of defenders forming a barrier against a free kick taken near the penalty area

Wing – either of the parts of the field close to the touchline

Winger – an attacking player on the wing


Written and co-edited by Acologic
Co-edited by Radian
Proofread by Radian and Fireman Al
Art by amalgamzaku

The story will continue in On and off the Court!

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This story is a sequel to A Vignette of Harmony


During a day working at the park of Other-Questria, a little girl tries to get away with getting a Caramel Zapple, the toughest candy apple to make, for free.

Needless to say, Vignette has other plans...

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