A Blessing From A Princess
Two years of love and performances later
Lyra Awoke to find Bon-Bon staring into her eye's. She hugged her.
"Well good morning beautiful." Bon-Bon said to a blushing Lyra.
"You know I'm not as beautiful as other mares." she replied.
Bon-Bon chuckled, kissing her love on the forehead.
"You're just fine Lyra, your beautiful." Bon-Bon said.
Lyra giggled as she hopped out of bed. She trotted down the hallway and used her magic to put together a simple breakfast. Once she finished, she brought the breakfast to Bon-Bon.
"Aww, how sweet of you Lyra." she said smiling.
"Lyra, I have something I want to do. But it requires extra help, So I invited The Princess here." Bon-Bon said.
"THE PRINCESS!!!" Lyra said with surprise. "S-She's coming here?!?"
"Is something wrong?" Bon-Bon asked.
Lyra began dashing around, making things look at least somewhat clean.
"If the Princess is coming here, then we need to make sure that this place looks good." Lyra said while she dusted a random shelf.
"Jeez Lyra, you remind me of Twilight Sparkle. She's always obsessing over the Princess coming to Ponyville." she replied.
Bon-Bon got out of bed and took her dishes to the kitchen. Once they were clean she put them away and turned to find the Princess standing in the living room. She trotted over and said hi as Lyra came out and almost had a heart attack.
"Y-Your here already!!" she said once she recovered.
"Hello to you too Lyra." Princess Celestia said, smiling at her.
"I'm glad you came Princess. I was hoping you could give us your blessing." Bon-Bon said as she trotted over to Lyra.
"Sure." Celestia replied, knowing where this was going. Lyra looked at Bon-Bon in confusion. Why does she need The Princesses blessing? she thought to herself.
"Lyra, I love you more than anything in the world and I want nothing more than to spend the rest of my life with you. Lyra Heartstrings, Will you be my wife?" Bon-Bon asked as she pulled a hoof bracelet out of nowhere.
Lyra just stared, she was so stunned.
"I-I...uh...Yes! Yes Bon-Bon I will!!!!!" she said as she rushed forward to embrace her fiance.
Celestia watched as they hugged, knowing that soon she would preside over the ceremony.
Bon-Bon kissed Lyra passionately as she said, "Lyra, I Love You!"
"I love you too Bon-Bon."
A/N: I think this is where I'm gonna end it. If anypony objects to this, Let me know and I'll add something new. Message me and let me know, otherwise, enjoy! -StormHoof
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"I-I...uh...Yes! Yes Lyra I will!!!!!" she said as she rushed forward to embrace her fiance
Hmmm. I think you mean yes bon-bon i will, seeing as bon bons doing the asking. And don't stop here. More.
Hey>>1467456hey I fixed that error. Thx for ointng that out
1468818 You're very welcome. And please don't stop here. I'm enjoying it so very much
I would like to see more of Rarity and Fluttershy.
This story is great by the way. Your writing keeps getting better each chapter. I can't wait to see what else you're writing.
1468955 I might add an epilogue, but it won't be for a while. Im gonna be starting on a Vinyltavia story. I'm gonna try to at least write one story for ever one of the most popular pairings.
1469186 And thx Garbo, as you can see above, I will be writing a new fic. Hope you all enjoy it!!!
1471351 Oh. I'm ok with that. Most of the Vinly/Tavi stories I've read have been good.
Your doing a great job on this story. I t would be a shame if you stopped here. The ending seemed a little rushed. All in all, very good job!
Moar!
1478804
A little rushed? The Flash on speed writing in shorthand couldn't have made this pacing any faster.
That being said, Stormhoof i noticed you've missed a few capitalizations at the beginning of sentences in your work, as well as forgetting to capitalize last names of ponies. I'm guessing your not using Word or any software that has proofreading capabilities so ill keep it short. In whatever program your using (notepad for instance) press & hold CTRL+F to bring up Find and type a single period. That way you can browse all the endings of sentences & check if you have proper capitalization. Same goes for names just type in the name of the respecting pony and search to see if its properly capitalized.
Or download Open Office.
With that said, more is appreciated.
I definitely liked the story, the dislikes might have something to do with the earlier errors in your first chapter.
BTW
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Cause you're worth it!
1591175 your comments hurt a lil bit, but i welcome nonetheless. They will help with my writing in the future, thanks.
1610616 thx for the tip. i will keep it in mind.
1629838 just so u know, ur questions r appreciated. and i will not answer them. i wrote this fic this way, to cause questions. why this, why that. Its just how i do things.
The story was nice, it really needed a grammar comb and some pacing, but the story was interesting.
I think you should write about their wedding.
1653168 A lot of people are saying that. I will write a wedding when i get to it. right now i wanna continue on my dashfire fic.
"Lyra, I love you more than anything in the world and I want nothing more than to spend the rest of my life with you. Lyra Heartstrings, Will you be my wife?" Bon-Bon asked as she pulled a hoof bracelet out of nowhere.
Lyra just stared, she was so stunned.
"I-I...uh...Yes! Yes Lyra I will!!!!!" she said as she rushed forward to embrace her fiance. 're- read this for me