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Neroson40


You may hate my work, but give it a chance... and then you can nuke me.

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This story is a sequel to Fixing Flashlight


Things get awkward for Flash and Twilight after a sleepwalking incident, and Flash gets memories of being completely human at the same time as being a pony. investigation takes him to Canterlot high to return those memories, and repay that world's Flash for setting them up.

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 39 )

Okay. Why are we going to hate you. Thanks for the long awaited sequel.

Good story so far!:twilightsmile:

Interesting. It is always different when messages from the beyond are given. Great job. Good luck with the next chapter.

One moment please
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WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was a plot twist. Good job.

“What do you mean?” he put on a face like he did something his farther didn’t approve of… that I was here to yell at him for.

farther? do you mean father?

That's interesting. I can't wait to read what happens next Good luck.

Interesting. I wonder how the two Flash's react, as well has one Twilight. Good luck.

expecting my foul.

foal

As for base

Capitalize Base.

5869758 Let me guess, you're gonna be my personal grammar Nazi? WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN!?

5870032
If you want me to.:pinkiesmile:
Uh... I'm sure I've commented on this story before......

I'm guessing Equestria. Great chapter. Good luck with the next one.

5832827 I hope by that you mean the mind of the Flash Sentry OF Equestria. If not, my attemps at being obvious have been for naught.

Master Cheif Flash Sentry POV

chief

Wow. I wonder what is going to happen next. Great chapter. Thanks for the update on what is in the Human world of Equestran universe.

Twilight Explained.

She even entered the Name “Master Chief” into the system to avoid confusing it with there already being a Flash Sentry in the system.

Accidental uppercase
And it's spelled "Cheerilee" not "Cheerily"
also, things like teacher is under-case unless part of a name


And Pinkie taking something seriously is terrifying.

While I don't exactly like what you have done to Flash, this is your story, and I am dying to know what happens next. Besides as Flash gets more Halo like, it starts to go on you. Thanks for the new chapter.

After school I started hearing things About Chief.

interested by what happened Years ago

accidental capitalization

please get an editor...

[quote Glared at the security ]

and recounted the Rules

(I swear there are better things to name place)

places

Get an editor get an editor get an editor

I didn't see anything to correct so.... :pinkiehappy:

Wow. Time travel blows my mind. Great chapter. Good luck with the next part.

Nice chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next. I also want to know why Sloth is Twilight's flaw. I guess the next few chapters will answer that.

5926323 Um, actually she reads more than she actually lives so that was my train of thought... funny story, i asked my friend for a second opinion on hers, Rarity's and Fluttershy's and... he suggested Greed for Twilight.

I'm glad the memories got returned. That is good for Flash. Great job with this chapter.

to notice that I woke up for a lecture.

from

Princess Friendly....:twilightsmile:

5987478 no, that was poor wording elsewhere, I meant "I was awake for a lecture."

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Eh... It was either one or the other and I was being lazy...

Yeah. You ripped off Kingdom Hearts. Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

and Vanished in a puff of smoke.

yup, that's extra vanished.

6042561 At least Flash isn't a Nobody!How would his Recusant name be spelled?

6043645 Bat-credit-card.

Wow. Everything is crazy now. Great job.

I am very much lost now........ I guess I get to reread this story to understand it better. :pinkiehappy:

That actually made sense and cleared up a few questions. Great job. Good luck.

6255255 Now I have a question. WHAT QUESTIONS DID I ANSWER!?

6255321 Where were the girls, and exactly where was Twilight Sparkle and the Princess Twilight Sparkle.

FLY FLASHIE FLY!

Glad about another update.

That was wierd. I feel sorry for Shinning.

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