• Published 5th Apr 2013
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Second Chances - Dragon Angel Knight



Chrysalis and Princess Twilight one shot

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Queen Chrysalis jolted upright, her aching body complaining at the sudden motion. She looked to the entrance of the cave she had holed up in for the past few months. A storm was raging outside.

The Changeling queen sighed heavily. She would not be able to get any love for herself from the village at the edge of the forest the cave was nestled in. Chrysalis supposed that she should consider herself lucky for surviving as long as she had. She got to her holed hooves and trudged to the entrance and sat on her haunches, watching the storm rage on.

Truth be told, Chrysalis had absolutely no idea where she was. After both she and her entire hive had been blasted from Canterlot all those months ago, they had been separated. The greater majority of changelings had either perished in the interim or had begun cursing her name and swearing to kill her if the chance ever showed itself. Either way, Queen Chrysalis was queen no more, which was fine by her. She was not really sure exactly WHY she was fine with it, but she'd long since stopped dwelling on the matter.

A sudden flash of lightning and the sound of thunder crashing nearby jolted Chrysalis out of her reverie. During the brief moment that the night sky was illuminated by the lightning, Chrysalis could have sworn by Solaris' Puffy Pink Plot* that there was a pegasus flying in the storm. She scoffed at the idea before another flash of lightning lit up the sky and she saw that there was indeed a pony attempting to fly in the maelstrom surrounding the forest. The pony looked to be rather new to flying however, because: A) They were flying in a storm. Even a freshly hatched changeling knew better than to do that. And B) They were flying as if they hadn't had wings their entire life.

Chrysalis let out a small chuckle as she watched the pony struggle for a moment more before finally falling to the ground. Chrysalis sighed and turned back to the cave to get out of the elements before something stopped her. She looked back to the entrance of the cave and grunted in irritation before heading out into the storm.

***

Chrysalis wandered towards where the pony had fallen, following the emotions the pony was putting out like a beacon. It wasn't that long before she came upon a small clearing with debris from a very recent crash littering the area. With a flick of emerald colored magic, Chrysalis moved the detritus aside and stopped dead at the sight of the pony in front of her, the lavender coat and star burst cutie mark bringing memories of a wedding that was not hers to the surface.

Lightning flashed once more, bringing a pack of Timberwolves into sharp relief. They growled once before attempting to charge at the pony, believing her to be easy prey before being tossed aside by an emerald barrier.

"She's MINE," Chrysalis growled darkly at the feral wood wraiths. The Timberwolves, to their credit, knew that this new threat was not to be trifled with due to her near alicorn stature. They all backed off one by one, whimpering with tails tucked before turning tail and running. Chrysalis smirked to herself, then turned to the pony, looking her over once before noticing the horn upon her head in addition to the wings she had been flying on.

Upon closer inspection, Chrysalis noticed one of the wings was bent at a rather odd angle and the pony was breathing shallowly. Heaving a tired sigh for the umpteenth time, she enveloped the pony in emerald magic and lifted her on her back. She then turned towards the cave and trudged through the mud with what seemed to be the weight of the world on her mind.

***

Twilight Sparkle awoke to the sound of a crackling fire. She gingerly opened her eyes and surveyed her surroundings, finding herself in a cave. She noticed an unpleasant tingling sensation along her side and looked to her left, finding her wing splinted and covered in a green slime, which was attached to her side, keeping the wing still, and presumably numb, which is what the tingling was.

"You're awake," a voice said off to Twilight's right.

Twilight turned and gasped, "Chrysalis!!"

"Yes," the changeling said simply, "And you are Shining Armor's sister. I must say, the wings suit you, though I have to question your sanity."

"What?" twilight said, caught off guard.

"You were flying in the worst storm I've seen in months," Chrysalis said, "You are either incredibly stupid, or incredibly insane, because I'm almost certain that even a clinically insane pegasus knows better than to fly in adverse weather."

Twilight worked her mouth up and down, failing to come up with a remark and ending up closing her mouth and fuming in silence. She looked down as a small bunch of fruits were pushed near her.

"You should eat," Chrysalis said, "You are probably hungry, am I right?"

Twilight opened her mouth to protest, but her stomach betrayed her and growled loudly, making the lavender alicorn blush. She nodded and grabbed a piece of fruit before asking, "Why?"

Chrysalis came over and sat on the opposite side of the fire from Twilight and responded, "Why help you, you mean? Or do you mean why impersonate Mi Amore Cadenza and try to take over Canterlot?"

"Both, I guess," Twilight said after a moment of thought and swallowing her mouthful of fruit.

Chrysalis sighed before saying, "My changelings were starving. That is the reason for the invasion. The way I saw it, at the time, who better to steal love from than the stallion betrothed to the Princess of Love? Only you had to go off and ruin everything by bringing the real Princess in to crash the wedding."

"Why didn't you try and talk to Celestia?" Twilight asked curiously, "It would have saved you a lot of trouble, you know."

"Don't you think I tried that?!" Chrysalis snapped, "I was turned away before I even reached the throne room. Something about me being a monster. I doubt your precious Celestia even knew of our plight, considering the majority of the royals are xenophobic pricks who care more for who has more Celestial* blood than of the problems that someone like ME had to deal with on a daily basis."

"I-I'm sorry...." twilight said, giving an extremely good impression of Fluttershy.

"...Not your fault," Chrysalis said softly, "As a matter of fact, I'm pretty sure you did me a favor by helping to blast me out of Canterlot."

Twilight looked surprised and asked, "What do you mean?"

Chrysalis looked down and suddenly transformed into a brown earth pony stallion with an Hourglass cutie mark and a bow tie. "Because," the stallion said, "I've learned that it is far better to have friends who care enough to give you their love than to steal emotions from ponies who hate and fear you..."

Chrysalis sighed and looked back at Twilight while transforming back into her own form. "As for your other question, I simply felt that I should help."

Twilight thought for a moment before getting up and moving to press her uninjured side into Chrysalis, surprising the changeling with the sudden contact.

"Then I am glad I could help, in some way," Twilight said with a smile, "Even if you have been shunned by the rest of your race."

"H-how did you...?" Chrysalis asked shakily.

"I haven't seen or heard another changeling the entire time we've been here, "Twilight began, "This cave is too small for a hive and I can't sense any hidden doorways in here either. Which means you were either ostracized by the others, decided to take an extended vacation, or abdicated your position to another Queen. From your reaction, It was the first one."

Chrysalis began to silently cry and asked, "Why are you..?"

Twilight smiled and turned towards Chrysalis, planting a light kiss upon her cheek and said, "I simply feel I should give you a chance."

Author's Note:

*Solaris' Pink Puffy Plot is my response to By Celestia's Beard. And Celestial blood means anypony who can claim to have blood ties to Celestia, Luna, Twilight, and Cadence.

Comments ( 43 )

There's quite a lot of typogrpahical errors. A lot of them are ones that a spellchecker will catch. It really doesn't take long, so it's sort of expected if you want to be taken seriously.

2377621 Thanks for catching that. Unfortunately, the word processor I've got doesn't do a good job of spell checking, so I don't usually know what's wrong til I get it to the site and my browser's spell check catches it. But, I didn't have internet for about a week, so... yeah.

Anyway, I'll go back through and edit it.

2378545 Ping me when it's done, and I'll se if I have an upthumb somewhere in my pockets! :pinkiehappy:

2383268 it should be mostly taken care of now. Let me know if you see anything else.

One that the spellchecker didn't catch.
Evan a freshly -> Even a freshly
Upthumb is in the mail, and should arrive in 2 to 5 business days... oh wait, it's already there.

2385228
lol, thanks ^_^ I'm glad you liked it

It does seem a little rushed, but it's not bad. Everyone is capable of redemption.

2389008
I agree. And it is a little rushed. But then again, most one-shots I've read are.

I like it. Call me greedy though, I would like to see more. :twilightsheepish:

2392368
I may write more for it, but this little one shot was what popped into my head while in the middle of a writers block for my other story.... Just can't seem to figure out how to continue that story along, y'know? And until I do figure that out, I don't think starting up a whole new story is a good idea.

Short and sweet. I liked it.

>>Alert! Plot Hole Detected!<<
How does Twilight know Chrysalis's name? She never told anyone what it was, and considering their level of intelligence, the changelings are unlikely to have told anyone either.

Also, you failed to capitalize the start of Twilight's name a few times in there.

2399256
I'm assuming that Celestia and Luna either knew Chrysalis personally once upon a time, or at least knew OF Chrysalis and they told Twilight what they knew about her.

And thanks for noticing the mistakes with Twilight's name.

that ending feels more like a cliff hanger than an ending but maybe thats just me wanting a continuation

2403603
I thought about continuing it, honestly. but if I do so, it'll have to be after I finish my other story. This was meant to be a one-shot, though, so it'll definitely be a whole new story.

I am whelmed. That is all.

2403733
I would definitely like to see a continuation of this, maybe add a little more depth into Chrysalis's banishment (or however you may word it),
and possibly some kind of psychological dilemma in which she is unsure of whether or not she can feel love or only take it (fairly bandwagony, but I still like the concept). Or you could have Twilight ask her about it as a culminating point. "Can changelings... Feel love?" That sort of thing.

JUST THROWING IDEAS AT YOUR FACE, BECAUSE I THOUGHT THIS STORY WAS NEAT.

4.9/5. I can't give it a five because It has not been continued yet. I hope that this is rectified soon, and thank you for flyin-wait, no. nevermind. Good story though, regardless of my shenanigans.

:eeyup:

too bad it's finished I would've liked to see more.:twilightsmile:

2682297
I might be making a sequel. *shrug* I haven't entirely decided just yet.

2682400

Skip to 1:00:twilightsmile: and that explains my joy as to the possibility of a sequel to this lovely piece.

this would be a great story to have a sequel to maybe having chrysalis redeeming herself in front of the other princesses and having her and twilight develop a relationship of sorts who know the possibilities for sequels are endless as long as you have the imagination for them

2771853
I was planning on a sequel, but I wanted to get further along in my other stories before I did. I'm thinking 2 active stories is more than enough to work with at the moment.

2771864 yeah it is there are others that have 3 or more active stories their writing

2771881
Hey, if the author in question can handle it, good for them :twilightsmile:
Personally, I'd rather not bite off more than I can chew. I also don't want to disappoint anyone by making them wait any longer for an update than necessary.

2771891 very true and i understand what your saying ive had so many ideas about stories to write but i never really started any of them and some of them include my fan character being the son of either Celestia, Luna, Twilight, or a combination of the three and some of them are stories about an H.I.E and starting a heard with the mane six possibly chrysalis and maybe even the princesses

2772044
Sounds like some fun ideas :twilightsmile:
I'd suggest writing out an outline of what you want to do with the story first, if you were going to write something. Get your ideas out of your head and you'll be able to sort them out a bit easier.

2772065 thx for the advise ill do that soon enough but most of the time i get those ideas is when im going to sleep and during private moments around my house (not going into any more detail on that)

2772106
lol, it's fine. I'm not going to pry. And no problem. Anything I can do to help out a fellow fan of the series :scootangel:

2772134 thx oh and i got a question when i actually get to writing them do you wanna be my editor?

One thing, one thousand word one shots do not give this shipping justice. They need to be spread out.

3476439
I'm planning on writing up a sequel sometime after I get one of my other stories finished. But, it's been hard going with random bouts of writer's block hitting every couple of chapters or so...

Honestly. This is a good ship. However. You could make this great by making a legit story out of it. Plz. Do that. There's not many chrysalisxtwilight ships out there. That's my favorite after sombraxtwilight and nightmarextwilight.

3476726
We heavily agree with the Compatriot reader's below, this is an excellent START for a ship.
We would love to see either a sequel or maybe change the staus of this story to incomplete and make a true good story out of it.

I love this story and would humbly request more. Please sir. Can I have some more? :scootangel:

oh i loved it is there another chpter or another story to this jucy lil tale. :twilightsmile: in the works i mean

4803289
At the moment, no, unfortunately... I do have plans to continue this story at some point, but I have some stuff to work through IRL first.

4804287 well best of luck to u then and keep up the good work u do. :raritystarry:

This is a good little story but I would like more:twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::heart::heart::heart:

And Celestial blood means anypony who can claim to have blood ties to Celestia, Luna, Twilight, and Cadence.

So if Shining (blood-sibling to Twilight) and Cadence have a child, the nobles are dramatically outclassed? Take that, Blueblood!

Short and sweet. Always happy to find more stuff where Chryssie finds friendship and/or love.

Cya
Raziel-chan

I wouldn’t really tag it “romance”, but it was a good read, I don’t care.

Late to the party as always, but have some love and a fav. I don't care for or against any ship, but I do think the story was charming and well written. Thanks for sharing it. :twilightsmile:

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