This story is a sequel to Love's Light: The Dragon Wars: A Window to the Past
Sequel not needed to Read before hand.
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Twilight has been an Alicorn for 86 years.
Her life was perfect until 6 years ago.
6 years ago Twilight's life broke.
Distancing herself from everypony, including the princesses
Only one pony can help her through this descent she's
thrown herself into.
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After seeing the Season 3 Finale. I started thinking about what
would happen to Twilight after her friends had died. With that thought
was born this story.
Season 4 did NOT happen for this stories timeline.
Every chapter after the prologue will be set in first person. After the Chapter title will be the Pony's PoV.
I found this Cover Art on Google. I do not take Credit for it.
I hope you all enjoy this Story.
Edited by devas Prologue, Chapter 1-4
Edited by Tschloken Chapter 5 and beyond
Thanks for All the work your doing!
how depresing..... well uh people do have a nak for making happy things depresing not that its a bad thing....for some people
2560737 I hope that this "depressing" was good for you and that you liked it
Not bad for a Prologue set-up, I suppose.
Though I am curious to the reasoning of keeping Fluttershy so un-named as Princess Twilight's spouse?
2560757 Suspense? lol
2560770...
The absence of mentioning Fluttershy makes it rather glaringly obvious, from a literary standpoint as well as by simple process of elimination.
Not trying to put your story down before it has actually begun, just pointing out the 1/6th literary "pothole" (which is generally far better than a 1/6th plot-hole] in a story) you have created there.
I will reserve actual critique &/or judgment until more of your story is out (assuming I remember to look
).
i did not dislike it it but its not liked ether its realy good story tho hope to see what other storys your capable of writing
2561126 I do have my first fic I wrote "Unlikely Love of Ages Past" its not complate yet... also a Romance
I hope to see more soon. This was sad and I knew it had to be AJ Or Fluttershy.
2562358 Will be more soon... maybe a week or 2... only started writing the next chap last night
Why did Rarity had to die in pain?
Do you hate her?
interesting, I guess it fits kind of..... but not really much to say about it
i'm out
2565383 For the letters i just thought of something that would fit each pony.. Rarity actually my fav of the mane six
Dude, there's a bunch of typos right in the fic's description.
That....really, really, really doesn't bode well :-/
I saw in your author's note that you have a pre-reader and an editor....I spotted another couple of mistakes throughout this chapter....
...are you sure they're doing a good job?
and please reread this chapter, slowly and carefully, just...you know, to be sure everything's where it's supposed to be.
2567581 my Pre-reader is for story aspect not corrections and my Editor is new... and im not that good at grammer myself
I would love more help if i can get it.
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I guess if you want I could hop in as an additional pre reader for grammar and style...
with the caveat that considering I'm in University, and I have very little free time I would only be able to give you back any corrections after a couple of days.
If you would like, i could be a pre-reader, i'm rather open- minded about these sort of stories and i'm always looking for something that doesn't go with the flow. I could also be an editor if you would like, even though i'm in collage i have a lot of free time and i'm in need of something to do. Just throwing that out there
really emotional i allmost cryed
nice written and the storry is (that far) solid
2581770 Thanks for the comment and hope you will continue to read
Touching and supremely heartfelt.
Well done. 
2607421 not done yet ^^ wait till the story truely starts ^^ hope you enjoy it
Any more to edit yet?
2608546 Of that I have little doubt.
I didn't see fluttershy yet... that means she still alive right?
2565383 YES! Lol, no. Whaddyu think?
2716230 I actually do not hate Rarity... shes my fav of the mane six
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I'm thinking Fluttershy was her wife.
New chapter! Wooo!
Note: You switch tenses a few times in this chapter. Most of the time you're in past tense, but at a couple places you used present tense, like "....waited until the guards HAVE left..."
2717792 Sorry i have not responded sooner... been working on the next chapter of this and my other story
Forgive me for my mistakes.. this is the first time i've ever written in first person... but I thought it would work better for this story
Great story. Can't wait for more
2751437 glad you like it... im working on the next chapter atm
Oh Celestia that first chapter...I almost didn't make it through it was so sad. Tears in my eyes right now man. This is extremely well written and I can't wait to see where this goes. Consider it approved from Twilight's Library
2754055 Thank you for the Aproval... and i hope you continue to read it...
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I will. Forgot to fav and like. Will do now
2754074 Thank you very much
I didn't think to ask before but ... CadyLight? ...
2754680 Yep... though most know it as TwiDance
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Don't take this the wrong way .. but ...
Have an internet hug .. from Fluttershy ...
2754699 And you can have a shining
Rarity ^^
MY god the feels!
I cried a little bit... *wipes away tear*
2777591 Thats what im hopping for... to show everypony what Twilight is feeling
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So sad right now.
not trying to be mean, I can see twilight ending it all.
Just one simple thing can end it all....
2777606 tbh... thats kinda the effect i was hopping for
Dem feels, dood.
2777948 hope you liked it
2777970 I liked it quiet a bit; looking forward to more, dood.
2777975 Im glad you liked it ^^ cause I like some of your storys to
so were is spike?
2778220 that you will find out later
Sadness.