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corvusbray


I'm a rising author that has taken an interest in MLP stories. I find it difficult to write without a story being realistic in personalities.

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This is a short story, and there WILL NOT be a sequal. I've seen one too many stories die from a demanded sequal. No ifs ands or buts.

Understandable. BTW, sequel.

Comment posted by corvusbray deleted May 29th, 2014

Yes... YES!

There is nowhere near enough Chrysalight (is that what it's called?)

Very lovely. The only thing I dislike about it is the use of present tense, but that's just my opinion :)

You got a point for ruined stories from a demanded sequel. Also, nice Chrysalis x Twilight (don't know what else to call it) story...although I never expected one. It surprised me you would even pair them together, but you make it worth it.

4463471 Chrissy X Twilight is my favorite ship, aside from Octavia and Vinyl. :raritystarry:
4463188 Trust me, I had that reviewed about 4-5 times to make it one tense.:twilightblush:

4463137 Haha, did you read Dragon of the East... I could have sworn I saw you commenting, or was it Dawn Shield...:derpytongue2:

4465701 No, I haven't read either of those stories.

4465734 I remember seeing you comment in... Shards of Hatred?

I have commented on 'In Service of the Princess'? I never read 'Shards of Hatred'.

4465756 Oh, that one... Shards of Hatred was good... I just remember seeing you in comments. sorry. :twilightblush:

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I thank you for that. you have the artist's name?

5347981 i don't sorry couldn't find it
also sorry this took so long i tried to find it

I don't see anything what give comedy tag place here its clearly romance/slice of life

5445470 The randomness of it, and the tones of everypony. i just got a comedic view from it.

Wait, it says she's a unicorn at the end but the begging says she's an alicorn. I'm just going to assume the ending is a typo.

4465701 wow thats a crazy lycan pic of Octavia ur useing for ur avatar where did u find that at?

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I don't remember.

I know you said no sequel but is there a story that goes before this? It feels a bit like it starts in the middle of things.

Why has Twilight lived alone a year? How did she and Chrysalis become friends?

7173309 Now that, is a good question. Mainly why I said no sequal, or prequal, is because I'm afraid I might ruin the story.

“That’s awesome Twilight,” Chrysalis says in a bubbly voice.

Hmm.... How radical.

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yup. it was only meant to be a one time thing. A few wanted a sequel but, it did not feel right.

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