Twilight Sparkle has lived alone for a good year now, and a special friend is coming to visit.
I'm a rising author that has taken an interest in MLP stories. I find it difficult to write without a story being realistic in personalities.
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Understandable. BTW, sequel.
Yes... YES!
There is nowhere near enough Chrysalight (is that what it's called?)
Very lovely. The only thing I dislike about it is the use of present tense, but that's just my opinion :)
You got a point for ruined stories from a demanded sequel. Also, nice Chrysalis x Twilight (don't know what else to call it) story...although I never expected one. It surprised me you would even pair them together, but you make it worth it.
4463471 Chrissy X Twilight is my favorite ship, aside from Octavia and Vinyl.
4463188 Trust me, I had that reviewed about 4-5 times to make it one tense.
4463137 Haha, did you read Dragon of the East... I could have sworn I saw you commenting, or was it Dawn Shield...
4465701 No, I haven't read either of those stories.
4465734 I remember seeing you comment in... Shards of Hatred?
I have commented on 'In Service of the Princess'? I never read 'Shards of Hatred'.
4465756 Oh, that one... Shards of Hatred was good... I just remember seeing you in comments. sorry.
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don't know if you still wanted a better cover image but this one feels more appropriate
(maybe erase the lettering)
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I thank you for that. you have the artist's name?
5347981 i don't sorry couldn't find it
also sorry this took so long i tried to find it
I don't see anything what give comedy tag place here its clearly romance/slice of life
5445470 The randomness of it, and the tones of everypony. i just got a comedic view from it.
Wait, it says she's a unicorn at the end but the begging says she's an alicorn. I'm just going to assume the ending is a typo.
4465701 wow thats a crazy lycan pic of Octavia ur useing for ur avatar where did u find that at?
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I don't remember.
I know you said no sequel but is there a story that goes before this? It feels a bit like it starts in the middle of things.
Why has Twilight lived alone a year? How did she and Chrysalis become friends?
7173309 Now that, is a good question. Mainly why I said no sequal, or prequal, is because I'm afraid I might ruin the story.
Hmm.... How radical.
2014
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yup. it was only meant to be a one time thing. A few wanted a sequel but, it did not feel right.