Twilight decides to confront Luna over her ascension after a night of stargazing and her ability to fufill her role as the new princess of Equestria considering the large hoovesteps she is following. While Twilight has always been aware of Nightmare Moon, Luna points out some parts of history that the world has forgotten but she has not. As Twilight learns, not everything came as easy to the Celestial sisters as the history books claim. In the end everything always starts out as a learning curve.
A shortTwiLuna one shot I wanted to do to see how I would do with romance ( which I normally do not write at least not fuzzy one shot romance). Criticism is appreciated again.
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This Is Relly Good For Firts Fic Of Romace.
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A really nice a sweet story with room for possible expansion at a later date if you see fit.
Tho i fail to see the need for the sex tag sense there where no actually sexual content in it.
Unless my sleep deprived mind ignored it but i'm pretty sure it only where suggestive at most.
2999263 Eh just added it because of the light teasing is all. More of a precaution than anything else.
2998504 Well thanks.
Thank you for submitting your story to the Twiluna group!
2999440 It was a pleasure to do so.
Very nice for a first attempt. Don't sell yourself to short you write great Twiluna Scenes.
3001056 Thanks
Romance is a real unknown territory for me but I only did it because of my love of TwiLuna. Good to know I didn't make a right old bags of it. 
There's no such thing as too much TwiLuna, especially when it's readable and well-done, which this is. Good show!
TwiLuna? Yes, please.
3116832 Jeez thanks
I was actually terrified when I released this. Your comment makes this all the worthwhile!
A decent story, and I love the angle you took with it.
The problem here is your grammar. I would recommend getting someone to look over this and fix your mistakes, as it is the biggest thing holding this story back.
3125692 Yeah. As I usually say I'm a lazy editor of my work and tend to make sloppy mistakes. I should probably get around to getting an editor or something
this was a really interesting story. My only problem I found was the poor grammar and the joke about Faust breaking the 4th wall. but other than that was really well paced and fun to read.
3470109 Thanks for the comment ! Glad you liked it despite its flaws. I've been meaning to go back over this for a while now in order to fix the grammar and other mistakes. Thanks anyway for the critical comment. As said it's greatly appreciated!
Should it be "a lot about"?
4736811 Thanks again.
Part of the problem w government is pretty simple. Any historian will tell you it takes a minimum of 50 - 100 years perspective to evaluate anything & understand its significance. That means it is impossible to know what is going on now, there is now way to tell what (in a century) will look like a good decision from a bad one.
For instance, I've read that Roosevelt was so easy on Stalin because he thought the USSR would collapse within 5 years of the end of the war. Therefore, it didn't matter that he gave them Eastern Europe because when they collapsed Europe would be freed without firing a shot. He was dead right -just blew the timing by 40 years is all.
Or look at Iraq. I was sooo pissed off at Bush I for pulling out before the job was done. 10 years later Bush the Sequel showed just how smart a decision that was.
So, the princesses do their best. But, since they are not omniscient, Twilight better get used to things blowing up in her face.
Sweet and romantic and well crafted as a story.