Trashy the Trashman
Joined 24th Jan, 2013 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- LightStriker · 9.7k words · 249 9 · 7.1k views
- KitsuneRisu · 16k words · 268 12 · 4.4k views
- ShotgunNeko · 3.5k words · 222 8 · 8.6k views
- Starlitomega · 16k words · 319 9 · 8.6k views
- Twilight-the-Pony · 8.4k words · 286 20 · 5.2k views
- Flutterguy89 · 2.6k words · 179 6 · 4.7k views
- WellKPony · 3.1k words · 76 3 · 3.5k views
- TheOldPonyFromScene24 · 2.8k words · 230 10 · 8.2k views
Stats
Page generated in 0.306 seconds
Total duration
931 users online
1,633,097 hits today, 2,591,549 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
why is this downvoted
Really? Two dislikes? I mean, yeah, this story has been done many times, but this one was still excellently written.
2290738
Thank you! Yeah, I admit that the basic premise is a bit overdone, but I'm still hesitant to attempt anything too original before I try out a few fics first. Glad to hear you liked it, though!
2290692
Seems to have gone up from a rocky start. Maybe people were put off by the pairing or the word count or something? I dunno.
Wow. Can't believe this story has 2 down votes. I loved it. Excellent read, Mr. Author!
Faved and liked!
2290933
Thanks, I really appreciate it!
Sweetie Belle had to reminded
I think you meant "Sweetie Belle had to be reminded"
i found another awesome RariJack story to add to my collection, thank you for making such a lovely story :D
Masterful.
But I do not understand the downvotes. Every ship is best ship so long as the emotions and characterisation is heartfelt and true
2292697
Wow, "masterful"? Thank you! It took quite a while to write, but I'm glad people like the finished product!
2292033
Hey, no problem! Happy to hear you liked it!
2291785
Ah, shoot. Thanks for catching that!
Yeah, if I proofread it it usually will fair pretty good, of course your writing is pretty damn impressive. As for anything, as I promised I will leave my final verdict.
Final Verdict: Damn sexy, best thing to read while fucking a bass.
once again i don't see why this got downvotes. the grammar is good the story may be over done but who cares its still a good story.
Marvelous job; heartfelt and well written. It also explored a trait of Applejack's character that I've never seen before in fic, not to mention Rarity's as well.
Excellent work
Love these kinds of stories. I'm a bit of a romantic. So it fits well
My dear sir... This is quite good. Have a favorite. And a thumbs up. And a follow. I'll be looking forward to more!
Awww theres 69 likes...
I bucking love this!!!
That was awesome. Sweet, sexy, romantic, and hot. A proud addition to the "Hot" category of the Properly Organized Rarijack Group.
2320814
Thank you! Took a bit longer than I'd anticipated to write, so I'm glad the finished product was worth it!
2321587
Wow, really? Thanks so much! I was concerned it might be a bit too, uh, "shippy", but it seems like my fears were unfounded. Thanks again!
2321808 It's never too "shippy" to a fan. :D I like well-written Rarijack, sexy or not. The shippiness keeps it from being straight-up clop.
2321816
Oh, of course! I guess I meant it more along the lines of "I'm new to writing fics and was worried I wouldn't portray the ship particularly well". Thankfully, everyone seems to think otherwise, which is awesome!
How you wrote down this story
Is quite moving,I mostly like how you detail the story
And there confessed desires for one another.
I was taking aback when dear'ol sweet Rarity was on top.
Hey one thing to say...uh can you...not to put the word "fucked" or "fuck"
Say "Runt." To me it sounds clean right?
Wow, this has to be one of the best Rarijack clop-fics I have ever read. The characters are pretty spot-on and you made the clop emotional and meaningful to the story. It cleverly tied the reason why Applejack came down to Rarity's Boutique to the reason why Rarity loves Applejack. Overall, I love this story and it deserves more love
Thank you for writing this wonderful story; this is clearly a work of Rarijack art
2339936
Hey, thank you, I really appreciate the feedback and support!
Actually, this fic started out without much emphasis on character or plot-- basically just a straight clopfic, really. But as I continued I found myself enjoying the interaction between the two so much, I ended up rewriting almost the entire thing. I think it was worth it, though!
Thanks again!
2340441
This was a very brilliant rewrite then
Thank you again for the awesome Rarijack story, can't wait to see what you write next.
I don't know why its downvoted, but another thumbs up can't hurt it.
Way to go
This. Was. Awesome. Seriously, both characters felt spot-on. Rarity's dialogue in particular was perfect. None of it felt rushed, the pacing was spot-on, and the sex scene actually felt pretty original in how it was presented.
If there was one thing I found distracting, it was the formatting. Indentation's all well and good, but please put a line-space between paragraphs, because it's so much easier on the eye that way, and stops it from feeling like a wall of text.
That said though, it didn't detract from the actual story because the actual story was so damn good. I take my hat off, good sir!
Achievement Unlocked: DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAWWWWAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWIOPJaw;ohgaolj[PJO:FW:pp::Opkpo;p]-[e09[095-038509-3t0pw-otk'[pgk
'wm[ --]
\
}fp]
e=-rpa0w-rawpfoadf;lkaef';fkeafew images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/29800000/It-s-over-9000-its-over-9000-29849302-496-370.jpg
Yes. That's all I have to say. Just... yes xD Excellent.
I have not commented on this story? THAT MUST BE FIXED.
You, my good man, are a spectacular writer. Hands down, this is one of my most favoritest fanfics on this site, and lemme tell you, that's not an easy feat.
So here, have some mustaches too.
This sir is not a clopfic, just being a clopfic implies it's a "Hello, i like you, lets do it" wtriteup, whereas this, well this is a sweet little romance that simply has two ponies expressing the fullness of their care for one another. Beautifully written plot and you've captured their personalities perfectly.
This is going to be one of the very few fics where i give full pinkiesmile ratings to.
What words do I have to convey my delight and awe at this? None.
What you have wrote here is something that caught me off guard. This is not the classic, straight up two character just boinking away, no. You wrote this in a manner that made it sweet. And the way you write made it all the more sweeter, detail after subtle detail. Ah yes, the word I was looking for(while sifting thru the previous comments) is Romantic. You made it sweetly romantic, yes. So thus, I giveth thee 6 out of 5. . .
a really nice piece of romance
They're lucky that dildo didn't break…
Really good story, I loved every part of it.
10 out of 10 would recommend.
I'm going to start on my 3rd read through of this in the past 2 days.
I just feel...at home when I read it. It's a masterpiece of fanfiction.
3570011 "My daddy makes me put glass in my vagina."
Seriously the second best clopfic I ever read.
Seriously this was one of the best clopfics I've ever read. I'll be reading this again soon....
>> Thread Necromancer
Read comment an hour ago. Still crying
Mind goes to one man one jar
And people say AJ and Rarity doesn't work? Ha! Fools!!! Great story. Totally going in my favorites